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although the protagonist's mentality is insulted by 90% surely this story deserved to have about 2400 chapters less until he gets like the height of the universe type level 30, come back to post the episodes of this series!
Story is good.but MC is pussy.mc character is worst.mc character is like side character of another novel.his character worse than shit.inspiration from God and devil world,please don't say shit like this.mc character is far better than MC in this novel
look like they drop this novel lol.. I really like this novel. .pitty😔😔😔 1 yrs waiting no update.. . . . . ..... .. . . . . . . . . . .
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This is a fun story! The first few chapters had me laughing hysterically. When you add in some of the funny paragraph comments, it is funnier than Mystery Science Theatre 3000! The Protagonist, Yang Chen is REALLY a dim bulb! Unfortunately, the carefree lone wolf early chapters of killing zombies and leveling up comes to an end all too quickly. Yang Chen picks up a "Beautiful Swordswoman" with "Skin like white jade" all too rapidly and *** rears its ugly head. {If we MUST have a Love interest for the Protagonist—just ONCE I'd like for her to be a 6-foot Serena Williams look-alike with "Skin like rich milk chocolate"!!!} Then we head for a Refugee center—Skew refugee centers and anything ran by the Government! And shortly thereafter, we hook up with a Military expedition. I think that it is safe to say that the story is pretty thoroughly wanked at this point. THEY DID strip one dude of his uniform and kick him out of the military for starting a fight. And he begged to stay in!??!!!!! I WISH that it was that easy to get thrown out when I was in the Military! Skew the Military!!!
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Hi there! Do you know there is a LitRPG writing contest? You might be a competitive participant and take the chance to win up to $3,000! Please Google LUTAW_writing_contest or Supreme Me Fiction Writing Contest to find out more! This contest is free entry and open to any writer at any country. If you had any query, please feel free to contact litrpgwritingcontest_review@hotmail.com Good luck for writing!
Jusr getting the vibe of gods and devil system. ✌️✌️✌️✌️✌️✌️✌️✌️✌️✌️✌️✌️✌️✌️✌️✌️✌️✌️✌️✌️✌️✌️✌️✌️✌️✌️✌️✌️✌️✌️✌️✌️✌️✌️✌️✌️✌️✌️✌️✌️✌️✌️✌️✌️✌️✌️✌️✌️✌️✌️✌️✌️✌️✌️✌️✌️✌️
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Mx is a total bich nobody warned me about it and I tried pushing through but he gets scared of people weaker than him and the genders change every paragraph sooo...if you like a weak mic this is what you need
Its a good start but it went haywire because of harem that every girl he saves will be like will do anything to be on his bed and the mc doesn't do anything and doesn't even korean he just forget everything like nothing happens it's freaking sucks though the story was rushed in the first place it was good but he ignores the easy xp . Could exploit and m m him many exp so he can we songer pass instead when the harem was introduced it became sucks like very soft and doesn't even feel good because every time i save it every hour every one of then we'll try to be on his bed just to survive and he's a better trash because he can even hurt or kill a girl it's freaking apocalypse to talk ok this is my first review just walked this.
Just a copy of God and Devil world, but even worse and horrible than the original. Let's not even talk about the grammar or the intellect of mc, the story seems to be written by an 8 year old child.
the MC is not to smart and he is bit arrogant and not enough killing of bad guys and to scared to tell the truth about his love life but overall a good story about apocalypse
The Grammar really isnt good. Questions without ? at the sentence end, He/She/Him/Her not correct used. The Spoken words of the Characters are wrong and Hacked. The Story is Very Direct with the Flow, without much to Explain. Overall If the Grammar of the Story were a bit Better and more put more thoughts into the Word Spoken of the Characters then the Novel should be 4 Starts. But Like this it is at best a way to kill Time with a Novel with Bad English.
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The thing that describes the book best is “how convenient”. The MC thinks that it would be good if he had a sword, oh the random draw box just dropped one. The Mc meets a beautiful girl, oh how convenient that just in this moment she is sneak attacked by a Zombie from a roof. How did it even get there, they were described as incredible dumb creatures. So on and so on... Also everything except humans is incredibly weak such that everyone can defeat monsters and zombies a few levels higher and the fights are incredibly boring.
I need minority in majority i have enough of beauties in apocalyptic world, wasting my time grinding my power. I JUST WANT TO ENJOY MY DAY IN ZOMBIE WORLD mating everyday with woman is boring. Why not explore underseas
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It's kinda your average Chinese fic. You got an MC who saves the 'beauties' and kills anyone else. The beginning chapters are rushed and the love interest was introduced abruptly. I stopped reading this after the MC ignores some easy XP when it clearly stated that he was trying to level up in the previous chapter. Can't stand the MC who only thinks with their second head and stories that cater to fulfill their OP fantasies.
