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Ugly NTR loving author and his sick fetishes.........................people I hate the most those who write ntr and don't put a tag on it...................
not gone lie dis good ik it been a long time but since you stopped it can I get the rest of it or is there a link it's really good kukuku...
this is just a writer who has a similar experience in his real life and tries to share his suffering with others for his inability to maintain his partner hahahahah trash
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You have really got no imagination to do a bit of footwork and make an original from another's great work? I get that you have plans but maybe spill the beans on some of the more worrying points for some people so they don't slander and criticize you for not knowing your path. Hope you get the point
Don't let people make you down. You are doing a good job. Although i would like a more faster chapter update. Fuck NTR haters, its a fan fic because we can change the story however we want, thats why its a fan fic..... I love your work. Keep it up. Haters gonna hate, just ignore them
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Very nice novel An essential in any library of feelings at the height of the greatest. A book with a large central die-cut especially if we want to address the understanding of emotions and feelings.
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There is ntr in this and author justify it the man doesnt **** with irene but he let the man marry irene because of the plot. Hahahha i dont wose dumber the mc or the author i guess it the same considering both of them came from the same person and please don’t rebuke my statement saying that you’re first time writer. Just admit it that you have a fantasy on your gf or wife getting ****ed by some men. And please dont said that it is only on the fairy tail arc, if you do ntr in the fairy tail and i m pretty sure the same **** is gonna happen again because of your stupidity to preserve the “plot”. I hope your fantasy is fulfilled.
Bueno, acabo de encontrar está historia, estaba a punto de dejarla al ver las reseñas de que era un NTR, pero me anime ya que a veces la gente mal entiende lo que realmente es, pero sinceramente no es NTR, pero poco falta entiendo tu punto de vista sobre los sacrificios que según tu Irene tuvo que hacer, pero honestamente son estúpidos, en primer lugar, al tener a Sora no era necesaria la Alianza, entiendo que quieres mantenerte con el canon con lo más que puedas, entiendo que algunos autores no pueden crear nuevas ideas, no es un insulto ni nada parecido, yo mismo soy incapaz de crear cualquier cosa, sólo sirvo para leer xb, regresando, a lo que entendí, al inicio pusiste al MC en un pedestal de ser muy fuerte, tan fuerte como el Futuro Acnologia, futuro, es una palabra clave, ya que en esta era sólo es el inicio de Acnologia, cuando era más débil, mucho más débil que en el futuro, desde el inicio se presentó al MC como alguien fuerte, y a lo largo como lo suficientemente fuerte como para matar dragones como hormigas, o con suma facilidad, pero después lo presentas como si tuviese miedo de pelear con Acnologia, no digo que lo tuviese, pero se da a entender, también en ese tiempo Igneel estaba lo suficientemente ocupado como para importarle el MC, Zeref creo que empezó a crear a Natsu, o estaba ocupado con experimentos, tampoco se debería de involucrar con el MC, y sólo deja a Acnologia, lo que para mi hubiese estado mejor, es que si estaría la alianza, pero no como el matrimonio, más una alianza normal, cosa que ya de por sí es innecesaria por la presencia de Sora, que a menos que venga Acnologia con un escuadrón o ejército de dragones no debería de preocupar al MC, ya que Acnologia nunca se uniría a otros dragones, el era conocido por su odio por ellos, y ningún dragon en su sano juicio se uniría a el, o una amenaza nivel Rey, como Igneel, pero aun así no debería de preocuparse, ya que eso no es posible, no se a que enemigos poderosos te refieres, prácticamente el MC ya está en la cima, no totalmente pero ya es un Apex, así que todo lo que escribiste en la historia en mi opinión No tiene sentido.
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ignore what people say about your story author, in my opinion this is a good book. i love how the is story rn and how you r not giving in into them so keep up the good work
just for the fact that the character can't fight against fate without a fucking ability to (break rules) I don't like it but the story is going well so far and its development is fine. something seen only in some fanfic
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Personal opinion it a good story and all these comment of NTR, plz go back and read the dam chapter again, where the **** did it say that irene got ****ed plz tell me, cause I do not see where it say irene was ****ed by someone else, anyways author good luck with the story
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The author is a ntr loving trash. This story is trash and only a moron would read this piece of garbage. The author cuckolds the mc to "preserve" the plot.
