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Character Design no al, 1-145 chapter in mc is still a much stupider simp. bottom of the world not al......................................................................................................................................................................................................
loved every second of it. finished it in one sitting. a must read for non stop hot seekers. wheres part two? ................................
it's really good! but it has a lot of ntr vibes that I don't like...........................................................................
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An excellent work of lust and love. Makes you think if having a power like Melvin had will be a boon or bane... It leaves a very good afterthought... Nice writing bro.. 👍🏼👍🏼
Thanks author for such a delectable story. Just a slight adjustment in your schedule and you'd entertain us readers for a long time. Big ups to the author and other readers. I await more chapters. Oh my gosh I'm in love with the story. Story is so interesting. Writing quality - mechanical accuracy, spelling of words, punctuation, translation, and vocabulary must be improved. High stability of story update, keep it up! World background or setting should even be real and not limited to only anime worlds.
Definitivamente le falta mas sensualidad a la historia y al desarrollo de personajes, pero la novela en general es buena, te hace abrir un poco tu imaginación, me hubiera gustado mas capitulos.
Well written, the MC’s personality was realistic and we got to see some of his inner workings. Consistent logic, well as much as can be when magic is involved. It was a bit of a leap at the end though. But very, very hot. 10/10 as an evening read 👍🏻
This is definitely more intended to girls the mc is just a stupid loser who feels sorry for himself but does nothing when people step on him i dont know what his own father teached him. He sees his own wife cheat on him but he never thought about filming it and getting divorced now she divorced him and got half of him money even when mc gets the power to make every girl beg him to put it in he is thil steeped on by his boss even cries like a little baby this guy is not a real man. Im also extremely annoyed by his character he is the perfect guy to NTR even if he got that power to make any female beg him to put his dick inside of her. For any man to read this they will go crazy maybe females out there like man being losers and being dominated by every girl he meets if i was him i would find any rich company that has a female president and **** her then take over the company earnings while having her work also build a fucking harem. I just cant believe how the mc can be soo fucking stupid and a pussy.
Good story................................................................................................................... ...............................................................................................................................................................
It's my first time to read a story about sexpotion...but the author is good and creative in there own way... I like how the scenes were made..
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Character Design no al, 1-145 chapter in mc is still a much stupider simp. bottom of the world not al......................................................................................................................................................................................................
loved every second of it. finished it in one sitting. a must read for non stop hot seekers. wheres part two? ................................
it's really good! but it has a lot of ntr vibes that I don't like...........................................................................
Hey there! Good day for writing! If you wanted to see whether you can get paid by distributing the current work or getting financial support by writing new work, you might want to contact avarohm_review@outlook.com. A brief introduction, some sample chapters or links will be appreciated when reaching out.
An excellent work of lust and love. Makes you think if having a power like Melvin had will be a boon or bane... It leaves a very good afterthought... Nice writing bro.. 👍🏼👍🏼
Thanks author for such a delectable story. Just a slight adjustment in your schedule and you'd entertain us readers for a long time. Big ups to the author and other readers. I await more chapters. Oh my gosh I'm in love with the story. Story is so interesting. Writing quality - mechanical accuracy, spelling of words, punctuation, translation, and vocabulary must be improved. High stability of story update, keep it up! World background or setting should even be real and not limited to only anime worlds.
Definitivamente le falta mas sensualidad a la historia y al desarrollo de personajes, pero la novela en general es buena, te hace abrir un poco tu imaginación, me hubiera gustado mas capitulos.
Well written, the MC’s personality was realistic and we got to see some of his inner workings. Consistent logic, well as much as can be when magic is involved. It was a bit of a leap at the end though. But very, very hot. 10/10 as an evening read 👍🏻
This is definitely more intended to girls the mc is just a stupid loser who feels sorry for himself but does nothing when people step on him i dont know what his own father teached him. He sees his own wife cheat on him but he never thought about filming it and getting divorced now she divorced him and got half of him money even when mc gets the power to make every girl beg him to put it in he is thil steeped on by his boss even cries like a little baby this guy is not a real man. Im also extremely annoyed by his character he is the perfect guy to NTR even if he got that power to make any female beg him to put his dick inside of her. For any man to read this they will go crazy maybe females out there like man being losers and being dominated by every girl he meets if i was him i would find any rich company that has a female president and **** her then take over the company earnings while having her work also build a fucking harem. I just cant believe how the mc can be soo fucking stupid and a pussy.
Good story................................................................................................................... ...............................................................................................................................................................
It's my first time to read a story about sexpotion...but the author is good and creative in there own way... I like how the scenes were made..
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it was a good book and I enjoyed reading it