How to say this.... This story just goes and I'm not even sure where and why it will go. Since of the sequences are not quite logical. And I just lost interest after a while. I couldn't discover the drive to know more about the occurrences in this story.
It’s like a ripoff novel from god and devil world. The development of the story is to fast and no explanation of the skill. Example how much sprit points do u need to activate the fire.? Or how much is the space ring capacity.
The novel is good but it's abandonned since the author is writing another novel, wat a waste............................................................................................................................;
It’s alright but the grammar is quite bad specially the gender of the characters. However, the different kind of abilities and skill system is quite interesting and original. Overall quite a good novel but the romance in it feels too pushed and there is little of the typical apocalypse mistrust and human infightings at the start which is unreal.
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Typical boring story. Fast but boring... I see autor was inspired novel: God and Demon world. Mc was nobody with system and to mutch testosterone..
this novel is a complete rip off from God and Devil world. for the love of god the level of writing is bad, the story development is too fast paced, the charachter design is crap and the background isnt even explained AT ALL. do i have to play the guessing game when i read this garbage? is everything obviose? NO IT ISNT. if i didnt read god and devil world before this i wouldnt even understand what i am reading right now. my opinion? you defiled "God and devil world". though i gotta say that THAT work is also bad considering all the racism in it
synopsel trash dont waste your time onis is just like the nthisov synopsel trash dont waste your time onis is just like the nthisov synopsel trash dont waste your time onis is just like the nthisov synopsel trash dont waste your time onis is just like the nthisov synopsel trash dont waste your time onis is just like the nthisov synopsel trash dont waste your time onis is just like the nthisov synopsel trash dont waste your time onis is just like the nthisov
Mantap bro,I beg you to add more chapters, because I really want to read the continuation of your novel,saya doakan semoga sukses,dan semoga banyak yang membaca novel anda
although the protagonist's mentality is insulted by 90% surely this story deserved to have about 2400 chapters less until he gets like the height of the universe type level 30, come back to post the episodes of this series!
Story is good.but MC is pussy.mc character is worst.mc character is like side character of another novel.his character worse than shit.inspiration from God and devil world,please don't say shit like this.mc character is far better than MC in this novel
look like they drop this novel lol.. I really like this novel. .pitty😔😔😔 1 yrs waiting no update.. . . . . ..... .. . . . . . . . . . .
Hi there! Are you looking for inspiration? You might want to check out our Prompts Writing contest! Apocalypse, Isekai, LitRPG... Follow the three provided prompts and take the chance to win up to $2,000! Please Google 70daysthemedwritingchallenge to find out more! This contest is free entry and open to any writer at any country. If you had any query, please feel free to contact litrpgwritingcontest_review@hotmail.com Good luck for writing!
Hey there! Good day for writing! If you wanted to see whether you can get paid by distributing the current work or getting financial support by writing new work, you might want to contact geekyteddyyo@gmail.com. A brief introduction, some sample charpters or links will be appriciated when reaching out.
This is a fun story! The first few chapters had me laughing hysterically. When you add in some of the funny paragraph comments, it is funnier than Mystery Science Theatre 3000! The Protagonist, Yang Chen is REALLY a dim bulb! Unfortunately, the carefree lone wolf early chapters of killing zombies and leveling up comes to an end all too quickly. Yang Chen picks up a "Beautiful Swordswoman" with "Skin like white jade" all too rapidly and *** rears its ugly head. {If we MUST have a Love interest for the Protagonist—just ONCE I'd like for her to be a 6-foot Serena Williams look-alike with "Skin like rich milk chocolate"!!!} Then we head for a Refugee center—Skew refugee centers and anything ran by the Government! And shortly thereafter, we hook up with a Military expedition. I think that it is safe to say that the story is pretty thoroughly wanked at this point. THEY DID strip one dude of his uniform and kick him out of the military for starting a fight. And he begged to stay in!??!!!!! I WISH that it was that easy to get thrown out when I was in the Military! Skew the Military!!!
Revelar spoiler Hi there! Do you know there is a LitRPG writing contest? You might be a competitive participant and take the chance to win up to $3,000! Please Google LUTAW_writing_contest or Supreme Me Fiction Writing Contest to find out more! This contest is free entry and open to any writer at any country. If you had any query, please feel free to contact litrpgwritingcontest_review@hotmail.com Good luck for writing!
Jusr getting the vibe of gods and devil system. ✌️✌️✌️✌️✌️✌️✌️✌️✌️✌️✌️✌️✌️✌️✌️✌️✌️✌️✌️✌️✌️✌️✌️✌️✌️✌️✌️✌️✌️✌️✌️✌️✌️✌️✌️✌️✌️✌️✌️✌️✌️✌️✌️✌️✌️✌️✌️✌️✌️✌️✌️✌️✌️✌️✌️✌️✌️
🤗🤗🤗🤗🥰🥰🥰🥰🥰☺️☺️😁😁😉😘😊😂😚😚😆😆😊😂😁😁😁😅😂😚😚😀😀😁☺️😘😊😊🥰😍🥰🤩😭😭😭😍😂😂😊😊😊😆😆😅😅😅😆😏😏😏😛😛😛😛😛😛😋😋😋😋🤔🤔🤔🤔🤫🤫🤫🤫
lol................................................................................................................................................................................................