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These sad people trust in the first chapter to judge a story. In addition, this is absolutely not NTR, these are just the beginning of the story's introduction. I am well aware that the beginnings are likely similar to the original story but I repeat, these are just the beginnings of fanfiction and this will only be for the Fairy Tail arc. After, each in his opinion, I will not force anyone to love him, I do this for fun but I only find it unfortunate that people trust the first chapters without giving a second chance.
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Perhaps the author is a good person but ..... Fan fiction doesn't read like a tragedy. Read like a cuckold story. He had strength, but he did nothing. Even if he did not have strength, this would not be a cukold’s refutation. A man must fight for his love. A man who allows his girlfriend to sleep with another or to marry another, I cease to be men in the eyes of women and become cuckolds. You even screwed up Irene in your story. A woman who loves will not marry someone else's man. Your excuse is only for cuckolds. you are not thinking correctly about a good relationship. I hope in real life you will not suffer from this. I wish the author all the best. If someone against my thinking is ready for dialogue and explanation.
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NTR trash mc get cucked don’t read....................................... ................................... ..................................
ntr cuckold beta mc. he had the strength but still didn't do anything worthwhile, he let his lover be married to another man, this was a huge disappointment and my day is ruined. He didn't even need to have Irene as a lover if he knew he can't change the plot much and just helped her here and there if he felt pity for her, but no he just had to make Irene his harem member while knowing about the marriage and that he can't change it,
Ugly NTR loving author and his sick fetishes.........................people I hate the most those who write ntr and don't put a tag on it...................
not gone lie dis good ik it been a long time but since you stopped it can I get the rest of it or is there a link it's really good kukuku...
this is just a writer who has a similar experience in his real life and tries to share his suffering with others for his inability to maintain his partner hahahahah trash
read this novel read this novel read this novel read this novel read this novel read this novel read this novel read this novel read this novel read this novel read this novel read this novel read this novel read this novel read this novel read this novel read this novel read this novel read this novel read this novel read this novel read this novel read this novel read this novel read this novel read this novel read this novel read this novel read this novel read this novel read this novel read this novel read this novel read this novel read this novel read this novel
You have really got no imagination to do a bit of footwork and make an original from another's great work? I get that you have plans but maybe spill the beans on some of the more worrying points for some people so they don't slander and criticize you for not knowing your path. Hope you get the point
Don't let people make you down. You are doing a good job. Although i would like a more faster chapter update. Fuck NTR haters, its a fan fic because we can change the story however we want, thats why its a fan fic..... I love your work. Keep it up. Haters gonna hate, just ignore them
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Very nice novel An essential in any library of feelings at the height of the greatest. A book with a large central die-cut especially if we want to address the understanding of emotions and feelings.
Shiit shiit shiit shiit shiit shiit shiit hjx djdj sjdjdj jsjssj jdjddj jdjddj sjsjsj djdjdj djdjdj djdjdj jdjd jdjd jskddn kdf d dxx djdj jdn jjf
There is ntr in this and author justify it the man doesnt **** with irene but he let the man marry irene because of the plot. Hahahha i dont wose dumber the mc or the author i guess it the same considering both of them came from the same person and please don’t rebuke my statement saying that you’re first time writer. Just admit it that you have a fantasy on your gf or wife getting ****ed by some men. And please dont said that it is only on the fairy tail arc, if you do ntr in the fairy tail and i m pretty sure the same **** is gonna happen again because of your stupidity to preserve the “plot”. I hope your fantasy is fulfilled.
