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Listen I've been here for a while and I can definitely say this is worth the read. The author has made great improvements in his writing and is definitely dedicated so come a long for the ride.
It starts out a little slow but it picks up pretty fast and it is pretty interesting to read once you start reading it but when you do you do not want to put it down.
It’s short and sweet an left me wanting more for a long time every so often I come back to this app to just check if the author ever came back and it’s been years of disappointment I really enjoyed the few chapters that we did get and I wish that she author is doing well in life.
it was something worth reading. it wasn't regular. it showed the personality also maturity and so much more. i really want to see it reach a 1000chapters
Hello everyone: 3 I, the reader of this novel, can give my first impression of the novel when I read more than 30 chapters. It was a nice start to begin with, but then it got a bit boring. The author points to the MC living alone since he was 10 years old alone and without parents. He tells us how he failed the ranker exam twice and how he faced traps and battle experience. But when I continued reading it I saw that the knowledge of MC is like a child seeing the world for the first time when he assured that he would reach the top of power without even a ring (something that 90% of the population has) He falls in love with a chick in just ... What? 10 chapters? The author forces a plot to pursue the damsel with a powerful family that at first glance is far from her reach. What? From one chapter to another he forced a ridiculous purpose when he had hundreds of better ways. And not to mention that he acts like a knowledgeless stupid in front of others. Anyway 4/10 In my experience.
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This book is amazing and I love the characters and progression it's just when I only have 3 FP and the chapters are more drawn out instead of having more content it kinda annoys me
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mediocre, very cliché .... without tension the opponents are very bland and are also always weaker than the main character.......................................................................
Please continue writing I love the story.. ...it's awesome... Please release more chapters......and am loving it.. please release more chapters
Revelar spoiler
very nice story .author should release more chapter very week . Nice creativity .focus on more chapters .and world back ground needs to focus . keep rock
author skills is good .mixing with modern and cultivation world 🌎. keep going .but chapter update are not frequent .I hope author reconsider.
Parece que os capitulos estao ficando mais curtos . Mas espero que continue nao e muio bom mas e bom.por isso estou curiosocada vez espero que ele se torne
Good story background with amazing system for cultivation with a humble MC makes it a awesome read. The slow updates are an issue though. could have been faster
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this story has me wanting to read more and more every day....good work cant wait for new chapters. I absolutely love this book. I can literally feel myself being absorbed into the strange and exciting world
I like This story... a lot. i dont know why but it just Cought my attention and i couldnt stop reading it. Good job Author but i wisH it couls update more often
A unique story that I haven’t seen before in this very saturated genre. From the unique cultivation system setup to the interesting world the character explores and fights in. Its overall a very good read, keep it up. [img=update]
This is an amazing book and a good read. The only thing that could be better is the stability of the updates. Each day I wonder if it is gonna be updated or not and it's slightly annoying. But besides that it's great!
This novel is pretty good and when I first started reading it, I thought it was a translated novel. That explains all the grammar mistakes sprinkled here and there. Besides the occasional missing word and incorrect spelling though, this novel is definitely able to captivate long-time readers that are tired of reading half baked original works. The story development and world building makes alone makes it stand out. Definitely a good read. The only suggestion I have for the author is to pace the storyline a little bit. Some parts should progress quickly, while other parts need to be slowed down to make the novel more realistic to readers. Balancing both will make this novel even better.
This is my first story i read up to date and this is also my first review. I enjoy this story alot. The grammar has problems but it is all easy to understand. I dislike some characters but thats not to much of a problem and it could change with time. Since i read this mostly for the MC and action, i struggle with chapters where he is not in. Do give it a try!
