Orphan at the Edge of the World

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gattala

messege for the author Im realy realy realy having a hard time reading this one, the writing is good but i have never read a novel with this complicated grammar, the sentences are realy long and kind a seem long-winded or wordy and im having a hard time understanding some of what the authore ment in the chapters, this has never happened to me before and i doubt that anyone wont have the same probleme as me unless they have studied english extensively like lawyers and english teachers

LV 5

Seide

Shameless Self plug. Be honest but if you have beef with it, give me a reason. Otherwise, enjoy. I'm planning on it being a good, long story.

LV 3

BRPever

It is a well-written story with very good content development. I have only read the first chapter but looking forward to reading more. Keep up the good work :)

LV 10

Ceecee

This novel has Excellent writing and story development. Will continue to read and I look forward to the updates. Keep up the good work!!!!!!

LV 4

Chainslock

Nothing much I could really critique. The writing is fluid and text is void of errors. Orison is an interesting character. The concept itself is intriguing. Dialogue as well as prose flows naturally. Quality content. Keep on writing, fellow author!

LV 6

Weirdo

Five star review so you wouldnt complain... This story have a good grammar usage, great paragraph phasing, concept, and usage of sophisticate word(Although I dislike it... Give me a vibe of JiangYe, but at least it's only on chapter one..)

LV 4

IGotStones

color me a fan of this book, real good read. story was really interesting.. you have my 5 star review, good novel, more chapters... If you looking for a nice novel, no need to look further you have already found one

LV 12

Zehell2218

Haven't really read but decided to help because the title is interesting. Good luck writing this ;) no need to return the favour. Please give this book a try, guys. I'm sure it will be worth it.

LV 4

ZeljkaZZ

I did expect many things but not this. As am indeed not good at expressing my thoughts well I am amazed by sheer amount fo words you are using. The story deserves even higher ratings. I am sure in future this might become even one of famous books. I rise my both thumbs up for this story, storyline and adequate writing style. You are amazing :)

LV 2

D4ISUKE

I read through the chapters until third one... It was great to read the RPG elemental story since it gives me vibes to play MMORPG soon... Damn, I missed playing RPG games. Also for a bit of negative points that you need to improve, limit the usage of adverbs although just use it in a right time when you want to.

LV 13

qunin_e

Like the curiousness of a kids, I'm reading chapters after chapters with keen intrest, full of mind and loving the characters. Just reading it once won't satisfy the emotion and love for orison rooting in me after every chapter. Worth reading.

LV 11

Doxi

The idea is really unique on my opinion. The development is even nice. The synopsis intrigued me so I took a peek. That peek turned into looking and then ultimately turned into reading. If you want a novel to entertain you and to always keep you on your toes then this novel is for you. Definitely a must read.

Its a great story loved reading it. You are a great author and it shows in your writing how much work and time you put into it. Keep writing, i enjoy reading your work

So proud of you. Keep going. Your story is good and I know other people will love it too. When I read the part that, oh that's right. I can't say, ;)

LV 1

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Vistarion

I don't get this story at all. The jumps from same overlord god perspective to same fusions of souls MC. Then same demon summoning story -> followed by bandits/thiefs all in 4chps. I don't get this story.

LV 1

Kenringdomstorys

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