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Writing quality good 4/5 Update stability 3/5 Story development 2/5 Charachter design 1/5 World background 3/5 ( Atg used way to much) If you like an mc who thinks he's in control but is actually just a puppet on strings for all the people around him to control then this is your novel.
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I just finished reading and I fell in love, the grammar is great, the MC so far seems like he thinks things through and tries to plan ahead for future troubles that may arise. Another thing to point out is that the main character has "one" type of power, not a mix of hundreds of animes/novels/manga, etc. I love he prioritizes swordsmanship and doesn't want his future powers to affect it. You have possibly one of the best stories so far (even tho it's 3 chapters long now). Do your best, all the support from here! End of the essay.
-Welp im not suprised that the mc gain a new personality after that torture like training and that for 7 years -I just hope the mc will have 1 or 2 woman as a wife -befriend yun che or take the two heavenly treasure from yun che and have ******* as his master -torture and kill his father/master from those suffering -get the inheritance of the azure dragon and phoenix -welp i give 4 star for this novel its still new and its just the beggining story of the novel -i just hope this novel release 3 to 5 chapter every week if possible
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Revelar spoiler Writing quality good 4/5 Update stability 3/5 Story development 2/5 Charachter design 1/5 World background 3/5 ( Atg used way to much) If you like an mc who thinks he's in control but is actually just a puppet on strings for all the people around him to control then this is your novel.
MORE!!! MORE!!! MORE!!! MORE!!! MORE!!! MORE!!! MORE!!! MORE!!! MORE!!! MORE!!! MORE!!! MORE!!! MORE!!! MORE!!! MORE!!! MORE!!! MORE!!! MORE!!! MORE!!! MORE!!! MORE!!! MORE!!! MORE!!! MORE!!! MORE!!! MORE!!! MORE!!! MORE!!! MORE!!! MORE!!! DON'T DROP IT!!!
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I just finished reading and I fell in love, the grammar is great, the MC so far seems like he thinks things through and tries to plan ahead for future troubles that may arise. Another thing to point out is that the main character has "one" type of power, not a mix of hundreds of animes/novels/manga, etc. I love he prioritizes swordsmanship and doesn't want his future powers to affect it. You have possibly one of the best stories so far (even tho it's 3 chapters long now). Do your best, all the support from here! End of the essay.
-Welp im not suprised that the mc gain a new personality after that torture like training and that for 7 years -I just hope the mc will have 1 or 2 woman as a wife -befriend yun che or take the two heavenly treasure from yun che and have ******* as his master -torture and kill his father/master from those suffering -get the inheritance of the azure dragon and phoenix -welp i give 4 star for this novel its still new and its just the beggining story of the novel -i just hope this novel release 3 to 5 chapter every week if possible
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Good story make more ... Hhgggggggggfigzgi DC's izto9ysyozoydoyst9tosoysyodyosyodyidyody9oydyod9dyys9oys9ydy. Ff
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