Bueno, acabo de encontrar está historia, estaba a punto de dejarla al ver las reseñas de que era un NTR, pero me anime ya que a veces la gente mal entiende lo que realmente es, pero sinceramente no es NTR, pero poco falta entiendo tu punto de vista sobre los sacrificios que según tu Irene tuvo que hacer, pero honestamente son estúpidos, en primer lugar, al tener a Sora no era necesaria la Alianza, entiendo que quieres mantenerte con el canon con lo más que puedas, entiendo que algunos autores no pueden crear nuevas ideas, no es un insulto ni nada parecido, yo mismo soy incapaz de crear cualquier cosa, sólo sirvo para leer xb, regresando, a lo que entendí, al inicio pusiste al MC en un pedestal de ser muy fuerte, tan fuerte como el Futuro Acnologia, futuro, es una palabra clave, ya que en esta era sólo es el inicio de Acnologia, cuando era más débil, mucho más débil que en el futuro, desde el inicio se presentó al MC como alguien fuerte, y a lo largo como lo suficientemente fuerte como para matar dragones como hormigas, o con suma facilidad, pero después lo presentas como si tuviese miedo de pelear con Acnologia, no digo que lo tuviese, pero se da a entender, también en ese tiempo Igneel estaba lo suficientemente ocupado como para importarle el MC, Zeref creo que empezó a crear a Natsu, o estaba ocupado con experimentos, tampoco se debería de involucrar con el MC, y sólo deja a Acnologia, lo que para mi hubiese estado mejor, es que si estaría la alianza, pero no como el matrimonio, más una alianza normal, cosa que ya de por sí es innecesaria por la presencia de Sora, que a menos que venga Acnologia con un escuadrón o ejército de dragones no debería de preocupar al MC, ya que Acnologia nunca se uniría a otros dragones, el era conocido por su odio por ellos, y ningún dragon en su sano juicio se uniría a el, o una amenaza nivel Rey, como Igneel, pero aun así no debería de preocuparse, ya que eso no es posible, no se a que enemigos poderosos te refieres, prácticamente el MC ya está en la cima, no totalmente pero ya es un Apex, así que todo lo que escribiste en la historia en mi opinión No tiene sentido.
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ignore what people say about your story author, in my opinion this is a good book. i love how the is story rn and how you r not giving in into them so keep up the good work
just for the fact that the character can't fight against fate without a fucking ability to (break rules) I don't like it but the story is going well so far and its development is fine. something seen only in some fanfic
Revelar spoiler Personal opinion it a good story and all these comment of NTR, plz go back and read the dam chapter again, where the **** did it say that irene got ****ed plz tell me, cause I do not see where it say irene was ****ed by someone else, anyways author good luck with the story
Good job there author. You just made a lot of haters to this book 👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍3👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍
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The author is a ntr loving trash. This story is trash and only a moron would read this piece of garbage. The author cuckolds the mc to "preserve" the plot.
Revelar spoiler These sad people trust in the first chapter to judge a story. In addition, this is absolutely not NTR, these are just the beginning of the story's introduction. I am well aware that the beginnings are likely similar to the original story but I repeat, these are just the beginnings of fanfiction and this will only be for the Fairy Tail arc. After, each in his opinion, I will not force anyone to love him, I do this for fun but I only find it unfortunate that people trust the first chapters without giving a second chance.
NTR (Netorare)👎👎👎👎👎👎👎👎👎👎👎👎👎👎👎👎👎👎👎👎👎👎👎👎👎👎👎👎👎👎👎👎👎👎👎👎👎👎👎👎👎👎👎👎👎👎👎👎👎👎👎👎👎👎👎👎👎👎👎👎👎👎👎👎👎👎👎👎👎👎👎👎👍👎👎👎👎👎👎👎👎👎👎👎👎
Perhaps the author is a good person but ..... Fan fiction doesn't read like a tragedy. Read like a cuckold story. He had strength, but he did nothing. Even if he did not have strength, this would not be a cukold’s refutation. A man must fight for his love. A man who allows his girlfriend to sleep with another or to marry another, I cease to be men in the eyes of women and become cuckolds. You even screwed up Irene in your story. A woman who loves will not marry someone else's man. Your excuse is only for cuckolds. you are not thinking correctly about a good relationship. I hope in real life you will not suffer from this. I wish the author all the best. If someone against my thinking is ready for dialogue and explanation.
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NTR trash mc get cucked don’t read....................................... ................................... ..................................
ntr cuckold beta mc. he had the strength but still didn't do anything worthwhile, he let his lover be married to another man, this was a huge disappointment and my day is ruined. He didn't even need to have Irene as a lover if he knew he can't change the plot much and just helped her here and there if he felt pity for her, but no he just had to make Irene his harem member while knowing about the marriage and that he can't change it,