Mx is a total bich nobody warned me about it and I tried pushing through but he gets scared of people weaker than him and the genders change every paragraph sooo...if you like a weak mic this is what you need
Its a good start but it went haywire because of harem that every girl he saves will be like will do anything to be on his bed and the mc doesn't do anything and doesn't even korean he just forget everything like nothing happens it's freaking sucks though the story was rushed in the first place it was good but he ignores the easy xp . Could exploit and m m him many exp so he can we songer pass instead when the harem was introduced it became sucks like very soft and doesn't even feel good because every time i save it every hour every one of then we'll try to be on his bed just to survive and he's a better trash because he can even hurt or kill a girl it's freaking apocalypse to talk ok this is my first review just walked this.
Just a copy of God and Devil world, but even worse and horrible than the original. Let's not even talk about the grammar or the intellect of mc, the story seems to be written by an 8 year old child.
the MC is not to smart and he is bit arrogant and not enough killing of bad guys and to scared to tell the truth about his love life but overall a good story about apocalypse
The Grammar really isnt good. Questions without ? at the sentence end, He/She/Him/Her not correct used. The Spoken words of the Characters are wrong and Hacked. The Story is Very Direct with the Flow, without much to Explain. Overall If the Grammar of the Story were a bit Better and more put more thoughts into the Word Spoken of the Characters then the Novel should be 4 Starts. But Like this it is at best a way to kill Time with a Novel with Bad English.
...................................................................................................................................................................
The thing that describes the book best is “how convenient”. The MC thinks that it would be good if he had a sword, oh the random draw box just dropped one. The Mc meets a beautiful girl, oh how convenient that just in this moment she is sneak attacked by a Zombie from a roof. How did it even get there, they were described as incredible dumb creatures. So on and so on... Also everything except humans is incredibly weak such that everyone can defeat monsters and zombies a few levels higher and the fights are incredibly boring.
I need minority in majority i have enough of beauties in apocalyptic world, wasting my time grinding my power. I JUST WANT TO ENJOY MY DAY IN ZOMBIE WORLD mating everyday with woman is boring. Why not explore underseas
Revelar spoiler ...................................................................................................................................................................................................................
It's kinda your average Chinese fic. You got an MC who saves the 'beauties' and kills anyone else. The beginning chapters are rushed and the love interest was introduced abruptly. I stopped reading this after the MC ignores some easy XP when it clearly stated that he was trying to level up in the previous chapter. Can't stand the MC who only thinks with their second head and stories that cater to fulfill their OP fantasies.
How to say this.... This story just goes and I'm not even sure where and why it will go. Since of the sequences are not quite logical. And I just lost interest after a while. I couldn't discover the drive to know more about the occurrences in this story.
It’s like a ripoff novel from god and devil world. The development of the story is to fast and no explanation of the skill. Example how much sprit points do u need to activate the fire.? Or how much is the space ring capacity.
The novel is good but it's abandonned since the author is writing another novel, wat a waste............................................................................................................................;
It’s alright but the grammar is quite bad specially the gender of the characters. However, the different kind of abilities and skill system is quite interesting and original. Overall quite a good novel but the romance in it feels too pushed and there is little of the typical apocalypse mistrust and human infightings at the start which is unreal.
Revelar spoiler Typical boring story. Fast but boring... I see autor was inspired novel: God and Demon world. Mc was nobody with system and to mutch testosterone..
this novel is a complete rip off from God and Devil world. for the love of god the level of writing is bad, the story development is too fast paced, the charachter design is crap and the background isnt even explained AT ALL. do i have to play the guessing game when i read this garbage? is everything obviose? NO IT ISNT. if i didnt read god and devil world before this i wouldnt even understand what i am reading right now. my opinion? you defiled "God and devil world". though i gotta say that THAT work is also bad considering all the racism in it
synopsel trash dont waste your time onis is just like the nthisov synopsel trash dont waste your time onis is just like the nthisov synopsel trash dont waste your time onis is just like the nthisov synopsel trash dont waste your time onis is just like the nthisov synopsel trash dont waste your time onis is just like the nthisov synopsel trash dont waste your time onis is just like the nthisov synopsel trash dont waste your time onis is just like the nthisov
Mantap bro,I beg you to add more chapters, because I really want to read the continuation of your novel,saya doakan semoga sukses,dan semoga banyak yang membaca novel anda