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A prologue that hooks you up fast and nicely. The rest of the story is quite binge worthy as well as being a good exemple for a good background building. Also the meta bits lighten this overall somehow dark novel, nice touch from a power-stone hungry author ;) Higly recommended
This is a really good book, pretty good grammar, nice communication between readers and the author and THE PUNS!!! Luv them. The author updates regularly 👍 Grammar is 4⭐️ Which is pretty good and this story has an interesting plot. Right now, it’s really intriguing albeit a few bumps here and there with the change in writing style and the author trying out some things. GIVE THE AUTHOR SOME POWER STONES!!!!
not sure if I already reviewed, but my favorite author released a half sequel to my favorite novel, and I feel bad for abandoning post giving this book my golden tickets, an awesome read, I hope more people take a chance on this book
an excellent adventure no need to compare with others. it has excitement, intrigue, nice plot, almost no romance thankfully. beautiful and stark landscapes and vivid battles with interesting background developments.
This is a great novel, but don't start it, hasn't been updated in nearly a year, I'm pretty sure at this point that the author has abandoned it...kinda bummed, this has been one of my favorite novels I've found in years, but being left off in the middle of of an arc, makes me feel like the author has just entirely abandoned it.
Easily the best book I’ve seen on this app, the only complaint I can make about it is the speed of releasing new content, but the author has a life to live so I can’t really blame them.
I really hope there is more to this book, I just finished all the available chapters and have been hooked the entire read. Please continue !
Good book with a writer looking to improve, u can feel them get Better as u progress through the book Good And distinct characters Intereting unfolding plot AT chapter 73
This is a good read and will suck you in easily. I have been following this writer for a while and I anticipate each chapter that is released. I want to see this hit hardback publication at some point.
nice suggestion. but how does it work? I think no. I will list my favorite parts first. I think it was a fun series to read. Especially why our lich committed suicide, the hero's realization of his relationship with the demon king, etc. was quite nice. besides, even the family he reincarnated in was perfect. but after that? No. Unfortunately, from the time he turned 13, he completely turned to the series of xullian and magic. SOMEONE WHO LIVED 1000 YEARS DOESN'T TREAT THAT WAY. I think this is the biggest mistake
this book is truly amazing, no clue what I was expecting going into this but after reading the first chapter I was trapped. a great mixture of the darker, incredibly timed scenes and the more light hearted moments with amazing humor. a genuine roller coaster of emotions. I don't know how to recommend this more. I've told all my friends ab this book
This book is bad. The whole premise of the story is the mc not using magic to fight. However all he does is use magic and fail al fighting. Action is ok but it’s not a good book. Messy plot and messy story telling.
A very good story, he author keeps tricking me into thinking he’s going to use overdone tropes but then he comes up with more original ideas. Very epic. Very good grammar, you usually get a minor mistake each chapter but compared to most web novels that’s absolutely amazing. Each character is very full of life, the main character is especially interesting to see, he stands out well compared to most reincarnation MCs.
Love the writing, love the story, love the jokes, good character development and character designs. It's sometimes hard to understand who's talking because of lack of grammatical structure and the characters who after hanging around each other a bunch start sounding like the other, which would happen irl. The story itself keeps me entertained and I love the MC, though I would have thought he'd handle things differently, but then later his character is developed more and I can see why he didn't do the things I thought he should. From time to time there are places the Author repeats things happening without it being the same thing, like when in the swamp when a ring was stolen. There are other random things here and there that draw me out of the reading (not the jokes, those are great!) but all in all I've happily spent power stones and coins on this book and will in the future as well.
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This novel has a very good start and the story is not bad.[img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend]
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Im in tears. Like literal tears. That’s how good it is. Would say more but i need to catch my breath. It is too fricking goodbnnnnnmmmmmmmmmm
Till chapter 89. The story is great, 0 to 5 spelling mistakes or grammar mistakes per chapter but the descriptive writing is basically vague but your imagination should cover it
You have to read this! At first I thought it was a boring story but actually this is gem. The premis seemingly without a conflict, yet through the course of the plot, it thickens and becoming more solid. It has some philosophical values, which differ from person to person. Each individual character here isn't a character to read and to forget instantly (except for somebody that is an eyesore) Really, the author is doing his job amazingly fleshing out the characters. Every action, thought, and words uttered and done by the characters are following coherent thought process and each individual bias and circumstances. This book is worth your coins.
love it the characters feel realistic and the quality of writing feels insane definitely has my full support if I did have to make some criticism I guess I would just say that the pace the story moves is uncosistent as in it'll take 5 chapters to get over one small piece of the story but then another time boom another story arc its not necessarily bad just confuses the rock I call my brain
Cool, Unique, actually pulls you in, The contruction of the story is great, keep up the good work, can't wait for the next chapters, as leaden-footed as they may come.
