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1.17% Nanomancer Reborn - I've Become A Snow Girl? / Chapter 15: Hidden Path

Capítulo 15: Hidden Path

[Name: Shiro

Race: Snow Girl (Evolution Criteria yet to be met)

Level: 23

Class: Snow Girl★, Nanomancer

HP: 4800/4800

MP: 2500/9300

STR: 35 -> 45 (+30)

VIT: 40 (+50)

INT: 110 (+90)

AGI: 80 -> 90 (+25)

DEX: 35 -> 50 (+20)

DEF: 10 (+45)

Unassigned Points: 0

Balance: 124,500 USD

Equipment (Tap to Display)

Skills –

Snow Girl ★:

Tier 2 Ice magic, Passive Regeneration, Blessed by Ice, Snow Magic, Faded Snow Movement, Cold Aura.

Nanomancer:

Dagger Creation, Nano Tech Engineering Tier 1.

Other:

Mini-map, Inspection, Disguise, Harden (Equipment), Lesser Fear (Equipment).]

In the 2 hours of constant killing, Shiro had managed to level up herself twice. The points she gained amounted to 40 while the passive point gain made her INT skyrocket.

As for equipment, most of them were green and only one was blue. The skill that came with it was Harden.

[Harden]

Harden's your skin for increased defence.

+35 DEF and -20% damage taken -20% AGI.

Duration: 30 seconds.

Cooldown: 2 minutes.

She had replaced the old equipment that came with skills like Fire Spirits blessing as it would become ineffective once a person out levelled the equipment.

Throwing the D rank mana stone into her mouth, Shiro could already feel the difference between ranks.

She chewed with a blissful smile as she walked towards the obelisk. By the time she reached it, both her MP and HP had fully regenerated.

Hiding behind a rock, Shiro observed the boss.

The obelisk boss was a giant ant which measured roughly 3 meters in length and 1.5 meters in height. Blood red chitin which protected its body, four mandibles that opened in different directions and the metasoma/abdomen of the ant which pulsed with an ominous orange energy.

[Bombard Frag Ant LVL 23 – Elite]

HP: 38,000/38,000

MP: 45,000/45,000

"Che, why can't my stats be as insane as you guys in the Dungeon ah?" Shiro said feeling slightly unfair that her stats were much lower than the Elite Bombard Frag Ant.

Observing the ant, Shiro could guess the basic weapon it possessed. The main weapon being the mandibles and the abdomen location on his rear. The abdomen would lay traps around the area when they fight.

These traps would act like landmines which exploded on impact.

Remembering what she read about the Bombard Frag Ant, Shiro understands that setting all of these mines off at the start would be the safest option. Especially since the explosions don't affect the Ant itself.

'Exploding the mines would take too much on my MP since I'll have to cover quite an area.' Shiro thought as she made a dagger in her hands.

Twirling the dagger between her fingers, Shiro grinned.

'Therefore, the best option was to explode the newest mine it plants down and aggro it to my territory.' Shiro thought as she threw the dagger towards the ceiling.

A pale blue light spread across the roof as Shiro smiled seeing her traps in place.

Flicker her wrist, she called the dagger back.

[MP: 120/2000]

Injecting more mana into the dagger, Shiro made a second dagger as she was ready to fight.

'Now!' Shiro thought seeing the Ant laid another mine.

Throwing the dagger towards the mine, Shiro had already started to dash backwards in case of a chain reaction from the mines.

*BOOM!!!

The mine caused 2 other mines to blow up as smoke obscured her vision.

She could hear the legs of the Ant skitter across the ground as she recalled her dagger.

*KRRRRRR!!!!!

Bursting through the smoke, the Ant charged towards Shiro with its four mandibles opened wide ready to crush her.

Twisting her body, Shiro threw both daggers at the opening before flipping backwards.

As expected, the Ant closed its mouth causing the daggers to bounce off.

Shiro grinned as she clutched her hand causing the daggers to explode into two pillars of Ice. The pillars of Ice was formed in front of the Ant which blocked its path.

The Ant stumbled at the sudden obstacle.

Seeing the Ant stop in its tracks, Shiro activated the traps she set earlier.

