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A new Apocalyptic- game-genre novel.. Thank god it's happening in another country... Unlike other CN... The background is based in semi realistic world... The style of narration is simple and easy to understand.. And makes you feel the simulation as if we are watching... The characters are excellently fleshed out.. With their own unique temperaments and backgrounds... Author incorporated both game and system fiction into the world building.. To create a fantastical fiction novel... With the same stable updates and writing quality.. I hope author continues writing this amazing book... And journey us through the end...
This book is really just amazing I find the plot and the storyline very interesting it seems as the book goes along it just becomes even more fascinating
Why Mc always start searching for someone useless family when they wil be dead if not for plot armor fir being Mc family
What a complete waste of my time. The mc does NOT personify a anti hero. In the contrary, he becomes a hero towards the end
Hey don't take this for real I haven't read this yet but It already sound amazing "zombie" Amazing "Hot guy" very hot ;) I have very high hope and standard for this. I hope everyone can have an amazing time reading this. [img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend]
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The story is actually good ive read quite a few chapyers alreast nas i cam say that its most definitely i would read to pass timw or if im just bored or looking for an good Read
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First few chapters are brilliant. MC is lawless badass killing who he wants and doing what he likes and then WTF????? He robbed bank and ask for 1 minute to be in vault really without reason? Then he left bank guard who wanted to kill him alive. Then his people stopped him from killing some old guy(how if his power is alot higher then them?) besides he was saying all the time that he have to listen to every of his orders. Then his friend stops him from killing guy who has been shooting to them and breaks his best weapon and MC is saying to him sorry and leaves then alive. Then he saves they lives again on some conditions and do not keep them because some girl show up. Then he is not taking over city hall when the police don't have guns and leaves it to old city mayor just like that. Is he jesus christ or mother Teresa? He should be anti hero. 2 more things anoing as hell. 1 he killed his father found out where is his mother and sister and he do all useless shit and not looking for them In apocalypse when they should die straight away just takes care or some strangers and trys to make them his subordinates apparently. Why? Is just not logical. 2 he meets a girls and he is scared of her family and her. wtf? where is my badass mother****er MC from first few chapters??????
I really like "weak to strong" novels coz it's very fun reading about their journey to success and power and also the adventures on the way. It's very satisfying to see them become strong so yeah
I assume writing quality refers to grammatical errors and the like so I gave that lower ratings. I'll be honest, this story is a copy paste of Shovels in Spades but I don't mind that. It's a great story, and author if you haven't read it yet, I suggest trying it. You might get some inspiration. Work on your "his"/"her" grammatical errors, you often say "her" when referring to a man. Also, stop saying dying times. That's not the expression, it's trying times. I find the story really well written and I'm thankful for this, though the system could've been improved on from the start. It's a pretty trash and worthless system, a system shop would've been extremely poggers. Or being able to talk to the system. Not a fan of how much the system lacks substance.
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It's okay,I really like zombie fiction so this story is a read for me,but I do think you could improve in some areas lol. Still though I recommend it to people!
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No me gustó, no explican demasiadas cosas, toca adaptarse a la historia o inventarse algo para completar lo que falta, además el protagonista tenía una personalidad chevere, pero desde que murió el papá se convirtió en un idiota, leí 50 capítulos y ya no aguanto leer más.
pls if you plan to make a new zombie novel in future, then could you make it like, where mc either play solo or is kind of indifferent and cold and only care about himself and no one else. He may have goal like survive, become strong or become god or something, ...........maybe one day. Well i just want to see a dark novel with strong mc and with a zombie setting where betrayal , killing, backstabbing .. ....should be kind of normal if you are weak. Like Survival of fittest or strong and weak meat or something like that. Even though i didn't like much but still your story is great, so keep up good work.
great story but is the mc mentally challenged like is it a medical reason he is so stupid if so that make more sense cause sometimes I feel like the mc is a child
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This story starts out kinda slow, Finally, it gets going in a traditional sort of Zombie apocalypse with a system kinda way. The thing is, the Protagonist is too big a scumbag. Personally, I would rather die than be forced to be someone's lackey. Correspondingly, I would never force someone else to be my slave or even follower. Uf nothing else, who wants to be surrounded by scum who would rather submit than to simply die? Yeah, and when he took the woman's pistol! Guns are sacred,. Kill someone, bit disarming them and leaving them alive is equivalent to spitting on their shadow!
