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-Don't Read This Story! You will likely regret it.
-Don't read this if you're looking for something good, this is a below-average story, written by a below-average writer that many find hard to understand from lack of clarity.
-The Mc is terrible, the characters are terrible, the ideas are terrible, the pacing is terrible, the harem is terrible.
-This is not the marvel story you're looking for. It's not even in the MCU yet after so long, and may never be with how slow it is.
-This is a wish-fulfillment story that is in the MCU universe and will follow the MCU in my own way. The goal is to blend my story in and around the MCU.
-Be warned I'm a below-average writer, I need to work on my details and wording, and probably everything else. Expect quality fluctuations.
-This will have a harem since my last story didn't have one. --Expect badly written lemon scenes. They will be marked for an easy skip for those who don't want to read it. If you can handle all that, then welcome aboard.
-The Asgardian Theoric is about to get a second chance. [[[ https://marvel.fandom.com/wiki/Theoric_(Earth-616) ]]]
-The story starts before the MCU where he will grow his abilities on his way to becoming indomitable.
-1st volume: Prologue
-2nd volume: Troll War - (ch.12-59)
-3rd volume: Hidden Forces - (ch. 60-194)
-4th volume: Olympians
-5th volume: Mutants
-6th volume: MCU
-7th volume: Darkness
-8th volume: Epilogue
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To help answer some questions people might have.
-This is a fanfic, don't expect everything to be super accurate to marvel canon or history in general. I'm taking the info provided that's already been established and turning into a story of my own making.
- No kingdom-building,
- The beginning of the story puts a lot of people off because I didn't go the normal route people would like, and they don't tend to like the troll arc. The next arc also starts a slow tedious writing style that needs much work and improvement.
- He also starts a little rash and seems a little weak because his powers easily drain him, some of this is explained later though and fixed by Gaea, but many miss this and only concentrate on the fact that he isn't being and doing what they think he should.
- I should also explain that he has some memories that were locked away and then deleted because of his rashness. This was simply a way to end the whole locked memory thing, the Acanti soul was a plot point to give him future memories of the MCU, beyond that it served no more purpose so I got rid of all the other useless knowledge, He was in no way nerfed as some would like to believe.
- I made him a little more emotional than I would like at the beginning, it was my attempt at trying to give him a personality after being criticized for the lack thereof in my last story.
- Ruthless? I don't think so, I'm going more the route of a fair Mc. He'll do more of an eye for an eye type stuff, gender does not matter to him when it comes to this.
- While the harem isn't the end all be all goal, it's true that he is going around getting women.
- I do have a story beyond the harem though and will not focus too heavily on the harem beyond the obvious. Mostly he just goes around sleeping with them and beyond that is anyone's guess whether they stick around or not, I do try and make it feel a little more real, but it is a harem.
- Basically a harem with a progressing story.
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-I have also posted this story on Royal Road and Wattpad.
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I was going to save this and start reading it when he gets to the start of the MCU. But 146 chapters and it's only in Vol.3. The MCU parts start at Vol.6. I was like okay I can still wait. That was till I saw he hasn't posted a chapter in 2 months so....that's probably not going to happen. IDK but it's probably dropped.
What can i say, young people won't understand and internet karens will hate it. This story has a very solid comics background as the mc theoric, his wife, acanti, rock trolls, ughh almost everythibg follow's comic book lore and a great plot twist of acanti, really a breath of fresh air in marvel fanfic, The grammar's great, character introductions are really good and damn man introducing character's not often seen in ff, and even in the comics lol. Kudos to you for this amazing ff, and also hope you finish this book and don't mind the karens you are doing and amazing job.
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This is one of my favorite novels of all time. I have already read it two times and I am considering doing it again. I have noticed the author has been slightly less enthusiastic about writing the story and I hope this comment openes his eyes to all the people who love and have been affected by his story.
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I feel bad for the author feel bad 😔 for the author, he’s put so much fucking work into this FanFic but it’s barely appreciated. Vote 🗳 for him with your magic stones!
