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You're an animal !!, one of the best novels I'm reading, why does it take you so long to show your talent by writing so few episodes? !!?!?! I look forward to new chapters, please do it periodically! Continue with this line of thinking, it is not necessary for the protagonist to be a man of charity, if someone tells you "I was hoping the protagonist was kinder ..." they are idiots, idiots! I give you all my support !!! [img=recommend]
Hey there! Good day for writing! If you wanted to see whether you can get paid by distributing the current work or getting financial support by writing new work, you might want to contact geekyteddyyo@gmail.com. A brief introduction, some sample chapters or links will be appreciated when reaching out.
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At first, it was fine I expected a villainous character. However, what I didn't expect is for the mc to be a crazy psychopath without any goals other than causing chaos. It is quite boring and also disturbing, for example, mc kills a boy's sick sister randomly and the author tries to justify it. WTF?
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should've known not to expect to much i was liking the strory so far but it got ruined by tanya lol big busty retarded swordman i know it will be a wankfest very soon so i dropped it and there is no sinister at all it's just a typical chinese shallow wuxia mc trying to be dark and his devil fruit is lame it drains his strength to fast
bruh, i honestly don't say this often but i think this is really good and has a lot of potential, minor grammar issues but over all its REALLY good, <3 don't drop it, you have something going here.
Recommended! Recommended! RECOMMENDED BY SUPEEEER ME! IF YOU LOVE ONE PIECE AND LITTLE DARK HUMOR MC WITH BRAINS PLUS ONE UNIQUE DEVIL FRUIT THEN THIS IS FOR YOU! 🧡🧡🧡🧡🧡🧡🧡🧡🧡🧡🧡🧡🧡🧡🧡🧡 🇵🇭🇵🇭🇵🇭🇵🇭🇵🇭🇵🇭🇵🇭🇵🇭🇵🇭🇵🇭🇵🇭🇵🇭🇵🇭🇵🇭🇵🇭🇵🇭🇵🇭🇵🇭 Puck inglesh.
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You're an animal !!, one of the best novels I'm reading, why does it take you so long to show your talent by writing so few episodes? !!?!?! I look forward to new chapters, please do it periodically! Continue with this line of thinking, it is not necessary for the protagonist to be a man of charity, if someone tells you "I was hoping the protagonist was kinder ..." they are idiots, idiots! I give you all my support !!! [img=recommend]
Hey there! Good day for writing! If you wanted to see whether you can get paid by distributing the current work or getting financial support by writing new work, you might want to contact geekyteddyyo@gmail.com. A brief introduction, some sample chapters or links will be appreciated when reaching out.
ExpExpExpExpExpExpExpExpExpExpExpExpExpExpExpExpExpExpExpExpExpExpExpExpExpExpExpExpExpExpExpExpExpExpExpExpExpExpExpExpExpExpExpExpExpExpExpExp
At first, it was fine I expected a villainous character. However, what I didn't expect is for the mc to be a crazy psychopath without any goals other than causing chaos. It is quite boring and also disturbing, for example, mc kills a boy's sick sister randomly and the author tries to justify it. WTF?
😬😬😬😬😬😬😬😬😬😬😬😬😬😬😬😬😬😬😬😬😬😬☻😬😬😬😬😬😬😬😬😬😬😬😬😬😬😬😬😬😬😬😬😬😬👽😬😬😬☻☻☻☻☻☻☻☻☻☻☻☻☻👺😬😬😬😬😬😬😬😬😬😬😬😬😬😬😬😬😬😬😬😴😬😬😬😬😬😬😬😬☻☻☻☻☻☻☻☻☻☻☻☻☻☻☻☻☻😬😬☻☻☻☻☻☻☻😬☻😬☻😬😬☻
Revelar spoiler Good book Reeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeee Reeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeee Reeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeee Reeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeee
should've known not to expect to much i was liking the strory so far but it got ruined by tanya lol big busty retarded swordman i know it will be a wankfest very soon so i dropped it and there is no sinister at all it's just a typical chinese shallow wuxia mc trying to be dark and his devil fruit is lame it drains his strength to fast
bruh, i honestly don't say this often but i think this is really good and has a lot of potential, minor grammar issues but over all its REALLY good, <3 don't drop it, you have something going here.
Recommended! Recommended! RECOMMENDED BY SUPEEEER ME! IF YOU LOVE ONE PIECE AND LITTLE DARK HUMOR MC WITH BRAINS PLUS ONE UNIQUE DEVIL FRUIT THEN THIS IS FOR YOU! 🧡🧡🧡🧡🧡🧡🧡🧡🧡🧡🧡🧡🧡🧡🧡🧡 🇵🇭🇵🇭🇵🇭🇵🇭🇵🇭🇵🇭🇵🇭🇵🇭🇵🇭🇵🇭🇵🇭🇵🇭🇵🇭🇵🇭🇵🇭🇵🇭🇵🇭🇵🇭 Puck inglesh.
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