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Power is based on a cultivation world and author decided to nerf it to shit. I highly dislike the fact that he decided to littraly just blurt out everything about his reincarnation truly annoyed me but whatever just my personal opinion don't mind it too much, my preference is completely OP protagonist who aren't bound by morals and who don't think with their dicks. This MC just annoyed me cause of power sharing and blurring out things he should be keeping to himself which makes him a immature idiot man child. Best of luck on your story sir author but I'm out.
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.................................. .................................. .................................. .................................. It is in my library, recommended
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Très bon Fan fic Hâte de voir la suite Ne pas abandonner le projet svp Plus de chapitre svp !!!!!!!!!!!!!!! Merci pour les chapitres +++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++
This ..................... ...................... ..................... ..................... ..................... ..................... Is for the point
Not that good. It was better than average at the begging but then his character just went all over the place. He was so serious about everything but then he turns into spiderman with his attitude. Also, he has weird quirks and stuff that he hates for no reason e.g. he doesn't like it when people call him short, and he's pretty tall for his age and he didn't have any complex about his height in his past life so there's absolutely no reason to hate being called short. He has a system likeability even though that wasn't specified in his wishes. He is also a super moody and unlikable character. He may have some qualities that are from cool protagonist but he just seems like he has no identity in my opinion.
This story was quite good and was showing much promise, however I really don't approve of the reboot........................ I even kept giving this story Spirit Stones during the reboot hoping that it would stay true.
Ignore what most people are saying, their reviews are frankly stupid, yes there are a few hiccups here and there but that isn't to say that the story is "trash" people that lable it as such for a minor story glitch are morons, HE ISNT EVEN CHARGING SPIRIT STONES!!! SHUT YOUR GOBS YOU KNOBS!
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Garbage novel..no reason to reveal everything and the whole 'keeping the mc on the current villans level' or 'just slightly above the current villains level' thing is lazy as hell look at the positive reviews they didnt even read it they are the average fake reviews
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I am really looking forward to this and enjoying it so far. Keep it up author. Odtilijzjlzgljstizljzljgjzzjzfjfzjfilaulaulsfuljmuz J Nzjjffzgfru luaukrsksfhlsgjlulsulljzjshjstli
Due to the fact that I always check to make sure a novel is not dropped, I have only read your author's note. I also have not read the reviews so what I am writing is just some "personal beliefs" meant as encouragement. * I think internalizing critical reviews stifles creativity. * I don't think writers have to make everything clear - mysteries and guessing makes you "turn the page" (you don't ever have to make his orientation clear unless you have a romantic plot or subplot - you can make your audience wait until he actively seeks a relationship - people can always stop reading - its not like buying a book in a book store and you can't return it). * I think if you pay too much attention to your audience demands - it will no longer be your story as well as give you a headache and massive amounts of frustration. * Write what you want and how you want! * An author is god of the world he creates. * Keep in mind that most people do not have time to write comments so no matter how many "good or bad comments" it will never be the expressed views of everyone.
I am honestly curious how can he cultivate in a world that does not follow cultivation rules. He cannot get a heavenly tribulation so he would be stuck in a level. The mini world he cultivates cannot produce that.
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Revelar spoiler
Its actually a good work... what i dont like is the DRAMA- THIS fanfic is full of drama...too much actually for a fanfic... and in this novel - a trending for reincarnation bull**** also happens... and thats to spill the beans.. the meer fact that an MC tells every one that he is a transmigurator or reincarnator and those people believe right away specially their parents ... ow u want to retort that is because of parental love? or some ****? Why dont u tell ur parents that ur reincanator and u live enough to be their parents or older sibling or grandparents ?! Bull**** ! O? Are u gonna delete my review too?
Shit novel MC tells his mom that he is a old man hijacking her childs body and she loves it................... **** you author ..................what a retarded mc...........
Because the author does not exclude 5 star reviews that have no content also cultivation does not make for a good marvel fan five but that's not what this is about please delete this
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Revelar spoiler
I would suggest going with a rehall of his growth with cultivation with a more in line growth using the Dao's are nice but not really descriptive of your trying to match the cultivation with marvel as theres is more simple powers or loops of ideas stretches or stacked on top. Example: mutant A -------------- Super strength gives person B.lv str = lifting 80 tons Heightened density for tougher skin and harder bones. Vers. Cultivating universal strength of all aspects to stages with no definitive Mark's to gadge. .... even then they ain't really a reason to have access to everything he would need out right without some type of dampener on what rarity's he has access to. Just a loop hole if you will take enchanting into perspective crafted nice ring happens to add any overpowered inscription and bam he has infinite energy of every conceivable type to supercharge... so I digress my rambling just ignore me love the story though.
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He is supposed to be a grown ass man instead everyone he has met so far has basically made him there little *****. And the Mom might be loving but she is as stupid as he'll when she knows her son is older then her mentally and she still,treats him like a lottle brat. Him more disgusting for being a sorry excuse for a man. Being loved is great but there is no 30+ year old in the world who wants to be treated like a little *****. Dropped.
Fantastic FanFic idea with great opportunity for development and new story arc inclusions. MC gets great powers and will be OP. Regretfully though, he doesn't utilize them to their fullest yet. Still, it's a solid novel and can really become a full time enjoyment
Power is based on a cultivation world and author decided to nerf it to shit. I highly dislike the fact that he decided to littraly just blurt out everything about his reincarnation truly annoyed me but whatever just my personal opinion don't mind it too much, my preference is completely OP protagonist who aren't bound by morals and who don't think with their dicks. This MC just annoyed me cause of power sharing and blurring out things he should be keeping to himself which makes him a immature idiot man child. Best of luck on your story sir author but I'm out.