A good novel and a new take on the marvel universe, awesome characters and good power balance ,makes the mc to be just right, not too op but not too weak either
Volumen 0 : Auxiliary Volume
Volumen 1 : Prologue
Volumen 2 : Troll War
- 12 Preparations 4 years ago
- 13 Suicide Squad 4 years ago
- 14 In transit 4 years ago
- 15 Arrived 4 years ago
- 16 First Contact 4 years ago
- 17 Acceptance 4 years ago
- 18 Recovery 4 years ago
- 19 Outpost 4 years ago
- 20 Decisions 4 years ago
- 21 Armies 4 years ago
- 22 Battle 4 years ago
- 23 Accusation 4 years ago
- 24 New Mission 4 years ago
- 25 High 4 years ago
- 26 Gaark and Ekak 4 years ago
- 27 Kronans 4 years ago
- 28 Practice 4 years ago
- 29 New Path 4 years ago
- 30 Old Mission 4 years ago
- 31 Escort 4 years ago
- 32 Supply Depot (1) 4 years ago
- 33 Supply Depot (2) 4 years ago
- 34 Escape 4 years ago
- 35 Muthos and Askella 4 years ago
- 36 Rescued 4 years ago
- 37 Problems 4 years ago
- 38 80% 4 years ago
- 39 Codgel 4 years ago
- 40 Ruins 4 years ago
- 41 Olik and Grak 4 years ago
- 42 Theoric vs Olik 4 years ago
- 43 Vott vs Grak 4 years ago
- 44 Last Push 4 years ago
- 45 Battle Royale 4 years ago
- 46 Grundor 4 years ago
- 47 Coming up Short 4 years ago
- 48 Damsel 4 years ago
- 49 T v U v T 4 years ago
- 50 Fruition 4 years ago
- 51 T v M v T 4 years ago
- 52 T v M v T (2) 4 years ago
- 53 T v M v T (3) 4 years ago
- 54 Return 4 years ago
- 55 Victory Feast 4 years ago
- 56 Lady Sif (18+) 4 years ago
- 57 Report 4 years ago
- 58 Leaving 4 years ago
- 59 Troll arc epilogue 4 years ago
Volumen 3 : Hidden Forces
- 60 Long Wait 4 years ago
- 61 Velia 4 years ago
- 62 General Store 4 years ago
- 63 Atticus 4 years ago
- 64 Village Leader 4 years ago
- 65 Mansion Massacre 4 years ago
- 66 Evil Exposed 4 years ago
- 67 Frustrating End 4 years ago
- 68 New Home 4 years ago
- 69 Terrifying Disaster 4 years ago
- 70 Visit 4 years ago
- 71 Small Jump 4 years ago
- 72 First Magical Creature 4 years ago
- 73 Io and Annabeth 4 years ago
- 74 Full Circle 4 years ago
- 75 Arachnophobia 4 years ago
- 76 Meeting the Wife 4 years ago
- 77 No More Chances 4 years ago
- 78 Defending the Caravan 4 years ago
- 79 Sore Feet 4 years ago
- 80 Showing Off 4 years ago
- 81 Villa bath (18+) 4 years ago
- 82 Villa bath 2 (18+) 4 years ago
- 83 Flavius 4 years ago
- 84 Athena's Temple 4 years ago
- 85 Head Priestess 4 years ago
- 86 Escorted 4 years ago
- 87 Thena 4 years ago
- 88 Bianca 4 years ago
- 89 Bianca Kajlich (18+) 4 years ago
- 90 Mysterious Deal 4 years ago
- 91 Morning Fun (18+) 4 years ago
- 92 Procuring a Ride 4 years ago
- 93 Gorgilla 4 years ago
- 94 Docks 4 years ago
- 95 Barfight 3 years ago
- 96 Caius 3 years ago
- 97 Setting Sail 3 years ago
- 98 Giganto 3 years ago
- 99 Unwanted Prayers 3 years ago
- 100 Sirens 3 years ago
- 101 Argument 3 years ago
- 102 Lydia (18+) 3 years ago
- 103 Punishment (18+) 3 years ago
- 104 Io's Decision (18+) 3 years ago
- 105 Anna's Wild Ride (18+) 3 years ago
- 106 Sea Ants 3 years ago
