Wish Fulfillment System

LV 4

TetekGede

FINALLY! A good Danmachi novel, unlike from a certain popular Danmachi novel, this version of Ais isn't behaving like a slut and immediately ask to have sex to the person who is her love interest. Honestly, hope it will last long and stay good. I root Isaac x Ais all the way, since she is also my waifu and she herself think she isn't worthy? Girl, your quality as waifu is top notch. I'd like to marry and target Ais as waifu to if somewhat traveled into Danmachi. Author, don't drop or hiatus of this novel! This is hidden gem and master piece for me. Although, if you want to make this well knowned, I suggest you change the category from Others to Anime & Comics.

LV 14

CrimsonsSable

The only reason Writing Quality is a 4 Star instead of 5 is because some things can get a bit long winded during explanations. Don't get me wrong on it however, I enjoy that but I know a lot of people who don't, to me it show you put thought into how you want things to be explained instead of just rushing through them. Everything else is 5 Stars due to you having a schedule and sticking to it unless something happens or like the anniversary where you released an extra chapter, the story development shows you've researched what you are writing about and try to get everything to roughly line up with the world the story takes place,even if the concept wasn't in the world to begin with. Character design is great, you have characters that have flaws and to me it makes them seem more authentic, you also have it so they work on them which is another great thing. World background as I said towards the top you research the world to make things seem more natural so that is a solid, and considering you want to quite possibly take this to other worlds as long as the same detail is put into each of them as the Danmachi world I will be extremely happy to continue reading this story. Overall the story is awesome, if time is needed to ensure that it continues to be as it is in coming chapters than by all means take however long you need, just let us know so we aren't stuck in limbo waiting for the next chapter. Keep up the good work and I hope you continue to have fun writing this story in the future.

LV 2

B0ssu

I'm really surprised this story this story isn't higher ranked. This story comes as a much welcome and much needed oasis amidst the sheer deluge of garbage that is almost all the Danmachi fics on this site. Writing quality is excellent. The author's command of English alone is enough to make this fic much better than the others here. The author also updates regularly. He aims to update twice a week (Sunday and Thursday). Although he sometimes doesn't follow this exact schedule, he's typically fastidious in following it. His updates are also sizable chapters, not short insubstantial snippets meant to keep the story bumped up. Story design is also excellent. I can't emphasize enough how nice it is to finally see a Danmachi fic without Bell or Hestia. The massive exposition dumps do slow down the pacing a bit, but those who don't want to get bogged down in the weeds can easily skip those bits. Character design is also solid. The MC doesn't seem to have schizophrenia and is pretty consistent throughout the story. He is a bit on the overpowered end, but that's part of the story's charm. There could be more of the supporting characters, but they generally come across as likable. The author has also gone all put on worldbuilding. There's a lot of the dungeon that canon didn't cover, and the author has put in Herculean effort to fill in the gaps as needed. Overall, I highly recommend checking out this story.

LV 4

amaturewriter

Look the MC is developing way too slowly considering his background.........AND he is too easily trusting I mean who in the right mind would tell some they just met for the first time that they are a world traveler and a potential god..who would? and who would believe it? it's unrealistic [even for a fanfic]...BUT!!!!! hey even in my fanfic I wrote BS...like a lot of BS but you know..you have to build up on your BS..you cant just outright put it and expect it make sense.. on the plus side the book is well written but character development on both emotional and strength isnt well developed... THIS IS JUST MY OPINION...AUTHOR ISNT SHIT OK..the dude writes well....but as I said before..there are some stupid unrealistic ****

LV 2

Katoph

I like the story a lot and it's an alternate timeline So I'm going to give my honest opinion here Mc: is not a genius to be fair but the author never claims that his mc is a genius. Mc. is too trusting I think that there should be consequences here In my eyes it is a 4.0 but not a 5.0 Good work keep it up

LV 3

Igris_Dai_Ichi

Yoshh...... now I want more of this....it is your fault so take responsibility okay...?? KAMISAMA PLEAASE MAKE MORE........................😢😢😢

LV 4

Odinsohn543

I am satisfied with the story, it is well written, it is an alternative timeline and once you bring that in there are infinite possibilities, However, I don't like that the mc shares his secret with many people, this behavior is too dangerous for me, otherwise I can not complain

LV 4

Atlas1V_

This story is very well developed and gives an in-depth analysis of the characters and the way he wants to portray them. I'm also glad this isn't another one of those Harem stories or stories that don't go I to much thought. Great Job and keep up the work👍

LV 4

horrendous_potato

I was going to read it and then I saw the author say that they were going to give other characters harems and temporarily move the MC to the background and I just don't like reading about the love life of other characters that aren't the MC especially when the author said that the MC will only have two girls so it kinda seems like the mc is being outshined. the story itself seems like it is great and is a pretty nice concept so while I won't read it I will give it this 4 star review.

LV 3

PUJIT_FADTE_9415

JUST HOPE THAT THE AUTHOR WILL NOT DROP THIS NOVEL AND WILL CONTINUE WRITING IT AND WILL ALSO MAINTAIN THE UPDATE RATE TO ATLEAST 4 CHPS/WEEK NEW CHAPTERS PLEASEEEEEEEEEEEEE 🔥🔥🔥

LV 2

Hidder

I do not usually read fanfics, but this one is an exception. The writing quality is excellent, the background of the story is fun and the way the story develops makes you want to keep on reading. The MC is way too overpowered and his personality kind of bugs me, but the girls make up for it!!!!!!! GO ISAAC! *waves* hello there, mah boi. It is me..... u.u

LV 15

Shinobu

💊💉💊💉💊💉💊⊂二二二（　＾ω＾）二⊃ FANTASTIC Read! At ch 135 Atm and greatly anticipate new material! 💊💉💊💉💊💉💊💊💉💊💉💊💉💊💊💉💊💉💊💉💊 ⊂二二二（　＾ω＾）二⊃

LV 15

Shinobu

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LV 15

southgamez

The story is great and all, but 1 chapter a week that has about 2.6k words is too short. This story has been going on for about 2 years and only has 60 chapters. I read whole thing in 4 days, as for everything else, its a decent story, but is developed a bit slow for me. Hope update gets upped to at least 3 chapters a week, because 1 chapter is too slow for something so short

LV 3

immarypoppinyall

You should give his status as extra information before starting the story because many people cjeck there stars first and power before readinf it

LV 3

letmesleep

This is one of the fanfics that I've read with a really solid background on the MC and despite that you still keep asking for more on who the MC was before all this happened. Anyway besides that specific aspect the others actually are also pretty good in their own sense especially the writing tbh

LV 15

Chaos_Prime

A great story the Mc is awesome the way he does things are too amazing he only wants aiz and another girl that he can share the rest of his life with he’s a person who has real ambition and a path for love and not a harem seeking dick

LV 4

The_Dark_Hydrax

Yay, the author has returned [img=recommend]

LV 1

BlueBoy101

Ais' romance and mc backstory is done really well actually. Characters here don't act very cardboardy unlike what you can expect from most fanfics. But the constant barrage of useless info is just a lot. and literally a whole chapter introducing 10 supporters you will forget about right away. Be ready to skip paragraphs cause every new dungeon floor is literally a wiki page on the monsters that appear there. Then the mc fights the strongest rare monster on the floor, then repeat. Other then that its a great read as far as the genre goes. Characters like Averin and Jakk end up being surprisingly likable. Though you can only save so many orphans to babysit before I start to roll my eyes. Isaac claims to have some purpose for them but he doesn't since he is way stronger then them and does not even use them as messengers.

LV 4

The_Dark_Hydrax

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