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Do dropped forever now ........................................... ........................................... ...........................................
The mc is from a smaller kingdom and there a thousands strimger than it but the mc is able to destroy an wntire mountain at the age of 12. And the thing is he isnt the only one that can do it. If it was that easy to destroy a mountain there wouldnt be any left. The power ranking make no sense at all.( I only read to chap 8 tho)
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It good light novel but where are the f*** other chapters it's been 9 months already and there's no update at all This is one thing I hate about the light novels that are there are no updates after 200 ch or so one when the story is good
this author=mc is... hard to find worse! save yourself the time! this author=mc is... hard to find worse! save yourself the time! this author=mc is... hard to find worse! save yourself the time!
this is a really fun novel to read had a lot of fun reading this till I realized that this novel hasn't been updated in awhile hope it comes back because I hate starting novels that don't finish :(
I have no clue why this novel quit releasing but it is a classic that i wish could finish out because this book is a great read with good character building and story telling!
This story is awful. What's worse the tags are wrong. The protagonist is a complete White-Knight (righteous hypocrite) character who 'righteously' expands his harem. How does he do this? Conveniently the MC will meet Heavenly Beauties, and soon after there'll be great opportunity for him to save them. They of course can't help but swoon - if they aren't falling for him fast enough, his cultivation technique will have him lose control, leading to him r@ping them. The victim becomes a tsundere and realises who her true love is - the MC... If this wasn't enough, this novel has the annoying tendency to 'power-up' the entire harem every time the protagonist's power increases. Artefact (necklace) given to harem member 1 turns out to be a godly artefact and she suddenly becomes tyrannically powerful! How a novel could go so wrong is beyond me. This is a shockingly poor novel.
when will be new chapters come .why dit it stopped here.can anyone please tell me why it stoopes in alasta world .why there is no story after it
Really great book to read! it is just theres no update till now, was it axed or dropped? would appreciate it if someone would enlighten us!!
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3+2+2+3+1/5=2.2 Seemed interesting to being with. Mc seemed to have a good/decent head on his shoulders. Other than that it seemed like a regular among the others. And I tire of "girl in trouble?! I got one of my own but this one is also cute! looks like I'm the only one who cares as I will protect her!!!!!"
Very gooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooo oooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooo oooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooo oooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooo ooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooood
Why do people with these kinds of novels always feel the need to give away several chapters full of story in the synopsis? I already know more than i want to going into this novel, why why why do you insecure authors insist on dumping so much info? If you are this insecure in your ability to hold my attention please hire someone else to write out your synopsis for you. That way i won't get spoilered like f*cking crazy.
Can you check out my novel, Blood Ties(Ketsuen)? Also, I got the chills so many times toward the end of this book. It completely blew my mind. It managed to surpass my high expectations AND be nothing at all like I expected. Let me preface this with an apology. If I sound stunningly inarticulate at times in this review, I can't help it. My mind is completely fried. This novel was relentless. Take-no-prisoners. Driven. Fast/-paced. (non-stop, etc.)...race to the end. Rip-roaring.
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A good novel to binge read as it follows a fast pace but the development is still good. I recommend it to those who like something to read on your free time.
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it was great up until a certain chapter where there was a very explicit R-18 r*pe scene... no tags on the book about it. imo the scene wasn't written well at all and completely changes my view of the MC .. kinda disappointing as the start was great.
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I can only say that it is at the isekai level of wish satisfaction. At first it seems that the MC is promising but around 40 chp everything starts to lose meaning. Very poorly made harem, similar to a harem isekai. The MC only wins the others because his level of cultivation is above; He does not know sword techniques (etc), nor pills, formation, forging, etc.Summary: Find another
Going to be honest - I only read one chapter before dropping. It might be a good novel, so I'm giving it the benefit of the doubt with regards to the star-rating, but there were just too many issues with the writing quality. The author constantly switches between present and past tense, alternating nearly every other sentence without reason. There are also issues with word choice and misspellings. It's just too distracting.
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So I'm reading thus far and all I can say is that the writing quality gets better as the chapter continues. You can really determine that this novel is more than decent and readable for most readers and I commend the author for doing this. The stability of updates may not be daily but as you can see from the dates, there are a couple of chapters released in a day so that is heavily compensated for those who released daily. The world-building is adequate, not rushed, or not slow. You can truly savor as though you're one of the adventurers in this novel! Thank you author for the job well done.
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Try My novel #Rise OF Evil Sword God If you like harem, R-18 novels with a great cast of characters or are searching for a story with a developed plot and a steady flow, you should read this story it's good. Because it's not some 18+ fap material with a storyline as a background. I like that MC is not just running around and raping everyone. He is restricting himself. This is a good novel with something different that is mc has cultivation materials with him and does not have mindless *** and the plot is simple to understand and has quite a lot of potential to evolve into a better plot in future
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Revelar spoiler I need this story to continue as soon as possible! Great read and world building.
Do dropped forever now ........................................... ........................................... ...........................................
