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overall story was nice....but it has lots of loopholes if you read it carefully....the MC was way too powerful which make it less interesting you know that he will defeat is upcoming opponents easily ....moreover it's an harem story .... i like harem but not more than 3-4 girls in it....
The problem with the premise is that if Natsu was not present Tenrou island lot of fairy members would've died, he was critical in defeating Zacrow and Hades, without him several weak members would've died or lost even if they win against Grimoire Heart and without everyone's bond and magic Fairy Sphere wouldn't have been activated at all and thus dooming the entire group against Acnologia's Dragon's Roar.
Could you please update the story and like i said please remove erza and mira in the harem we see them too much it's time for a change . [img=recommend]
I loved the book sadly it was abandoned it was absolutely amazing sad it’s gone. Hail Poseidon
This story is great! really hope for more soon!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
This is a great novel. The characters are fully fleshed out, the story development is on point, and it’s always appreciated when an author stays true to the MC’s mildly d*ckish personality.
Great book and great characters and excellent world-building aaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaahahahahahahahahahahahahahahah hahahahah great man never read a great book
Author are you ever going to come back to this?????? Please come back, this is the BEST Fairy Tail fanfic on this site......................
I love this but I hate the part that Natsu is Dating four girls at once I hate that Natsu is supposed to love Lucy!!!!!!! I Hate that part but the others are amazing but I am going to stop reading this because pf the part Natsu Dating four girls at once I want Natsu and lucy together!!!!!!!!!l!l
I loved the original of this and im happy that the remake is also good, cant wait for more, now im just filling out the Onehundred and forty
I love the fairy tail manga and the anime,which has of course has my favorite character natsu dragneel in it,so please keep it up I love this story please.
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la storia continuera ? ................................................................................................................................................................................. stelle a caso seno non ivia
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Well what should i write the only thing thats stuck in my mind is this is FORKING MASTERPIECE!!!!! BRUH LOOK AT THAT WRITING STULE LOOK AT THAT STORY LINE ITS FORKING AMAZING
This is a full five 🌟 star fanfic novel for me. It has lots of development and the most important thing is that Natsu have got past his MOTION SICKNESS. special thanks for that Author-san
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Please come back the story is very goodddddddddddddddddddddddddddddddddddddddddddddddddddddddddddddddddddddddddddddddddddddddddddddddddddddddddddddddddddddddddddddddddddddddddddddddddddddddddddddddddddddddddddddd
Although story is good but i hate dropped novels like this. And each chapter is very small like 1000 to 1200 words. If it is continued then it can have good potential but its dropped and there is no chapter for months
thank you for making a good story, it's a bit unfortunate that natsu is in a relationship with an oc, i just want him to be with popular girls like Erza, Mirajane, Ultear, Kagura.
overall story was nice....but it has lots of loopholes if you read it carefully....the MC was way too powerful which make it less interesting you know that he will defeat is upcoming opponents easily ....moreover it's an harem story .... i like harem but not more than 3-4 girls in it....
The problem with the premise is that if Natsu was not present Tenrou island lot of fairy members would've died, he was critical in defeating Zacrow and Hades, without him several weak members would've died or lost even if they win against Grimoire Heart and without everyone's bond and magic Fairy Sphere wouldn't have been activated at all and thus dooming the entire group against Acnologia's Dragon's Roar.
Could you please update the story and like i said please remove erza and mira in the harem we see them too much it's time for a change . [img=recommend]
I loved the book sadly it was abandoned it was absolutely amazing sad it’s gone. Hail Poseidon
This story is great! really hope for more soon!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
This is a great novel. The characters are fully fleshed out, the story development is on point, and it’s always appreciated when an author stays true to the MC’s mildly d*ckish personality.
Great book and great characters and excellent world-building aaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaahahahahahahahahahahahahahahah hahahahah great man never read a great book
Author are you ever going to come back to this?????? Please come back, this is the BEST Fairy Tail fanfic on this site......................
I love this but I hate the part that Natsu is Dating four girls at once I hate that Natsu is supposed to love Lucy!!!!!!! I Hate that part but the others are amazing but I am going to stop reading this because pf the part Natsu Dating four girls at once I want Natsu and lucy together!!!!!!!!!l!l
I loved the original of this and im happy that the remake is also good, cant wait for more, now im just filling out the Onehundred and forty
I love the fairy tail manga and the anime,which has of course has my favorite character natsu dragneel in it,so please keep it up I love this story please.
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HAPPY NEW YEAR HAPPY NEW YEAR HAPPY NEW YEAR HAPPY NEW YEAR HAPPY NEW YEAR HAPPY NEW YEAR HAPPY NEW YEAR HAPPY NEW YEAR HAPPY NEW YEAR HAPPY NEW YEAR
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more!!!!!! : : : : :::::::.////‘/‘/&,8,8:’/&&,&;&:’!:$;&;’!:$:&,’;!$:&:&,$;$&,’:!,&&:’:!,$, :$:$!:$:&:&:&:&:&:&:&&:&:&:&:&:&:$:6/&2’!37383&:&&$$$7jjdjsjsjhbbsybsbhsbusbsinisbisnisbubsubdubdibdibdibidbibdibdibodbibdibdibdibdihduvidbidbibdund
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la storia continuera ? ................................................................................................................................................................................. stelle a caso seno non ivia
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Well what should i write the only thing thats stuck in my mind is this is FORKING MASTERPIECE!!!!! BRUH LOOK AT THAT WRITING STULE LOOK AT THAT STORY LINE ITS FORKING AMAZING
This is a full five 🌟 star fanfic novel for me. It has lots of development and the most important thing is that Natsu have got past his MOTION SICKNESS. special thanks for that Author-san
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Please come back the story is very goodddddddddddddddddddddddddddddddddddddddddddddddddddddddddddddddddddddddddddddddddddddddddddddddddddddddddddddddddddddddddddddddddddddddddddddddddddddddddddddddddddddddddddddd
Although story is good but i hate dropped novels like this. And each chapter is very small like 1000 to 1200 words. If it is continued then it can have good potential but its dropped and there is no chapter for months
thank you for making a good story, it's a bit unfortunate that natsu is in a relationship with an oc, i just want him to be with popular girls like Erza, Mirajane, Ultear, Kagura.