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Not sure if this was dropped or not but It would pretty disappointing if it was because this really has potential and has been very well written so far
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This is one of my favorite comic book fanfics. It gives valid (enough) reasons for him to have powers. Has an dope ass plot twist and it doesn't just have him brute force all the problems. Lastly it has a semi realistic protagonist with realistic consequences to his actions.
A nice dc fanfic with a realistic mc, not some angst driveen teenager but a real character with real goal and responds in way that makes sense.
Although the name and small amount of chapters put me off the novel at first after really reading it I find that it was an amazing story (UPLOAD MORE PLESE)
One of the best DC fanfic i've ever read , it has it's up's and down but overall a great work. The chapters are long too, i mean , in webnovel the chapters are always kinda short , but this one is just great.
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An amazing novel. It is so good that you forget for a moment it is a fan-fic. It is pretty fleshed out and the chapters are quite long. This novel is definitely worth a read.
Great novel. I'm not usually a fan of the revenge plot cliché but this one was executed quite nicely. I like how it didn't last that long either. Chapters are nice and long. The complexity of the protagonist is interesting too. I'm curious who you have planned as a love interest(s)? I just hope it's not Jessica; I don't like OC love interests much.
Good story so far. Just don't make mc a typical hero with spandex, helping random strangers from thieves/murderers. Mc powers are too strong to deal with such little things in the grand scheme of things and he is not superman after all.
Please read true telekineis fan fiction on wen novel or there are various novels on fanfiction.net just search on Google u would get various ideas. U could make him evolve his DNA to max and he could research how to get divinity with help of Diana it would be great
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The chapters are very very long. Its prob 50 chapters fron other novels The mc is likeable and theres a good representation of the justice league . Great novel
This is by far the best DC fanfic I have ever read. It has tragedy, character building, and more to come. Just go and read it, it's really good. The only thing that renders this review from being a 5 star is the small Grammer mistakes and not too much character design.
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The story is great. It is smooth, entertaining, funny, dark, interesting, the climb in power is good, the fight are depicted correctly. The author is talented that's for sure. I recommend greatly !!!!
5 from me,it was long time when I enjoyed reading something on this god forbidden site. Good written MC, even NPC have different personalities and motivation which is pretty fucking rare even if you have Universe build you need to write something interesting yourself. I don't want to proposing anything but ending with MC killed would be Epic, and with twist, at least that's my opinion.
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This is a good story. Got a good background,mystery,manipulating and emotion. Its got its up and down and keep reader guessing. Good good good good good good good Good good good good good good good Good good good good good good good Good good good good good good good Good good good good good good good
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Very good and has a lot of potential! Hope to see this novel go for awhile! ................................................................
Great story that wasn't too fast nor too slow. Grammer can be spotty at times but not to the point that you can't understand it. Overall great story but it doesn't look like the author will finish it
Not sure if this was dropped or not but It would pretty disappointing if it was because this really has potential and has been very well written so far
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This is one of my favorite comic book fanfics. It gives valid (enough) reasons for him to have powers. Has an dope ass plot twist and it doesn't just have him brute force all the problems. Lastly it has a semi realistic protagonist with realistic consequences to his actions.
A nice dc fanfic with a realistic mc, not some angst driveen teenager but a real character with real goal and responds in way that makes sense.
Although the name and small amount of chapters put me off the novel at first after really reading it I find that it was an amazing story (UPLOAD MORE PLESE)
One of the best DC fanfic i've ever read , it has it's up's and down but overall a great work. The chapters are long too, i mean , in webnovel the chapters are always kinda short , but this one is just great.
thank youuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuu
An amazing novel. It is so good that you forget for a moment it is a fan-fic. It is pretty fleshed out and the chapters are quite long. This novel is definitely worth a read.
Great novel. I'm not usually a fan of the revenge plot cliché but this one was executed quite nicely. I like how it didn't last that long either. Chapters are nice and long. The complexity of the protagonist is interesting too. I'm curious who you have planned as a love interest(s)? I just hope it's not Jessica; I don't like OC love interests much.
Good story so far. Just don't make mc a typical hero with spandex, helping random strangers from thieves/murderers. Mc powers are too strong to deal with such little things in the grand scheme of things and he is not superman after all.
Please read true telekineis fan fiction on wen novel or there are various novels on fanfiction.net just search on Google u would get various ideas. U could make him evolve his DNA to max and he could research how to get divinity with help of Diana it would be great
: ) ............................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................
The chapters are very very long. Its prob 50 chapters fron other novels The mc is likeable and theres a good representation of the justice league . Great novel
This is by far the best DC fanfic I have ever read. It has tragedy, character building, and more to come. Just go and read it, it's really good. The only thing that renders this review from being a 5 star is the small Grammer mistakes and not too much character design.
All u need to know about this is that it’s good like super duper goooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooood
The story is great. It is smooth, entertaining, funny, dark, interesting, the climb in power is good, the fight are depicted correctly. The author is talented that's for sure. I recommend greatly !!!!
5 from me,it was long time when I enjoyed reading something on this god forbidden site. Good written MC, even NPC have different personalities and motivation which is pretty fucking rare even if you have Universe build you need to write something interesting yourself. I don't want to proposing anything but ending with MC killed would be Epic, and with twist, at least that's my opinion.
Revelar spoiler This is a good story. Got a good background,mystery,manipulating and emotion. Its got its up and down and keep reader guessing. Good good good good good good good Good good good good good good good Good good good good good good good Good good good good good good good Good good good good good good good
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Very good and has a lot of potential! Hope to see this novel go for awhile! ................................................................
Great story that wasn't too fast nor too slow. Grammer can be spotty at times but not to the point that you can't understand it. Overall great story but it doesn't look like the author will finish it