Love the story so far, thanks.[img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend]
I really loved this book for the first hundred chapters, the character was funny and interesting, the secondary and tertiary characters were cool, and I felt there were clear goals. the main character seemed to be exploring the meaning of being human and discovering what it means to care for life, but then suddenly he throws it all away and goes apeshi7, becoming a crazy murderer. not a hero book, unless you count secondary characters. definitely a good read, just missing a few elements. Stay on Target.
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He has yet to do cool flips quite yet, but I have faith. On a more serious note, this novel is yet to fail to hold my attention, very good overall.
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The Story has a good flow with great and relatable characters with understandable relationships and the action scenes are interesting with excitement and flair.
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i strongly recommend you give it a chance, but if you find either of the following points intolerable, you've been warned. i personally don't care about the first, and find the second to be great, but to each their own he's only a lich, physically speaking, for a couple chapters, and a few flashbacks. he retains his knowledge and abilities. the author also makes reference to power stones as a kind of currency in the story. i personally find it quite funny. keep rocking, Random Author!
love basically everything about this book, I only gave 4 star on writing quality because there seems to be little mishaps here and there, but nothing major by any means. and I agree with a fellow reveiwer that it really how's you in to begin with. really great read that I highly recommend!
One of the good ones out there in the wild 😭 It's really dark and went places I didn't expect it would. MC is no good guy and every bit the lich he was in his previous life.
Shameless self review to get he book noticed so I can advance quicker! I plan to write a long series spanning at least a couple hundred chapters, and that there will be a lot of outlining. Seriously, a lot of outlining. I have papers taped to my room's wall that takes up half the wall. That's just the first arc and character sheets.
A prologue that hooks you up fast and nicely. The rest of the story is quite binge worthy as well as being a good exemple for a good background building. Also the meta bits lighten this overall somehow dark novel, nice touch from a power-stone hungry author ;) Higly recommended
This is a really good book, pretty good grammar, nice communication between readers and the author and THE PUNS!!! Luv them. The author updates regularly 👍 Grammar is 4⭐️ Which is pretty good and this story has an interesting plot. Right now, it’s really intriguing albeit a few bumps here and there with the change in writing style and the author trying out some things. GIVE THE AUTHOR SOME POWER STONES!!!!
not sure if I already reviewed, but my favorite author released a half sequel to my favorite novel, and I feel bad for abandoning post giving this book my golden tickets, an awesome read, I hope more people take a chance on this book
an excellent adventure no need to compare with others. it has excitement, intrigue, nice plot, almost no romance thankfully. beautiful and stark landscapes and vivid battles with interesting background developments.
This is a great novel, but don't start it, hasn't been updated in nearly a year, I'm pretty sure at this point that the author has abandoned it...kinda bummed, this has been one of my favorite novels I've found in years, but being left off in the middle of of an arc, makes me feel like the author has just entirely abandoned it.
Easily the best book I’ve seen on this app, the only complaint I can make about it is the speed of releasing new content, but the author has a life to live so I can’t really blame them.
I really hope there is more to this book, I just finished all the available chapters and have been hooked the entire read. Please continue !
Good book with a writer looking to improve, u can feel them get Better as u progress through the book Good And distinct characters Intereting unfolding plot AT chapter 73
This is a good read and will suck you in easily. I have been following this writer for a while and I anticipate each chapter that is released. I want to see this hit hardback publication at some point.
nice suggestion. but how does it work? I think no. I will list my favorite parts first. I think it was a fun series to read. Especially why our lich committed suicide, the hero's realization of his relationship with the demon king, etc. was quite nice. besides, even the family he reincarnated in was perfect. but after that? No. Unfortunately, from the time he turned 13, he completely turned to the series of xullian and magic. SOMEONE WHO LIVED 1000 YEARS DOESN'T TREAT THAT WAY. I think this is the biggest mistake
this book is truly amazing, no clue what I was expecting going into this but after reading the first chapter I was trapped. a great mixture of the darker, incredibly timed scenes and the more light hearted moments with amazing humor. a genuine roller coaster of emotions. I don't know how to recommend this more. I've told all my friends ab this book
This book is bad. The whole premise of the story is the mc not using magic to fight. However all he does is use magic and fail al fighting. Action is ok but it’s not a good book. Messy plot and messy story telling.
