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My Loyal Heart

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Autor: DivineShidi

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Feeya Valerie Joseph just an ordinary woman who has a loyal heart when she falls in love.

On her wedding day, she has been sold by her fiance or her groom to the cripple billionaire for 1 billion dollars.

Feeya is the most beautiful and pretties bride. She walk down the aisle beside her father with sweet smile on her lips when she suddenly feel so anxious when she look to the front and she found that the groom is seated on the wheelchair. In her mind and heart started to ask so many question... 'Why is Richard seated on a wheelchair? What has happen to him? OMG... Is he got involve in accident when he's coming here?' she so worried about him...

When she come nearer to the groom, she was startle and shock written whole over her face.. "Who are you?? Where's my groom??" with so many question that she can't voice out.

On the other side, the cripple groom still in daze and shock to look at the most beautiful and prettiest bride, he only snap from his daze within a second to answer her "I'm Daniel Stephan.. and I am your groom the second I check.. You are my most beautiful and prettiest bride for today..." with his most charming smile.

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Hi, I'm your aurthor. This is my 1st novel. I just want to share some of my creations. Please ignore if there is any mistake on my sentence/vocabulary/grammar. Hope all of you can give me some guidance and support. (~v~)

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ID_ERA

This book is soooooooooo interesting. I did not want to read at first because because of the spelling error but once I got into it, I didn't want to leave its again.

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DivineShidi

Hi Author here. I've updated the cover of my short novel. I want to give all the credit and many thx to #Zehell2218 for the beautiful cover. I love it a lot. TQ for sharing your the creative idea for my cover. I am really appreciated it... ♡♡♡

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Hulkqq

I fall in love with this novel. Feeya and Daniel love is one true love. The are so loyal to their lover. Keep it up the good work dear aurthor. Please keep update. Wiating for more chapter.. Tq for sharing a good novel.

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DivineShidi

Hi all, Author is here. I just want to take this opportunity to ask you guys to try read my 1st written short novel ♡♡♡... I only hope that I can get more feedback... encouragement comment... vote and review from you all.. I didn't hope for special treatment.. just a helping hand to vote for me.. I've already upload 13 chapter last night for my novel starter... I just wanna try my luck in this whole new chapter of my life.. ♡♡♡ being a new novelist.. wishing me luck.. okey guys.. You guys are my lucky star ☆☆☆ TQ😄😄😄 https://dynamic.webnovel.com/book/14771357705567905 (Title : My Loyal Heart)

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bixlimo

I really fallen in love with this short novel already... for a new and beginner aurthor you have done a good job. Even though it's still need improvement. I can sync with the story flow now. Anyway.. good luck for your 1st novel...

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Daoist847197

For a new and starter 1st novel .. the beginning of the story can be quiet thrilling... I just want to encourage u to write more chapter.. Don't listen to any negative comment about your own story.. it's your story... just take some pointer on their negative/positive comment for you to develope your own story and world.. All the best for your 1st written novel .. ♡♡♡ for other readers.. please give this new author a chances to give you all some interesting short novel.. give it a try.. u will not lose anything right.. help new author by giving ur little vote.. okay.. see ya.

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I love it... anyone out there.. You guys... try out this novel... It so touching to my heart... the aurthor also separate both charactor POV for us to know how they are feeling.. It's worth it for u guys to try... U will fall in love with it..

5yr
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SKG81
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I love the story... especially with how much in love both ML & FL... even though there's mistake here and there.. I still can go with the story... Hey guys.. u can try to read through it. It's worth to read... Dear Author, keep up the great work... gud luck..

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Dawasoriano

story is good hope the author have more time to update to keep the readers interested and not lose her fans, eastern stories earn more popularity due to unique writing style and story development

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Dawasoriano

story is nice and unique, although there are similar stories on the same plot and characters need more updates to familiarize the characters and give it distinction among many others. female protagonist needs more confidence

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Pednekar

I like this novel 😊😊 writing is good the FM and ML and so sweet couple 💖 💖 the novel is like love can never be forgotten 😢😢😢 I love this concept and ML is the best lover I have seen in novel 😘😘 keep writing more author you are the best 👍👍👏👏💖💖

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ForeverPupa

>//_//< this novel is so sweet yet so sad at the same time. It gives you the rollercoaster feeling. The first few chapters might be a bit hard to read, but after few chapters, the writing improves a lot! Please keep writing, dear author. (~^w^~)

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Da373863

I like this novel.. even though the Engkish is not that good.. but I can feel the misery behind each charactor of the story... I love the lovey dovey scene the most... keep it up dear aurthor... I will stay tune to this novel as long as you didn't drop it... waiting for more update..

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Última versión:
Chapter 40: The Planning (1) 5 years ago

Volumen 1

  1. 1
    The Reality on the Wedding day (1) 5 years ago
  2. 2
    The Reality on the Wedding day (2) 5 years ago
  3. 3
    To Know More about your Husband 5 years ago
  4. 4
    Please Answer Me Now... 5 years ago
  5. 5
    For Us To Have our 12 childs in the Future.. 5 years ago
  6. 6
    I will do anything for my beloved wifey 5 years ago
  7. 7
    Because I love you so much.. 5 years ago
  8. 8
    The day we mate... 5 years ago
  9. 9
    Celebrating our Birthday together the first time.. 5 years ago
  10. 10
    Happiest Moment before the Storm.. 5 years ago
  11. 11
    The Stormy day of my Life.. 5 years ago
  12. 12
    My empty heart.. 5 years ago
  13. 13
    You are the One.. 5 years ago
  14. 14
    I'm Sorry for being Cruel.. 5 years ago
  15. 15
    Family Gathering (1) 5 years ago
  16. 16
    Family Gathering (2) 5 years ago
  17. 17
    The whole truth (1) 5 years ago
  18. 18
    The Whole Truth (2) 5 years ago
  19. 19
    Family Vacation 5 years ago
  20. 20
    Family Vacation (2) 5 years ago
  21. 21
    Family Vacation (3) 5 years ago
  22. 22
    Family Vacation (4) 5 years ago
  23. 23
    End of Vacation. 5 years ago
  24. 24
    Hoping to Recupurate Fast to be able to protect her 5 years ago
  25. 25
    Heart Breaking Will (1) 5 years ago
  26. 26
    Heart Breaking Will (2) 5 years ago
  27. 27
    Heart Breaking Will (3) 5 years ago
  28. 28
    Heart Breaking Will (4) 5 years ago
  29. 29
    Heart Breaking Will (5) 5 years ago
  30. 30
    The Last Will 5 years ago
  31. 31
    I am Hot and Hard On... 5 years ago
  32. 32
    Do not Disturb Signed by the Door 5 years ago
  33. 33
    Do not Disturb Signed by the Door (2) 5 years ago
  34. 34
    Top Secret File (1) 5 years ago
  35. 35
    Top Secret File (2) 5 years ago
  36. 36
    ENEMY IN THE DARK (17++ Mention of Murder) 5 years ago
  37. 37
    Top Secret File (3) 5 years ago
  38. 38
    The Last Good Bye (1) 5 years ago
  39. 39
    Top Secret File (4) 5 years ago
  40. 40
    The Planning (1) 5 years ago

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