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I have to say that I love the story especially since Jun is kinda similar to me🤣. I honestly find a little humor though when I read and notice some words that are misspelled but because I know what you meant I read it just fine. You also tend to phrase things wrong....in a way. I dont wanna spoil but I would just try to keep an eye out on your material. I would suggest having someone review your work before publishing to point out any incorrect words, gender identification, phrases, and more stuff like that
I started reading this week, currently in chapter 47, I noticed several errors in the attribute system, the author seems to forget the attribute points earned and invested. The protagonist gains points in some statistics and chapters after that gain disappears, he has already lost 3 attributes in strength, I saw that many readers pointed out these errors, but the author didn't bother to correct. The dialogues also seem very artificial, I can't imagine people talking in this way, the relationships are confusing and the plot has several holes. But if you don't mind these many mistakes, it's a good story.
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Beginning interesting after that skills become useless, characters become bipolar or have a 180 change in character, more and more things pile up which make the story boring, repetitive and a readable. I read up to chapter 123 (Underwater). I love stories with ruthless MC, the authors usually start by showing them killing or threatening someone. As the story progresses the MC becomes more emotional, stops killing to the point where they leave people alive that will most likely come back and threaten their lives and the worst thing of all the MC becomes dumber with every chapter.
I haven't read this yet, but I know I would hate it!!!!!! Apocalypse genre? Hate it so much I puke!!!!! Zombie?? Monster?? Hate it for the cliche!!! Game system? Hate it also!!!! You cliche writer, write and post more chapter so I can hate it more!!!!!! More chapter for God sake so I can thrash you!!! *Actually, I'm just writing it to fulfill the exp requirement. *
A new Apocalyptic- game-genre novel.. Thank god it's happening in another country... Unlike other CN... The background is based in semi realistic world... The style of narration is simple and easy to understand.. And makes you feel the simulation as if we are watching... The characters are excellently fleshed out.. With their own unique temperaments and backgrounds... Author incorporated both game and system fiction into the world building.. To create a fantastical fiction novel... With the same stable updates and writing quality.. I hope author continues writing this amazing book... And journey us through the end...
This book is really just amazing I find the plot and the storyline very interesting it seems as the book goes along it just becomes even more fascinating
Why Mc always start searching for someone useless family when they wil be dead if not for plot armor fir being Mc family
What a complete waste of my time. The mc does NOT personify a anti hero. In the contrary, he becomes a hero towards the end
Hey don't take this for real I haven't read this yet but It already sound amazing "zombie" Amazing "Hot guy" very hot ;) I have very high hope and standard for this. I hope everyone can have an amazing time reading this. [img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend]
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The story is actually good ive read quite a few chapyers alreast nas i cam say that its most definitely i would read to pass timw or if im just bored or looking for an good Read
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First few chapters are brilliant. MC is lawless badass killing who he wants and doing what he likes and then WTF????? He robbed bank and ask for 1 minute to be in vault really without reason? Then he left bank guard who wanted to kill him alive. Then his people stopped him from killing some old guy(how if his power is alot higher then them?) besides he was saying all the time that he have to listen to every of his orders. Then his friend stops him from killing guy who has been shooting to them and breaks his best weapon and MC is saying to him sorry and leaves then alive. Then he saves they lives again on some conditions and do not keep them because some girl show up. Then he is not taking over city hall when the police don't have guns and leaves it to old city mayor just like that. Is he jesus christ or mother Teresa? He should be anti hero. 2 more things anoing as hell. 1 he killed his father found out where is his mother and sister and he do all useless shit and not looking for them In apocalypse when they should die straight away just takes care or some strangers and trys to make them his subordinates apparently. Why? Is just not logical. 2 he meets a girls and he is scared of her family and her. wtf? where is my badass mother****er MC from first few chapters??????
