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Really looking forward too more ‼️‼️‼️‼️‼️‼️‼️‼️‼️‼️‼️‼️‼️‼️‼️‼️‼️‼️‼️‼️‼️‼️‼️‼️‼️‼️‼️‼️‼️‼️‼️‼️‼️‼️‼️‼️‼️‼️‼️‼️‼️‼️‼️‼️‼️‼️‼️‼️‼️‼️‼️‼️‼️‼️
I don't have a lot to say just you need to improve your writing quality...............Σ>―(〃°ω°〃)♡→Σ>―(〃°ω°〃)♡→Σ>―(〃°ω°〃)♡→Σ>―(〃°ω°〃)♡→Σ>―(〃°ω°〃)♡→Σ>―(〃°ω°〃)♡→Σ>―(〃°ω°〃)♡→Σ>―(〃°ω°〃)♡→
Apparently you, just like many authors, have a problem with mixing he and she. So, he - his are used by males and she - her by females. Just give a double check when writing it.
I hope you make a good story..............................................🙂🙂🙂🙂🙂🙂🙂🙂🙂🙂🙂🙂🙂🙂🙂🙂🙂🙂🙂🙂🙂🙂🙂🙂🙂🙂🙂🙂🙂🙂🙂🙂🙂🙂🙂🙂🙂🙂🙂🙂🙂🙂🙂🙂🙂🙂🙂🙂🙂🙂🙂🙂🙂🙂🙂🙂🙂🙂🙂🙂🙂🙂🙂🙂🙂🙂🙂🙂🙂🙂🙂🙂🙂🙂🙂🙂🙂🙂🙂🙂
Revelar spoiler
Well....there's a lot of potential in this fanfic. .I've read a similar fanfic before but the difference is this one has gamer system. .. I like to see he become a hero and what can his quirk do. .. Other than heal, maybe he can make a armor from light to increase his stat temporary or may be he can absorb light and make a rune in his body that look like divine enlightment. . .
SUPERRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRR With the system the gamer possibility to evolve with a new pair of wings or even up to gods 😇😇😇😇 🇫🇷🇫🇷🇫🇷🇫🇷🇫🇷🇫🇷🇫🇷🇫🇷🇫🇷🇫🇷🇫🇷🇫🇷🇫🇷🇫🇷🇫🇷🇫🇷🇫🇷🇫🇷🇫🇷🇫🇷🇫🇷🇫🇷🇫🇷🇫🇷🇫🇷🇫🇷 SUPERRRRRRRRRRRRRERRRRRR Avec le system the gamer possibiliter d'evoluer avec une nouvel paire d'aile voire meme jusqu'a dieux 😇😇😇😇
Really looking forward too more ‼️‼️‼️‼️‼️‼️‼️‼️‼️‼️‼️‼️‼️‼️‼️‼️‼️‼️‼️‼️‼️‼️‼️‼️‼️‼️‼️‼️‼️‼️‼️‼️‼️‼️‼️‼️‼️‼️‼️‼️‼️‼️‼️‼️‼️‼️‼️‼️‼️‼️‼️‼️‼️‼️
I don't have a lot to say just you need to improve your writing quality...............Σ>―(〃°ω°〃)♡→Σ>―(〃°ω°〃)♡→Σ>―(〃°ω°〃)♡→Σ>―(〃°ω°〃)♡→Σ>―(〃°ω°〃)♡→Σ>―(〃°ω°〃)♡→Σ>―(〃°ω°〃)♡→Σ>―(〃°ω°〃)♡→
Apparently you, just like many authors, have a problem with mixing he and she. So, he - his are used by males and she - her by females. Just give a double check when writing it.
I hope you make a good story..............................................🙂🙂🙂🙂🙂🙂🙂🙂🙂🙂🙂🙂🙂🙂🙂🙂🙂🙂🙂🙂🙂🙂🙂🙂🙂🙂🙂🙂🙂🙂🙂🙂🙂🙂🙂🙂🙂🙂🙂🙂🙂🙂🙂🙂🙂🙂🙂🙂🙂🙂🙂🙂🙂🙂🙂🙂🙂🙂🙂🙂🙂🙂🙂🙂🙂🙂🙂🙂🙂🙂🙂🙂🙂🙂🙂🙂🙂🙂🙂🙂
Revelar spoiler
Well....there's a lot of potential in this fanfic. .I've read a similar fanfic before but the difference is this one has gamer system. .. I like to see he become a hero and what can his quirk do. .. Other than heal, maybe he can make a armor from light to increase his stat temporary or may be he can absorb light and make a rune in his body that look like divine enlightment. . .