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This story is interesting. I like how the two sisters have their own strengths and unique characteristics, especially Hei Lin. You deserve the 5 stars on character design author! Good work!
this seems interesting! I kinda like the story, it's kinda cute. The bond between the sisters and the family members are portrayed quite well. The characters have their own distinct personalities. kudos to the author!
What a cute and fresh relationship between sisters like in real life.. I love Hei Lin and Hei Qing.. It seems Hei Lin has a past.. I feels your novels have a realistic feel dear author sama
This is so cute and adorable.. I love the bond between Hei lin and Hei qing.. The way Hei lin character is designed shows author's thought process.. I hope the first young master tang don't create any troubles for Hei lin
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So far so good! Minor grammar error but it is not bad at all and flows very well! I am not really into romance novels but this one might be the exception! QingQing is goated.
Family is nicely explained in the story.. I like Hei family and the way they sort out theri issues is so nice.. Tang Fei and Hei lin are sister and brother goals
Both Main leads are so cute and adorable. Their bond is also great unlike in other novels... I hope they will be like this until the end..
I like the bond between Hei Lin and Hei Qing... The family background is so nice and both FL characters are strong in their own. Good work author all the best
The story goes somewhere with good pacing that makes each chapter feel like something happened within it. The characters are interesting and make decisions in a world that they have to navigate through successfully.
I like stories with the family genre in it and this is one of them. It has a nice background of the Hei family, a good relationship between the two sisters, Hei Lin and Hei Qing. The storyline is good. But just a little bit of grammatical errors in it. Overall, it's all good. Keep up the good work author!
This is a very cute story about two sisters. I really like the laid back vibe I'm getting from reading these chapters. My only gripe is the writing quality. Author you need to capitalise the start of your sentences. It really helps to differentiate one from another so it doesn't look jumbled together. Also the misuse of periods and commas could be looked into further. Overall its pretty good, well done author
I love how fun and light hearted the story is! Really puts a smile on my face reading it. It might be a bit helpful for the author to pay more attention to grammar, especially in making sure all names and the beginning if sentences are capitalized. Overall, great work!
As I am the author I can give full rating.. Guys please don't ignore if you come across this book.. This is going to be a very funny and light headed tale about two sisters
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If you ask me, I find this story quite adorable. I'm into family genres so I'm very curious how this one will turn on. The relationship between the two sisters is intriguing and I love that. The humor and lightness is what makes this book a friendly one! I hope for you keep on publishing! :)
This story is interesting. I like how the two sisters have their own strengths and unique characteristics, especially Hei Lin. You deserve the 5 stars on character design author! Good work!
this seems interesting! I kinda like the story, it's kinda cute. The bond between the sisters and the family members are portrayed quite well. The characters have their own distinct personalities. kudos to the author!
What a cute and fresh relationship between sisters like in real life.. I love Hei Lin and Hei Qing.. It seems Hei Lin has a past.. I feels your novels have a realistic feel dear author sama
This is so cute and adorable.. I love the bond between Hei lin and Hei qing.. The way Hei lin character is designed shows author's thought process.. I hope the first young master tang don't create any troubles for Hei lin
Revelar spoiler So far so good! Minor grammar error but it is not bad at all and flows very well! I am not really into romance novels but this one might be the exception! QingQing is goated.
Family is nicely explained in the story.. I like Hei family and the way they sort out theri issues is so nice.. Tang Fei and Hei lin are sister and brother goals
Both Main leads are so cute and adorable. Their bond is also great unlike in other novels... I hope they will be like this until the end..
I like the bond between Hei Lin and Hei Qing... The family background is so nice and both FL characters are strong in their own. Good work author all the best
The story goes somewhere with good pacing that makes each chapter feel like something happened within it. The characters are interesting and make decisions in a world that they have to navigate through successfully.
I like stories with the family genre in it and this is one of them. It has a nice background of the Hei family, a good relationship between the two sisters, Hei Lin and Hei Qing. The storyline is good. But just a little bit of grammatical errors in it. Overall, it's all good. Keep up the good work author!
This is a very cute story about two sisters. I really like the laid back vibe I'm getting from reading these chapters. My only gripe is the writing quality. Author you need to capitalise the start of your sentences. It really helps to differentiate one from another so it doesn't look jumbled together. Also the misuse of periods and commas could be looked into further. Overall its pretty good, well done author
I love how fun and light hearted the story is! Really puts a smile on my face reading it. It might be a bit helpful for the author to pay more attention to grammar, especially in making sure all names and the beginning if sentences are capitalized. Overall, great work!
As I am the author I can give full rating.. Guys please don't ignore if you come across this book.. This is going to be a very funny and light headed tale about two sisters
Good good good good good good good good good good good good good good good good good good good good good good good good good good good good good good good good good good good good good good good good good....
If you ask me, I find this story quite adorable. I'm into family genres so I'm very curious how this one will turn on. The relationship between the two sisters is intriguing and I love that. The humor and lightness is what makes this book a friendly one! I hope for you keep on publishing! :)