I really like "weak to strong" novels coz it's very fun reading about their journey to success and power and also the adventures on the way. It's very satisfying to see them become strong so yeah
I assume writing quality refers to grammatical errors and the like so I gave that lower ratings. I'll be honest, this story is a copy paste of Shovels in Spades but I don't mind that. It's a great story, and author if you haven't read it yet, I suggest trying it. You might get some inspiration. Work on your "his"/"her" grammatical errors, you often say "her" when referring to a man. Also, stop saying dying times. That's not the expression, it's trying times. I find the story really well written and I'm thankful for this, though the system could've been improved on from the start. It's a pretty trash and worthless system, a system shop would've been extremely poggers. Or being able to talk to the system. Not a fan of how much the system lacks substance.
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It's okay,I really like zombie fiction so this story is a read for me,but I do think you could improve in some areas lol. Still though I recommend it to people!
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No me gustó, no explican demasiadas cosas, toca adaptarse a la historia o inventarse algo para completar lo que falta, además el protagonista tenía una personalidad chevere, pero desde que murió el papá se convirtió en un idiota, leí 50 capítulos y ya no aguanto leer más.
pls if you plan to make a new zombie novel in future, then could you make it like, where mc either play solo or is kind of indifferent and cold and only care about himself and no one else. He may have goal like survive, become strong or become god or something, ...........maybe one day. Well i just want to see a dark novel with strong mc and with a zombie setting where betrayal , killing, backstabbing .. ....should be kind of normal if you are weak. Like Survival of fittest or strong and weak meat or something like that. Even though i didn't like much but still your story is great, so keep up good work.
great story but is the mc mentally challenged like is it a medical reason he is so stupid if so that make more sense cause sometimes I feel like the mc is a child
Hey there! Good day for writing! If you wanted to see whether you can get paid by distributing the current work or getting financial support by writing new work, you might want to contact geekyteddyyo@gmail.com. A brief introduction, some sample charpters or links will be appriciated when reaching out.
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This story starts out kinda slow, Finally, it gets going in a traditional sort of Zombie apocalypse with a system kinda way. The thing is, the Protagonist is too big a scumbag. Personally, I would rather die than be forced to be someone's lackey. Correspondingly, I would never force someone else to be my slave or even follower. Uf nothing else, who wants to be surrounded by scum who would rather submit than to simply die? Yeah, and when he took the woman's pistol! Guns are sacred,. Kill someone, bit disarming them and leaving them alive is equivalent to spitting on their shadow!
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I have to say that I love the story especially since Jun is kinda similar to me🤣. I honestly find a little humor though when I read and notice some words that are misspelled but because I know what you meant I read it just fine. You also tend to phrase things wrong....in a way. I dont wanna spoil but I would just try to keep an eye out on your material. I would suggest having someone review your work before publishing to point out any incorrect words, gender identification, phrases, and more stuff like that
I started reading this week, currently in chapter 47, I noticed several errors in the attribute system, the author seems to forget the attribute points earned and invested. The protagonist gains points in some statistics and chapters after that gain disappears, he has already lost 3 attributes in strength, I saw that many readers pointed out these errors, but the author didn't bother to correct. The dialogues also seem very artificial, I can't imagine people talking in this way, the relationships are confusing and the plot has several holes. But if you don't mind these many mistakes, it's a good story.
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Beginning interesting after that skills become useless, characters become bipolar or have a 180 change in character, more and more things pile up which make the story boring, repetitive and a readable. I read up to chapter 123 (Underwater). I love stories with ruthless MC, the authors usually start by showing them killing or threatening someone. As the story progresses the MC becomes more emotional, stops killing to the point where they leave people alive that will most likely come back and threaten their lives and the worst thing of all the MC becomes dumber with every chapter.
I haven't read this yet, but I know I would hate it!!!!!! Apocalypse genre? Hate it so much I puke!!!!! Zombie?? Monster?? Hate it for the cliche!!! Game system? Hate it also!!!! You cliche writer, write and post more chapter so I can hate it more!!!!!! More chapter for God sake so I can thrash you!!! *Actually, I'm just writing it to fulfill the exp requirement. *