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Good. Although it has a slightly terrible grammar and spellings in the beginning, the author is improving. .... . . . .
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I’m not going to lie. I love this book, this book was actually one of the first one I read and I loved! So please update soon, you have all my support!
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Reader here to give some reviews. The writing equality is nice and readable. Although the words is not that deep but that makes it good for those who really like reading Fanfic. The protagonist in this story (Yu Long) didn't know exactly how profound this world yet. Unlike some other Soul Land fanfiction that has some advantages knowing the future events by rencarnating. Although the Mc in this story is not an anomaly in the universe, his personality gives an unwavering perseverance and desire to reach his goal by travelling the world and finding his parents/family. It also makes his character fleshed out giving him extreme motivation and a solid goal. Because a lot Oc in other stories is like a blank paper that doesn't have a trait ,unlike this story that really shows Yu Long character. The character design is nice but I hope its becomes more vivid. the protagonist power is not also a illogically overpowered. Well he is strong, stronger than Tang San when he was younger for around 2 years. Tang San is a brokenly overpowered as we know. I also hope and expecting for updates because I like the story.. Yeah read this if you want a overpowered chill main protagonist that dont act like a dick but mature and highly intelligent with a cheat powers.
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apoyo el no harem, y si hay algo de romanc de esta bien. pero porfavor no pongas a un OC. acabo de comenzar a leer está novela, así que si ya lo hiciste ni modo
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author don't be discouraged by the amount of power stone you are getting right now. by the greatness of this fanfin i know that with patients and continues update it will rise to top 10 one day.
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Love it so far, nothing too op yet in my opinion. I like the balance you've created and how the mc isn't just following original mc. Also like how mc has a friend and isn't just lone wolf (too many of those).
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This fanfic is not a harem. I repeat this fanfic is not harem so don't ask about it.—-------------------------—------------------—------------------—
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adorei o começo, gostei muito dos espíritos que ele despertou, espero que continue a escrever, por favor, gostaria que o senhor pudesse fazer um capítulo extra falando tanto dos espíritos do protagonista quanto o do seu amigo, obrigado. Quero pedir também, se possível, continuar essa história, estarei dando meu apoio a partir de amanhã pois hoje já tinha votado
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Good. Although it has a slightly terrible grammar and spellings in the beginning, the author is improving. .... . . . .
too lazy to write ............................................................................................................................................................................................................
Salah satu fanfic douluo terbaik👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍😭👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍😭👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍😭👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍😭
I’m not going to lie. I love this book, this book was actually one of the first one I read and I loved! So please update soon, you have all my support!
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Reader here to give some reviews. The writing equality is nice and readable. Although the words is not that deep but that makes it good for those who really like reading Fanfic. The protagonist in this story (Yu Long) didn't know exactly how profound this world yet. Unlike some other Soul Land fanfiction that has some advantages knowing the future events by rencarnating. Although the Mc in this story is not an anomaly in the universe, his personality gives an unwavering perseverance and desire to reach his goal by travelling the world and finding his parents/family. It also makes his character fleshed out giving him extreme motivation and a solid goal. Because a lot Oc in other stories is like a blank paper that doesn't have a trait ,unlike this story that really shows Yu Long character. The character design is nice but I hope its becomes more vivid. the protagonist power is not also a illogically overpowered. Well he is strong, stronger than Tang San when he was younger for around 2 years. Tang San is a brokenly overpowered as we know. I also hope and expecting for updates because I like the story.. Yeah read this if you want a overpowered chill main protagonist that dont act like a dick but mature and highly intelligent with a cheat powers.
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apoyo el no harem, y si hay algo de romanc de esta bien. pero porfavor no pongas a un OC. acabo de comenzar a leer está novela, así que si ya lo hiciste ni modo
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author don't be discouraged by the amount of power stone you are getting right now. by the greatness of this fanfin i know that with patients and continues update it will rise to top 10 one day.
...........................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................
More chapters,more chapters,more chapters,more chapters,more chapters,more chapters,more chapters,more chapters,more chapters,more chapters,more chapters.
Love it so far, nothing too op yet in my opinion. I like the balance you've created and how the mc isn't just following original mc. Also like how mc has a friend and isn't just lone wolf (too many of those).
,👍 Jskskcndnkskcjkkeioeikk(8hssjk,jkjzieksjqoskinsmdkjsnz it kqooqowooejtieiwutyureeiisieowodjbfsiixjeidixkjskejdkfiejdjckddkjf
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Great I Love it 😄😄...hope you dont drop😤😤 i lke to see what will happen when the story progress 😊😊😊😊😊😊😊😊😊😊😊😊😊😊😊😊😊😊😊😊😊😊😊😊😊😊😊😊🙌🙌🙌🙌🙌🙌🙌🙌🙌🙌🙌🙌🙌🙌🙌🙌🙌🙌🙌🎉🎉🎉🎉🎉🎉🎉🎉
This fanfic is not a harem. I repeat this fanfic is not harem so don't ask about it.—-------------------------—------------------—------------------—
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adorei o começo, gostei muito dos espíritos que ele despertou, espero que continue a escrever, por favor, gostaria que o senhor pudesse fazer um capítulo extra falando tanto dos espíritos do protagonista quanto o do seu amigo, obrigado. Quero pedir também, se possível, continuar essa história, estarei dando meu apoio a partir de amanhã pois hoje já tinha votado
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