Not that good, reminded me of SAO, however i'm sure ur writing will improve. I found the story a little un interesting and please try to be a little more imaginative next time.
Not that good, reminded me of SAO, however i'm sure ur writing will improve. I found the story a little un interesting and please try to be a little more imaginative next time.
Not that good, reminded me of SAO, however i'm sure ur writing will improve. I found the story a little un interesting and please try to be a little more imaginative next time.