- 107 Statues of the Fallen 3 years ago
- 108 Medusa's Lair 3 years ago
- 109 Gorgons 3 years ago
- 110 Medusa 3 years ago
- 111 Cobra Gorgons 3 years ago
- 112 The Holy Weapon 3 years ago
- 113 Rescuing Medusa 3 years ago
- 114 Healing Medusa 3 years ago
- 115 Chatting 3 years ago
- 116 Nina (18+) 3 years ago
- 117 Landfall 3 years ago
- 118 Giganto v2 3 years ago
- 119 (2) 3 years ago
- 120 (3) 3 years ago
- 121 Sigyn's Determination 3 years ago
- 122 Downtime 3 years ago
- 123 New Companion 3 years ago
- 124 ... 3 years ago
- 125 Sneaking 3 years ago
- 126 Mourning 3 years ago
- 127 New Destination 3 years ago
- 128 Zeus 3 years ago
- 129 New Goal 3 years ago
- 130 Heading Out 3 years ago
- 131 Happenings 3 years ago
- 132 New Crew 3 years ago
- 133 Exposed 3 years ago
- 134 Selene 3 years ago
- 135 Sailing 3 years ago
- 136 Selene (18+) 3 years ago
- 137 Fresh Start 3 years ago
- 138 King Minos 3 years ago
- 139 Minotaur 3 years ago
- 140 Concern 3 years ago
- 141 . 3 years ago
- 142 (18+) 3 years ago
- 143 Treasure 3 years ago
- 144 Blockade 3 years ago
- 145 Talus 3 years ago
- 146 (2) 3 years ago
- 147 (3) 2 years ago
- 148 (4) 2 years ago
- 149 (5) 2 years ago
- 150 Theoric vs Talus 2 years ago
- 151 Thetis 2 years ago
- 152 (18+) 2 years ago
- 153 Moving On 2 years ago
- 154 Atlanteans 2 years ago
- 155 Gigantus 2 years ago
- 156 Odyssey 2 years ago
- 157 Aeolus 2 years ago
- 158 T v A 2 years ago
- 159 (2) 2 years ago
- 160 New Experiences 2 years ago
- 161 Sersi (18+) 2 years ago
- 162 Something 2 years ago
- 163 . 2 years ago
- 164 T v H 2 years ago
- 165 Golden Fleece 2 years ago
- 166 Gaea (18+) 2 years ago
- 167 Aqueos 2 years ago
- 168 Kro War 2 years ago
- 169 The End Of Flavius 2 years ago
- 170 A v A 2 years ago
- 171 Lemuria 2 years ago
- 172 Before Attack 2 years ago
- 173 Ghaur 2 years ago
- 174 Rumble 2 years ago
- 175 Lemuria (5) 2 years ago
- 176 Where art thou portal? 2 years ago
- 177 War, A v A (2) 2 years ago
- 178 R v T 2 years ago
- 179 A v A (3) 2 years ago
- 180 Gigantus v A 2 years ago
- 181 Temple's Assault 2 years ago
- 182 Nicodemus 2 years ago
- 183 Sigyn's Resolve 2 years ago
- 184 T v M v T 2 years ago
- 185 One 2 years ago
- 186 Egypt 2 years ago
- 187 Z v GT v P 2 years ago
- 188 - 2 years ago
- 189 Z v M 2 years ago
- 190 Z v M v P 2 years ago
- 191 Gods 2 years ago
- 192 Celestials 2 years ago
- 193 The End Is Nigh 2 years ago
- 194 Hidden Forces Epilogue 2 years ago
- 195 To Be Continued??? 2 years ago
- 196 ... 2 years ago
- 197 (R-18) Chapter ideas that were made earlier then needed. 2 years ago
- 198 Some other Fanfic Ideas that I thought about 2 years ago
- 199 Some other Fanfic Ideas that I thought about 2 years ago
Honestly it started out decent and thought the story would pick up but it just stayed in this arc that was the entire novel so far.... I was going t9 make a review to tell people when to skip but so far at chapter 59 it just ended lol so if you start reading and want to skip that arc or speed read whatever then it has to be after that chapter