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A well written novel, no mismatch in history. We easily enter the world of the author, and our hopes are never disappointed. I recommend! Ploufi
I really like this novel, it has solid background, great storyline just sometimes author forgot or completely ignore logic that comes in way to make mc OP. LITERALLY he totally neglect logics to make mc OP like - 1)how he can make potions at physic enrichment rank without a training or hard work and that are 10 times better than currently existing in that world( can't believe it). 10 times better are you kidding me, the world alredy has potions that are best from deity realm and he has 10 times better one(with cheap materials) and can make like nothing, let's say THE EMPYRIAN CHAOS IS from plane above the deity realm or strongest there even then it doesn't make sense why the hell did that entity (or his fellow cultivators almost of same realm) invest his time in the starting realm of cultivation and even that much that he make such heaven defying potions. F...u...c.........,.....,............. 2) he just discover 13th SEAL with just a thought, he thought and poof.. he discover the 13th seal. All other characters or billions of trillions people in past and in present are what idiots or I am the one who is. And even THE GREATEST EMPYRIAN CHOS CAN MAKE THE STUPID POTION HEAVEN DEFYING BUT HE DON'T INVEST HIS TIME TO WORK ON 13TH SEAL WHICH I SUPPOSE IS FAR IMPORTANT THAN THAT FUCKING POTION AND TELL HIM THAT "BODY AND SOUL ARE SAME. AHHHHHHHHH......FUCK.... no character development, I think he is more mature at start before he gets the bumbo jumbo his parents left behind, now he is like a arrogant **** who do messes with anyone without giving a thought about consequences. It's like the more story progresses the more he get arrogant
Revelar spoiler
It's definitely one of the best story I've read in webnovel. Really good character design and so far It's not a harem. I am hoping it will continue this way and become OTP. The story development and world building is also well written. I can see this story evolving in a new way with how the world keeps expanding. I am very satisfied with the story. Hope the author can continue to write this beautiful story.
it a good novel for those who want to try something new but also a little bit familiar, i love it and am always waiting in anticipation for a new chapter to be uploaded everyday.
I am really sick of the chaos and divine **** that is popping up in this novel.......... why is chaos always the end????? why can't you for once make a story with a special premise???
A great novel that is hidden.. found by chance and found a unique cultivation system...good world building and characters....all i have left is to thank the author of this work
it's a good book, it's a good book the Mc is well written the story is well-paced all in all it's a great cultivation novel so 7/10 for the Mc 9/10 for the cultivation 8/10 for the writing 6/10 for the story so far. more to come as i read
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Listen I've been here for a while and I can definitely say this is worth the read. The author has made great improvements in his writing and is definitely dedicated so come a long for the ride.
It starts out a little slow but it picks up pretty fast and it is pretty interesting to read once you start reading it but when you do you do not want to put it down.
It’s short and sweet an left me wanting more for a long time every so often I come back to this app to just check if the author ever came back and it’s been years of disappointment I really enjoyed the few chapters that we did get and I wish that she author is doing well in life.
it was something worth reading. it wasn't regular. it showed the personality also maturity and so much more. i really want to see it reach a 1000chapters
Hello everyone: 3 I, the reader of this novel, can give my first impression of the novel when I read more than 30 chapters. It was a nice start to begin with, but then it got a bit boring. The author points to the MC living alone since he was 10 years old alone and without parents. He tells us how he failed the ranker exam twice and how he faced traps and battle experience. But when I continued reading it I saw that the knowledge of MC is like a child seeing the world for the first time when he assured that he would reach the top of power without even a ring (something that 90% of the population has) He falls in love with a chick in just ... What? 10 chapters? The author forces a plot to pursue the damsel with a powerful family that at first glance is far from her reach. What? From one chapter to another he forced a ridiculous purpose when he had hundreds of better ways. And not to mention that he acts like a knowledgeless stupid in front of others. Anyway 4/10 In my experience.
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This book is amazing and I love the characters and progression it's just when I only have 3 FP and the chapters are more drawn out instead of having more content it kinda annoys me
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mediocre, very cliché .... without tension the opponents are very bland and are also always weaker than the main character.......................................................................
Please continue writing I love the story.. ...it's awesome... Please release more chapters......and am loving it.. please release more chapters
Revelar spoiler very nice story .author should release more chapter very week . Nice creativity .focus on more chapters .and world back ground needs to focus . keep rock
author skills is good .mixing with modern and cultivation world 🌎. keep going .but chapter update are not frequent .I hope author reconsider.
Parece que os capitulos estao ficando mais curtos . Mas espero que continue nao e muio bom mas e bom.por isso estou curiosocada vez espero que ele se torne
Good story background with amazing system for cultivation with a humble MC makes it a awesome read. The slow updates are an issue though. could have been faster
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this story has me wanting to read more and more every day....good work cant wait for new chapters. I absolutely love this book. I can literally feel myself being absorbed into the strange and exciting world
I like This story... a lot. i dont know why but it just Cought my attention and i couldnt stop reading it. Good job Author but i wisH it couls update more often
A unique story that I haven’t seen before in this very saturated genre. From the unique cultivation system setup to the interesting world the character explores and fights in. Its overall a very good read, keep it up. [img=update]
This is an amazing book and a good read. The only thing that could be better is the stability of the updates. Each day I wonder if it is gonna be updated or not and it's slightly annoying. But besides that it's great!
