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Just found this today but I have to say that this a great novel. I personally haven't read much of ATG and this makes me want to continue though I might dread it if it goes down the path of banging his way to power. I'm really excited for this move and can't wait for the next update whenever that might be. The characters that has been shown a blast to read from all their different personality to the interaction between them and the MC. Due to me not knowing much of the background of the Fairies it adds a level of mystery to it and make wonder of the possible things. The quality of the writing is also very great and I wish more people would put more thoughts as to how they want their characters to be portrayed. It's really fun to read the interaction between the characters and I hope it stays. Overall it's a really good read with lots of potential plus the author can write really well which just adds to the satisfaction of not losing any braincells. From what I can see the author already has a certain route or path for the story to follow through and that makes me happy as at least the author has a vision on how their story should go instead of adding unrefined ideas on the go that would ruin the story.
Really good ATG fanfic. Probably the best one on this site. It's not just power fantasy trip with the MC getting god like powers in a day and all girls fall for him. Yes, the MC grows fast in power and yes it will also have a harem, but it doesn't feel as ridiculous as all those badly done power fantasy trips. The world and characters feels alive. The update takes time, but you are rewarded in all other aspects of the story.
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Love the fanfic. Probably one of the best fanfics I’ve read out there. The characters and their relationships actually make sense (not that we’ve gotten that far yet anyway). Not many grammatical errors, well I automatically correct small grammar issues so there may be a few in there. The MC is a pretty selfish low key pervert, however, I’m sure he will mature in due time (if author continues story). I can’t say much more cuz author hasn’t updated in 4 months T_T...
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The Handsome Author tag killed me XD. Like like leik. S. S.. D D D D D Mfmgmmgg?g T T T T Y Jrjrkktk4k4ll4ll4ll4 Yhkjyjjrkkdme D D Yue is oo44o4994nrmrtlltlt5ll4lo4ll5knd D Tlltlto5o5o5
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This is well made better than the other ATG if I have to be honest 11/10 only wish it was updated more frequently but you can’t rush greatness
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Let's start I guess, honestly I haven't expected such story. Usually people do system stuff and op mc from the start or really quickly, and then they are stacked. Your mc is an original one, I like it cause it's uncomfortable reading the raws with yc and then read the same yc with different personality herw. Writing quality 4+/5 but I give you 5 since you are not native speaker, and your writing is improving. Plus, you're editing your chapters, it's great. Anything else 5 as well, although your updates are not too frequent but 2 or 1 times a week it's not that bad. Reducing you stars for that is stupid cause you're writing when you can I guess. World development is really good and the prologue caught me;) The mc probably got the strange bead, dying to know what its properties, I think it's more powerful than the 7 treasures. And about yc, I don't hate him, you can do more than just killing him(or ignore) like in other fanfics.
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updates are constant writing quality is good story development is also good character design and world development is also clearly explained
for now 7 chapters but writing is great updates are also good story has tons of room to go character is good too and world well it's atg so yeah good job if you don't drop this I'll be reading it
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It’s really great too the point that even though there’s only 3 chapters so far I felt that it’s way better then the actual against the god novel. Honestly yun che he really makes super dumb decisions and mistakes it’s ridiculous. It had potential but the author just loves to mess with peoples expectations. Hope you can surpass it.
really interesting story to read hope to be able to read more of it in the future ...............................................................................................................................
Well, i was reading the other version and it was a refreshing side from the original material (Yun Che stinks like a MC). The writing style is good and again, any MC instead the original one is a plus already xD I just hope he gets some inter spatial accesory or something to allow the girls coming with him and not leave them to their own sake like Yun Che does xD
I give myself a biased five 'cause... why not? I can assure you that this fanfic won't waste your time; this self-proclaimed young master never lies.
Perfect another ATG book that falls in my library and whit a very good quality, I like how the story goes, a change of pace is almost always Yun Che or somoene else. I have never seen one in which the MC enters the Frozen Cloud Asgard Sect (flower garden LOL). If better in my opinion if you develop the romance little by little, not something like in 2 days and they are already fucking like rabbits(in other book happen and that feel bad).