The mc is from a smaller kingdom and there a thousands strimger than it but the mc is able to destroy an wntire mountain at the age of 12. And the thing is he isnt the only one that can do it. If it was that easy to destroy a mountain there wouldnt be any left. The power ranking make no sense at all.( I only read to chap 8 tho)
Revelar spoiler It good light novel but where are the f*** other chapters it's been 9 months already and there's no update at all This is one thing I hate about the light novels that are there are no updates after 200 ch or so one when the story is good
this author=mc is... hard to find worse! save yourself the time! this author=mc is... hard to find worse! save yourself the time! this author=mc is... hard to find worse! save yourself the time!
this is a really fun novel to read had a lot of fun reading this till I realized that this novel hasn't been updated in awhile hope it comes back because I hate starting novels that don't finish :(
I have no clue why this novel quit releasing but it is a classic that i wish could finish out because this book is a great read with good character building and story telling!
This story is awful. What's worse the tags are wrong. The protagonist is a complete White-Knight (righteous hypocrite) character who 'righteously' expands his harem. How does he do this? Conveniently the MC will meet Heavenly Beauties, and soon after there'll be great opportunity for him to save them. They of course can't help but swoon - if they aren't falling for him fast enough, his cultivation technique will have him lose control, leading to him r@ping them. The victim becomes a tsundere and realises who her true love is - the MC... If this wasn't enough, this novel has the annoying tendency to 'power-up' the entire harem every time the protagonist's power increases. Artefact (necklace) given to harem member 1 turns out to be a godly artefact and she suddenly becomes tyrannically powerful! How a novel could go so wrong is beyond me. This is a shockingly poor novel.
when will be new chapters come .why dit it stopped here.can anyone please tell me why it stoopes in alasta world .why there is no story after it
Really great book to read! it is just theres no update till now, was it axed or dropped? would appreciate it if someone would enlighten us!!
Cliche and boRing, But you can use it to waste time if you skim the bad parts Lvk j k jchoi pufzpufxipjdog pig upf if if if ti upd pudoudupd
❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️
3+2+2+3+1/5=2.2 Seemed interesting to being with. Mc seemed to have a good/decent head on his shoulders. Other than that it seemed like a regular among the others. And I tire of "girl in trouble?! I got one of my own but this one is also cute! looks like I'm the only one who cares as I will protect her!!!!!"
Very gooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooo oooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooo oooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooo oooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooo ooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooood
Why do people with these kinds of novels always feel the need to give away several chapters full of story in the synopsis? I already know more than i want to going into this novel, why why why do you insecure authors insist on dumping so much info? If you are this insecure in your ability to hold my attention please hire someone else to write out your synopsis for you. That way i won't get spoilered like f*cking crazy.
Can you check out my novel, Blood Ties(Ketsuen)? Also, I got the chills so many times toward the end of this book. It completely blew my mind. It managed to surpass my high expectations AND be nothing at all like I expected. Let me preface this with an apology. If I sound stunningly inarticulate at times in this review, I can't help it. My mind is completely fried. This novel was relentless. Take-no-prisoners. Driven. Fast/-paced. (non-stop, etc.)...race to the end. Rip-roaring.
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A good novel to binge read as it follows a fast pace but the development is still good. I recommend it to those who like something to read on your free time.
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it was great up until a certain chapter where there was a very explicit R-18 r*pe scene... no tags on the book about it. imo the scene wasn't written well at all and completely changes my view of the MC .. kinda disappointing as the start was great.
nice work keep it up ...dhdhdhdhdhdhdhdhhdhdhydudydydyydydydhdhdhehhehd fhrduduyddhrhehbciforoeiduxhdbevehhdhee dhdudududhdhdhdhdhbxbdbrhjdcuudurur
Hey there! Here are some web novel recommendations for whom share the same taste with me. If you like this story, my recommendations are worth a try! https://docs.google.com/document/d/19R5KkqHOOHSMDkF4fHscVmxWcYGh0OntYsv8NglzsQo/edit?usp=sharing
I can only say that it is at the isekai level of wish satisfaction. At first it seems that the MC is promising but around 40 chp everything starts to lose meaning. Very poorly made harem, similar to a harem isekai. The MC only wins the others because his level of cultivation is above; He does not know sword techniques (etc), nor pills, formation, forging, etc.Summary: Find another
Going to be honest - I only read one chapter before dropping. It might be a good novel, so I'm giving it the benefit of the doubt with regards to the star-rating, but there were just too many issues with the writing quality. The author constantly switches between present and past tense, alternating nearly every other sentence without reason. There are also issues with word choice and misspellings. It's just too distracting.
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So I'm reading thus far and all I can say is that the writing quality gets better as the chapter continues. You can really determine that this novel is more than decent and readable for most readers and I commend the author for doing this. The stability of updates may not be daily but as you can see from the dates, there are a couple of chapters released in a day so that is heavily compensated for those who released daily. The world-building is adequate, not rushed, or not slow. You can truly savor as though you're one of the adventurers in this novel! Thank you author for the job well done.
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Try My novel #Rise OF Evil Sword God If you like harem, R-18 novels with a great cast of characters or are searching for a story with a developed plot and a steady flow, you should read this story it's good. Because it's not some 18+ fap material with a storyline as a background. I like that MC is not just running around and raping everyone. He is restricting himself. This is a good novel with something different that is mc has cultivation materials with him and does not have mindless *** and the plot is simple to understand and has quite a lot of potential to evolve into a better plot in future
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I need this story to continue as soon as possible! Great read and world building.