A very good story, he author keeps tricking me into thinking he’s going to use overdone tropes but then he comes up with more original ideas. Very epic. Very good grammar, you usually get a minor mistake each chapter but compared to most web novels that’s absolutely amazing. Each character is very full of life, the main character is especially interesting to see, he stands out well compared to most reincarnation MCs.
Love the writing, love the story, love the jokes, good character development and character designs. It's sometimes hard to understand who's talking because of lack of grammatical structure and the characters who after hanging around each other a bunch start sounding like the other, which would happen irl. The story itself keeps me entertained and I love the MC, though I would have thought he'd handle things differently, but then later his character is developed more and I can see why he didn't do the things I thought he should. From time to time there are places the Author repeats things happening without it being the same thing, like when in the swamp when a ring was stolen. There are other random things here and there that draw me out of the reading (not the jokes, those are great!) but all in all I've happily spent power stones and coins on this book and will in the future as well.
Revelar spoiler This novel has a very good start and the story is not bad.[img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend]
((((((((((((((((((((((((((((((((I think it's an Excellent book and story line!!!!!!!!!!!)))))))))))))))))))))))))))))))))) Excellent book See!!
Im in tears. Like literal tears. That’s how good it is. Would say more but i need to catch my breath. It is too fricking goodbnnnnnmmmmmmmmmm
Till chapter 89. The story is great, 0 to 5 spelling mistakes or grammar mistakes per chapter but the descriptive writing is basically vague but your imagination should cover it
You have to read this! At first I thought it was a boring story but actually this is gem. The premis seemingly without a conflict, yet through the course of the plot, it thickens and becoming more solid. It has some philosophical values, which differ from person to person. Each individual character here isn't a character to read and to forget instantly (except for somebody that is an eyesore) Really, the author is doing his job amazingly fleshing out the characters. Every action, thought, and words uttered and done by the characters are following coherent thought process and each individual bias and circumstances. This book is worth your coins.
love it the characters feel realistic and the quality of writing feels insane definitely has my full support if I did have to make some criticism I guess I would just say that the pace the story moves is uncosistent as in it'll take 5 chapters to get over one small piece of the story but then another time boom another story arc its not necessarily bad just confuses the rock I call my brain
Cool, Unique, actually pulls you in, The contruction of the story is great, keep up the good work, can't wait for the next chapters, as leaden-footed as they may come.
Love the story so far, thanks.[img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend]
I really loved this book for the first hundred chapters, the character was funny and interesting, the secondary and tertiary characters were cool, and I felt there were clear goals. the main character seemed to be exploring the meaning of being human and discovering what it means to care for life, but then suddenly he throws it all away and goes apeshi7, becoming a crazy murderer. not a hero book, unless you count secondary characters. definitely a good read, just missing a few elements. Stay on Target.
Revelar spoiler He has yet to do cool flips quite yet, but I have faith. On a more serious note, this novel is yet to fail to hold my attention, very good overall.
Revelar spoiler The Story has a good flow with great and relatable characters with understandable relationships and the action scenes are interesting with excitement and flair.
Revelar spoiler i strongly recommend you give it a chance, but if you find either of the following points intolerable, you've been warned. i personally don't care about the first, and find the second to be great, but to each their own he's only a lich, physically speaking, for a couple chapters, and a few flashbacks. he retains his knowledge and abilities. the author also makes reference to power stones as a kind of currency in the story. i personally find it quite funny. keep rocking, Random Author!
love basically everything about this book, I only gave 4 star on writing quality because there seems to be little mishaps here and there, but nothing major by any means. and I agree with a fellow reveiwer that it really how's you in to begin with. really great read that I highly recommend!
One of the good ones out there in the wild 😭 It's really dark and went places I didn't expect it would. MC is no good guy and every bit the lich he was in his previous life.
Shameless self review to get he book noticed so I can advance quicker! I plan to write a long series spanning at least a couple hundred chapters, and that there will be a lot of outlining. Seriously, a lot of outlining. I have papers taped to my room's wall that takes up half the wall. That's just the first arc and character sheets.