Reviews of Dream of The Beginning by Fellas - Webnovel

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ArdaPendragon

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mizuki_kuma

i like the novel been waiting for a new update for a year i hope the didn't drop the novel sorry I'm not good in English I just wanna say i like the novel hope for chapter updates

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BoTMaster

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Nyx_Celeste

I vouched for the author to return his works. This is truly a HIDDEN Fate fanfic. Ignore the nonsense being spouted by those in the old comment section. Once you passed this part, the story gets better later on. This is one of those rare case in which the Sixth Magic, a supposed theory is truly the most overpowered magic in Nasuverse.

LV 14

HypnosGodofSleep

I should have read the comments first............................................................................................................................

LV 14

Yandere_Supremacy

Good story but I feel the MCs intelligence was nerfed for no reason at certain points due to not investigating servants or events that happened like the school fight when he was aware which doesn’t make sense

LV 4

No_friends_

my day is ruined .

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Phase_MorningStar

I've Read The Story Again I Gotta Say Volume 2 Was Good Although I Didn't Like Volume 1 I'm Sry For My Last Comment But I Already Deleted It[img=recommend][img=recommend]

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ThisNovelSucksBro

You know why, no need to ask. -----------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------

LV 12

Bor3D

This was actually a decent fate ff, i expect the author to not drop this story. ---------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------

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DontCallMeSimp

gg boi

LV 4

Parsakzz

Good Story With Character Design And unique Fate Fanfin Good Story With Character Design And unique Fate Fanfin Good Story With Character Design And unique Fate Fanfin

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badboy_5104

Sesungguhnya ini adalah fanfic yang bagus, namun itu berubah menjadi menjijikkan setelah Bab tentang Kanade keluar, Saya menyesal membaca ini karena tidak membaca ulasan terlebih dahulu.

LV 14

dao_of_harem123

semi ntr not for me )))))):)))))):*****************************************************************&&&&&&&&&&&&&&&&&&&&&&&&&&&&&&&&&&&&&&&&&&&&&&&&

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Daoist204928

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Shinobu

🖲️🛡️🖲️🛡️🖲️💊💉💊💉💊💉💊⚛️♾⚛️♾⚛️♾⚛️♾⚛️♾⚛️♾⚛️♾ This is at the top of my Queue ♾⚛️♾⚛️♾⚛️♾♾⚛️♾⚛️♾⚛️♾⚛️♾⚛️♾⚛️♾⚛️♾ This is at the top of my Queue ♾⚛️♾⚛️♾⚛️♾♾

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god_of_the_empty

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BosMafia

Tambahkan ulasan Kualitas menulis Memperbarui Stabilitas Pengembangan Cerita Desain karakter latar belakang dunia Tarif Keseluruhan 5.0 Ulasan harus lebih dari 140 karakter

LV 4

AngelYC145

I have deemed this fanfic as............ ....................... ....................... ....................... ....................... ....................

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gilgamesh_heroking

the story feels like bull and has forced plot like kc wrote down the story of fate grand order and somehow his mystic eyes which should be overpowered in combat is useless or unused in important fights

LV 4

Noname126

ah well it not too bad I was just a bit mad when i first read this it more of something I don't personally like that the fic being bad itself but yeah give it a try i don't know man it just isn't for me

LV 5

asssssshhole

overall, this story is good.... fate with somelike multiverse travel in future. there is "no NTR" in this fanfic, since there was no romantic relationship between mc and kanade. mc has system, but there was no quest-system. also mc has brain. in the end,,,, if youre like mc with good brain, fanfic with realistic version of typemoon well this fanfic for you. but if youre like story with romance+grab them all "waifu", dont read this book.

LV 4

Fly_you_fools

This story is good but fixing the grammatical errors will even make this even better, now I’m going say this, there are some reviews here that say there is NTR here, no there isn’t. The mc doesn’t love Kanade, he has NO feelings for her. (Also hope that there will be more updates, please)

LV 5

Yuri_is_Ntr

Oh, I remember you! I was reading you stories before. First one multiverse try - dropped on like 100+ Second try died on like 35+ chapters or something. But yeah, what was always present is those annoying anime clichés with mc acting like retarde around girls... It's doesn't change. I guess that's wasn't a problem, but a feature. Well, anyway. Now you destroyed novel even faster and probably whould drop soon. Can't say more then :you get what you ****ING deserves. You could forsee it. You are not that dumb . But oh well. Maybe in another 5 years you write something actually great. P. S. If i remember correctly, in one of the reviews on you previous work I was already claiming that you have potential. AND was ragging how all you mc's a weak-willed simps. Nothing have changed. Ironic.

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Kaniion

It was an interesting story, but after what was shown about Kanade I dropped it, the author should say the story had that kind of content in the synopsis, a lot of people find it unpleasant.

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emiya

This was actually a decent fate ff, i expect the author to not drop this story ..................................................................................................................................................

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alcidess

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rouxinol

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