This novel is pretty good and when I first started reading it, I thought it was a translated novel. That explains all the grammar mistakes sprinkled here and there. Besides the occasional missing word and incorrect spelling though, this novel is definitely able to captivate long-time readers that are tired of reading half baked original works. The story development and world building makes alone makes it stand out. Definitely a good read. The only suggestion I have for the author is to pace the storyline a little bit. Some parts should progress quickly, while other parts need to be slowed down to make the novel more realistic to readers. Balancing both will make this novel even better.
This is my first story i read up to date and this is also my first review. I enjoy this story alot. The grammar has problems but it is all easy to understand. I dislike some characters but thats not to much of a problem and it could change with time. Since i read this mostly for the MC and action, i struggle with chapters where he is not in. Do give it a try!
Thanks for the novel 😊😊😆😄😅😉😉😐😐😯😑😯😇😆😆😇😇😂😁😂😀😁😀😁😀😅😆😅😆😐😯😉😉😯😄😅😅😀😁😊😀😀😂😂😁😂😆😇😅😇😀😁😀😀😁😆😅😉😐😯
A well written novel, no mismatch in history. We easily enter the world of the author, and our hopes are never disappointed. I recommend! Ploufi
I really like this novel, it has solid background, great storyline just sometimes author forgot or completely ignore logic that comes in way to make mc OP. LITERALLY he totally neglect logics to make mc OP like - 1)how he can make potions at physic enrichment rank without a training or hard work and that are 10 times better than currently existing in that world( can't believe it). 10 times better are you kidding me, the world alredy has potions that are best from deity realm and he has 10 times better one(with cheap materials) and can make like nothing, let's say THE EMPYRIAN CHAOS IS from plane above the deity realm or strongest there even then it doesn't make sense why the hell did that entity (or his fellow cultivators almost of same realm) invest his time in the starting realm of cultivation and even that much that he make such heaven defying potions. F...u...c.........,.....,............. 2) he just discover 13th SEAL with just a thought, he thought and poof.. he discover the 13th seal. All other characters or billions of trillions people in past and in present are what idiots or I am the one who is. And even THE GREATEST EMPYRIAN CHOS CAN MAKE THE STUPID POTION HEAVEN DEFYING BUT HE DON'T INVEST HIS TIME TO WORK ON 13TH SEAL WHICH I SUPPOSE IS FAR IMPORTANT THAN THAT FUCKING POTION AND TELL HIM THAT "BODY AND SOUL ARE SAME. AHHHHHHHHH......FUCK.... no character development, I think he is more mature at start before he gets the bumbo jumbo his parents left behind, now he is like a arrogant **** who do messes with anyone without giving a thought about consequences. It's like the more story progresses the more he get arrogant
Revelar spoiler It's definitely one of the best story I've read in webnovel. Really good character design and so far It's not a harem. I am hoping it will continue this way and become OTP. The story development and world building is also well written. I can see this story evolving in a new way with how the world keeps expanding. I am very satisfied with the story. Hope the author can continue to write this beautiful story.
it a good novel for those who want to try something new but also a little bit familiar, i love it and am always waiting in anticipation for a new chapter to be uploaded everyday.
I am really sick of the chaos and divine **** that is popping up in this novel.......... why is chaos always the end????? why can't you for once make a story with a special premise???
A great novel that is hidden.. found by chance and found a unique cultivation system...good world building and characters....all i have left is to thank the author of this work
it's a good book, it's a good book the Mc is well written the story is well-paced all in all it's a great cultivation novel so 7/10 for the Mc 9/10 for the cultivation 8/10 for the writing 6/10 for the story so far. more to come as i read
Hello everyone, Author here. I want to thank those who have read my novel so far and special thanks to those who cheered me with power stones. I hope you all enjoy the story. Please continue to support the novel with power stones, reviews and don't forget to comment. I am going to gift myself a good rating, don't mind it. Have a nice read!!