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This is the story of Nion, the Saiyan who became the greatest warrior of the Multiverse.
Nion was and is the greatest scientist, dimension traveler, Universe traveler, time traveler, Hero, Villian, and many other things of the Omniverse. The most important is Warrior though because he believed and still holds himself a warrior in his heart.
However, No one knows that this warrior used to be an ordinary human on earth until one day...
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I originally didn't want to review this since only 18 chapters are out but I feel like doing it for several reasons. 1. The Author did a good job of explaining the science parts and I liked that very much. He took the laws of physic into consideration in various situations which I haven't seen anyone do in any fanfic yet to this degree; He made the crazy theories make sense somehow... Very Creative and original. Respect. 2. The Idea of an Immortal Saiyan was one that I had a long time ago and he actually did it. I really liked that and wanted to read a story like this. My wish has come true. 3. The MC is likable and I can relate and would do most things the same way if I was in his place, I think at least. Now for the rating: Writing Quality: Good. Stability of updates: Chaotic but good. He released 4 chapters in 1 day... Story Development: Good, I sense something is brewing up behind the scenes despite the ordinary progress. He obviously has a plan in mind for the story. I liked 'one sword to rule them all' so I am expecting a good plot, don't let me down, Author. Character Design: The MC is a combination of a Scientist, warrior, and traveler. Based on my understanding, The MC is heading in this direction; Nion is a scientist because he likes researching knowledge and science and is a loner; He is a warrior because he doesn't have any fear and fights for what he wants; He is a traveler because he has a free spirit and wants to wonder the Omniverse and have adventures. World Background: A fanfiction so this part is not necessary since the world is already built. The Author promised a plot on an Omniversal scale based on his Review so I give a 5-star. To the Author I say this, Don't drop or I will come and kill you. We deserve decent fanfic with some rational science in it like this. I hope you don't end it like 'one sword to rule them all'. Don't listen to haters, they are a bunch of jealous people. Do your own thing.
I usually don't write reviews, but since this story is still new and has impressed me enough, I decided to write one. In addition, I wrote this review to help keep motivation for the author and give it more good press. I have wrote a story (Dropped As of Now) and wished to have more reviews stating something, so this review is not only for the readers, but the author as well. First, I have read many fanfics, ranging from a variety of topics, and this story is very well written. The grammar and proper use of punctuations makes reading this story a pleasant experience, compared to other stories whose premise was promising, but the writing quality makes it horrible to read. Since this story is still new, as of right now, I decided to put a 5 star rating on the stability of updates for now. The idea behind the story so far has got me interested, and am hoping for more chapters. To the author, you have a great way of telling the story and I only hope that you can continue with the great quality. As of right now, I having nothing to bash.
This story is bad, the oc is a selfish person that no one is related to and the story just bad overall, there no adventure, nothing new about the universe he is in, just putting dialogue in conversation, not funny, not interesting at all. this story is bad, very bad
Honestly it was a really good story, you had a very good writing flow, not scared to change canon, grammar was good ( English is not my language so I'm not the better judge ) it was original and you didn't use the copy paste method some use. I was excited to see what would happen in the Lucifer universe but well.. I wrote a a fanfic too and I wasn't particularly affected by the comments because I don't care, I write when I want and what I want and just post it. The problem is that on this platform most of the persons who comment don't give constructive criticism, they think because they like a story they have a right over the direction it take but they don't, a well intended suggestion isn't harmful but when it's agressive and repeated numerous times it become annoying really fast. I wish you luck in your endeavors, I hope you won't lose your drive the write because of negative comments, seriously you can be pride of your work compared to some of the Fanfic, even the popular one ^^ Bye.
Not gonna lie, this Novel Rocks! It has everything we, the common folk, need. It has a more than average grammar compared to the Normal Fanfic's here but then again, I live in Germany and only learned English in school. Also, I love the Mc and just about everything. thx Author for this masterpeace
This is for my exp and nothing else i can assure you 100% that this has nothing to do with the story kejdn dmsjdjdmsmmxifnrmdkdkkd Bjjdnsnsmmk
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I am waiting when he will get stronger than present himself then what will happen.. .......... .. thanos.... ................................
The main character is very likable and so far the plot is fun. The writing quality is really good, a few errors here and there but definitely nothing to objectionable. This is a story that definitely makes me look forward to what comes next. You should definitely give it a try if you want to spend some time with a fun read.
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I really like this story. Hope you add more chapters. Nothing more to say. I really like this story. Hope you add more chapters. Nothing more to say.
I haven’t read it but I just wanted to share my support for you. people are rude and disruptive and the fact that you even did as much as you did is amazing 👍 have a good life you amazing person
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Hello, This story's focus is the Omniverse and traveling various worlds and universes as a Warrior/Traveler/Scientist and becoming the ultimate being. So we won't remain in many of the universes for long. Except for the core ones that will become bases. Each one of the three is an aspect of the ultimate one, Omnipotence=Warrior/Omnipresence=Traveler/Omniscience=Scientist please keep that in mind. If you see some small mistakes, keep in mind that we are in each universe for a reason, and move on eventually. The plot is Original(mostly) and I promise it will interesting to you all. This is not a wish-fulfillment for power but more of a 'How can a being become ultimate in serious fanfic with a super genius MC with his own flaws that eventually surpasses all.'. This means it is not a crackfic with gods randomly giving wishes and such, there is a reason for everything happening(Even the threat of insanity in the beginning chapters are not as simple as they seem). Also, the MC is not some chosen hero or fanboy; He stands up to become the ultimate one himself. No great luck or anything... If you don't like the MC at the beginning then know this, there will be major Character development and changes after 50-60 chapters in. There will be a small Harem with no more than 3 members. But the first love interest will appear 30-50 chapters in. I will try to write as Realistic as I can but you can expect very small plot-holes since there are a lot of crossovers which will get complicated even for me... The Science of this story will give you many interesting ideas even if it gets a little complicated later on. The Nerds will definitely like it. The other's can just skip those parts but since it is a big part of the story(1/3) I suggest you read it. Let's hope I get to finish this. I am really excited to write this. Ask me anything here and I will answer. (No Spoilers, thank you.)