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.................................. .................................. .................................. .................................. It is in my library, recommended
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Très bon Fan fic Hâte de voir la suite Ne pas abandonner le projet svp Plus de chapitre svp !!!!!!!!!!!!!!! Merci pour les chapitres +++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++
This ..................... ...................... ..................... ..................... ..................... ..................... Is for the point
Not that good. It was better than average at the begging but then his character just went all over the place. He was so serious about everything but then he turns into spiderman with his attitude. Also, he has weird quirks and stuff that he hates for no reason e.g. he doesn't like it when people call him short, and he's pretty tall for his age and he didn't have any complex about his height in his past life so there's absolutely no reason to hate being called short. He has a system likeability even though that wasn't specified in his wishes. He is also a super moody and unlikable character. He may have some qualities that are from cool protagonist but he just seems like he has no identity in my opinion.
This story was quite good and was showing much promise, however I really don't approve of the reboot........................ I even kept giving this story Spirit Stones during the reboot hoping that it would stay true.
Ignore what most people are saying, their reviews are frankly stupid, yes there are a few hiccups here and there but that isn't to say that the story is "trash" people that lable it as such for a minor story glitch are morons, HE ISNT EVEN CHARGING SPIRIT STONES!!! SHUT YOUR GOBS YOU KNOBS!
muy buena continua ..................................................................................................................................................................................................................................
Garbage novel..no reason to reveal everything and the whole 'keeping the mc on the current villans level' or 'just slightly above the current villains level' thing is lazy as hell look at the positive reviews they didnt even read it they are the average fake reviews
I do not like gggggggggggggggggggggggggggggggggggggggggggggggggggggggggggggggggggggggggggggĝgggggggggggggggggggggggggggggggggggggggggggggg. I trust my mother, why not tell her that I was reborn.
I am really looking forward to this and enjoying it so far. Keep it up author. Odtilijzjlzgljstizljzljgjzzjzfjfzjfilaulaulsfuljmuz J Nzjjffzgfru luaukrsksfhlsgjlulsulljzjshjstli
Due to the fact that I always check to make sure a novel is not dropped, I have only read your author's note. I also have not read the reviews so what I am writing is just some "personal beliefs" meant as encouragement. * I think internalizing critical reviews stifles creativity. * I don't think writers have to make everything clear - mysteries and guessing makes you "turn the page" (you don't ever have to make his orientation clear unless you have a romantic plot or subplot - you can make your audience wait until he actively seeks a relationship - people can always stop reading - its not like buying a book in a book store and you can't return it). * I think if you pay too much attention to your audience demands - it will no longer be your story as well as give you a headache and massive amounts of frustration. * Write what you want and how you want! * An author is god of the world he creates. * Keep in mind that most people do not have time to write comments so no matter how many "good or bad comments" it will never be the expressed views of everyone.
I am honestly curious how can he cultivate in a world that does not follow cultivation rules. He cannot get a heavenly tribulation so he would be stuck in a level. The mini world he cultivates cannot produce that.
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Revelar spoiler Its actually a good work... what i dont like is the DRAMA- THIS fanfic is full of drama...too much actually for a fanfic... and in this novel - a trending for reincarnation bull**** also happens... and thats to spill the beans.. the meer fact that an MC tells every one that he is a transmigurator or reincarnator and those people believe right away specially their parents ... ow u want to retort that is because of parental love? or some ****? Why dont u tell ur parents that ur reincanator and u live enough to be their parents or older sibling or grandparents ?! Bull**** ! O? Are u gonna delete my review too?
Shit novel MC tells his mom that he is a old man hijacking her childs body and she loves it................... **** you author ..................what a retarded mc...........
Because the author does not exclude 5 star reviews that have no content also cultivation does not make for a good marvel fan five but that's not what this is about please delete this
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Revelar spoiler I would suggest going with a rehall of his growth with cultivation with a more in line growth using the Dao's are nice but not really descriptive of your trying to match the cultivation with marvel as theres is more simple powers or loops of ideas stretches or stacked on top. Example: mutant A -------------- Super strength gives person B.lv str = lifting 80 tons Heightened density for tougher skin and harder bones. Vers. Cultivating universal strength of all aspects to stages with no definitive Mark's to gadge. .... even then they ain't really a reason to have access to everything he would need out right without some type of dampener on what rarity's he has access to. Just a loop hole if you will take enchanting into perspective crafted nice ring happens to add any overpowered inscription and bam he has infinite energy of every conceivable type to supercharge... so I digress my rambling just ignore me love the story though.
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He is supposed to be a grown ass man instead everyone he has met so far has basically made him there little *****. And the Mom might be loving but she is as stupid as he'll when she knows her son is older then her mentally and she still,treats him like a lottle brat. Him more disgusting for being a sorry excuse for a man. Being loved is great but there is no 30+ year old in the world who wants to be treated like a little *****. Dropped.
Fantastic FanFic idea with great opportunity for development and new story arc inclusions. MC gets great powers and will be OP. Regretfully though, he doesn't utilize them to their fullest yet. Still, it's a solid novel and can really become a full time enjoyment
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