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Well written . Good character design . Hope this story doesn’t get dropped like many others. 👍🏽👍🏽👍🏽👍🏽👍🏽👍🏽👍🏽👍🏽👍🏽👍🏽👍🏽👍🏽
Author deleted my review about the mc trying to r*pe a girl and his first instinct is to start finger blasting her while she’s dead.... way to delete the review lol
Total trash pretty much sums this story up. Writing is terrible. The mc is an idiot Save time and dont even try to read this. I have no idea what the 5 star raters were smoking but they were full of bs.
This book keeps getting better and better I can’t stop reading it so please keep writing this book and please write the next chapters soon so I’ll be able to read it 🙏📖🙏📖🙏
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MC tries to be friendly with a sith, this dude assaults a chick he thought was dead,,,,behaves like an idiot and stays close to a sith women instead of running away...a retarded MC is trash........... like english and all that **** is decent but this retarded MC is trash
5 star because star wars and system ..........................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................
Shameless Author here to tell you that I don't know how long this will go on for, it might be 20 chapters or even 200, or maybe this doesn't get the attention I hope it does and won't take off past chapter 10 before it's a Drop, but for now I want to make this a full novel with at least 150 chaps
..........................................................................................................................................................................................good story
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Revelar spoiler Well written . Good character design . Hope this story doesn’t get dropped like many others. 👍🏽👍🏽👍🏽👍🏽👍🏽👍🏽👍🏽👍🏽👍🏽👍🏽👍🏽👍🏽
Author deleted my review about the mc trying to r*pe a girl and his first instinct is to start finger blasting her while she’s dead.... way to delete the review lol
Total trash pretty much sums this story up. Writing is terrible. The mc is an idiot Save time and dont even try to read this. I have no idea what the 5 star raters were smoking but they were full of bs.
This book keeps getting better and better I can’t stop reading it so please keep writing this book and please write the next chapters soon so I’ll be able to read it 🙏📖🙏📖🙏
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MC tries to be friendly with a sith, this dude assaults a chick he thought was dead,,,,behaves like an idiot and stays close to a sith women instead of running away...a retarded MC is trash........... like english and all that **** is decent but this retarded MC is trash
5 star because star wars and system ..........................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................
Shameless Author here to tell you that I don't know how long this will go on for, it might be 20 chapters or even 200, or maybe this doesn't get the attention I hope it does and won't take off past chapter 10 before it's a Drop, but for now I want to make this a full novel with at least 150 chaps