Just found this today but I have to say that this a great novel. I personally haven't read much of ATG and this makes me want to continue though I might dread it if it goes down the path of banging his way to power. I'm really excited for this move and can't wait for the next update whenever that might be. The characters that has been shown a blast to read from all their different personality to the interaction between them and the MC. Due to me not knowing much of the background of the Fairies it adds a level of mystery to it and make wonder of the possible things. The quality of the writing is also very great and I wish more people would put more thoughts as to how they want their characters to be portrayed. It's really fun to read the interaction between the characters and I hope it stays. Overall it's a really good read with lots of potential plus the author can write really well which just adds to the satisfaction of not losing any braincells. From what I can see the author already has a certain route or path for the story to follow through and that makes me happy as at least the author has a vision on how their story should go instead of adding unrefined ideas on the go that would ruin the story.
Really good ATG fanfic. Probably the best one on this site. It's not just power fantasy trip with the MC getting god like powers in a day and all girls fall for him. Yes, the MC grows fast in power and yes it will also have a harem, but it doesn't feel as ridiculous as all those badly done power fantasy trips. The world and characters feels alive. The update takes time, but you are rewarded in all other aspects of the story.
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Love the fanfic. Probably one of the best fanfics I’ve read out there. The characters and their relationships actually make sense (not that we’ve gotten that far yet anyway). Not many grammatical errors, well I automatically correct small grammar issues so there may be a few in there. The MC is a pretty selfish low key pervert, however, I’m sure he will mature in due time (if author continues story). I can’t say much more cuz author hasn’t updated in 4 months T_T...
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The Handsome Author tag killed me XD. Like like leik. S. S.. D D D D D Mfmgmmgg?g T T T T Y Jrjrkktk4k4ll4ll4ll4 Yhkjyjjrkkdme D D Yue is oo44o4994nrmrtlltlt5ll4lo4ll5knd D Tlltlto5o5o5
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This is well made better than the other ATG if I have to be honest 11/10 only wish it was updated more frequently but you can’t rush greatness
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Revelar spoiler Let's start I guess, honestly I haven't expected such story. Usually people do system stuff and op mc from the start or really quickly, and then they are stacked. Your mc is an original one, I like it cause it's uncomfortable reading the raws with yc and then read the same yc with different personality herw. Writing quality 4+/5 but I give you 5 since you are not native speaker, and your writing is improving. Plus, you're editing your chapters, it's great. Anything else 5 as well, although your updates are not too frequent but 2 or 1 times a week it's not that bad. Reducing you stars for that is stupid cause you're writing when you can I guess. World development is really good and the prologue caught me;) The mc probably got the strange bead, dying to know what its properties, I think it's more powerful than the 7 treasures. And about yc, I don't hate him, you can do more than just killing him(or ignore) like in other fanfics.
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updates are constant writing quality is good story development is also good character design and world development is also clearly explained
for now 7 chapters but writing is great updates are also good story has tons of room to go character is good too and world well it's atg so yeah good job if you don't drop this I'll be reading it
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It’s really great too the point that even though there’s only 3 chapters so far I felt that it’s way better then the actual against the god novel. Honestly yun che he really makes super dumb decisions and mistakes it’s ridiculous. It had potential but the author just loves to mess with peoples expectations. Hope you can surpass it.
really interesting story to read hope to be able to read more of it in the future ...............................................................................................................................
Well, i was reading the other version and it was a refreshing side from the original material (Yun Che stinks like a MC). The writing style is good and again, any MC instead the original one is a plus already xD I just hope he gets some inter spatial accesory or something to allow the girls coming with him and not leave them to their own sake like Yun Che does xD
I give myself a biased five 'cause... why not? I can assure you that this fanfic won't waste your time; this self-proclaimed young master never lies.
Perfect another ATG book that falls in my library and whit a very good quality, I like how the story goes, a change of pace is almost always Yun Che or somoene else. I have never seen one in which the MC enters the Frozen Cloud Asgard Sect (flower garden LOL). If better in my opinion if you develop the romance little by little, not something like in 2 days and they are already fucking like rabbits(in other book happen and that feel bad).