*KSH KSH KSH KSH KSH KSH!!!

Several Ice spikes shot down from the ceiling as it formed a cage around the Ant. Some of the spikes struck the Ant's body as it constructed a scaffold with the other spikes to reinforce the structural integrity.

*KRRRRR!!!!

The Ant cried out in anger when it felt the Ice locking down its movements.

"Sleep my child." Shiro grinned as the temperature dropped around her. Using her Snow Magic, the tunnels became a winter wonderland of ice and snow.

The Ant raged as it wanted to try keep itself active but despaired feeling its own movements become sluggish.

Due to the fact that its primary physiology resembles that of an ant, when the temperature decreases, the Bombard Frag Ant would enter a hibernation phase.

Giving Shiro one last glare, the ant collapsed under its own weight and entered deep hibernation.

"Heheh~ One shouldn't always fight a hard battle. Fighting smart is just as important." Shiro smiled and walked over to the ant.

[HP: 31,250/38,000]

Its HP was decreasing every second as Shiro made sure it was encased in ice.

Placing her palm on the Ice, Shiro started to control the ice so it slowly cut away at the ant's head.

The more she cut into the skull, the faster the HP of the ant dropped until the brain was in sight.

Without a single shred of mercy, Shiro controlled the ice to destroy the brain, killing the Bombard Frag Ant with it not even being able to retaliate.

Dismissing the ice, Shiro reached towards the heart of the Ant and pulled out the D rank mana stone. Storing the stone away, she collected her loot.

To her disappointment, everything the Ant dropped were miscellaneous items and equipment that were worse than what she had on.

"Can't you at least give me something I can use?" Shiro muttered kicking at the spot where the Ant had died.

Recycling everything, she proceeded towards the obelisk.

However, something grabbed her attention as her hand paused just before touching the obelisk.

Walking behind the obelisk, Shiro crouched down and found a hole of sorts. The hole could probably fit a young adult of a modest build as Shiro's interest was peaked.

Stepping back slightly, Shiro sat down and brought up her tablet.

Searching the information she downloaded for the Frag Ant's burrow, she saw that a few people discovered this path but never reached the end.

Contemplating on whether or not she should enter, Shiro eventually decided to enter since the max level of this Dungeon was 25.

The Dungeon's adhere to a strict rule and unless the Dungeon's mutate, no monster's of higher level will be spawned.

Climbing into the hole without much difficulty, Shiro continued to traverse the hidden path.

As she went along, the path seemed to have started to shrink as an adult would have difficulties entering.

Shiro didn't have any problems entering since her physiology was that of a young teen. The further she went, the narrower the paths became. Eventually, she had to crawl to proceed through the tunnel.

'Maybe I should turn back…' Shiro thought as this may just be a meaningless hole.

However, her instinct told her that there was definitely something to be gained at the end of this.

Some Dungeons had a feature where there would be hidden paths. Hidden paths were hard to traverse but gave bountiful rewards.

Shiro knew this path would be hard for any adult to enter and would be impossible for any young teen to enter either. This was due to the fact that the adult was too big and the teen would probably die before entering the tunnel.

A single Frag Ant would have the prowess to kill the teen even if he/she sought refuge in the tunnels.

Since her physical body had no correlation to her age, she had managed to fit both the criteria of strength and a small build.

Continuing her crawl through the hole, Shiro only felt her frown deepen as she had been crawling for a little too long now.

'Work smart work hard. Since you want to test my patience, I'll show you what I can do.' Shiro thought as her fingers pressed down on the walls of the hole.

"Fuuuu….." She let out a breath of cold mist as the hole started to freeze.

Using the skill, Faded Snow Movement, Shiro increased her speed to the maximum and started to slide through the hole.

Her speed started to pick up as she continuously built up her momentum using the ice to give her a push.

After what seemed to be an hour of high speed sliding, Shiro felt the surroundings shift slightly as it was getting brighter.

Making two daggers, Shiro plunged them into the side of the walls to slow her down.

*CRRRR!!!!!!!

The sound of metal dragging across the rocks assaulted Shiro's ears causing her to flinch slightly.

However, she had achieved her desired effect since she slowed down to a complete stop.

Panting slightly from the amount of strength she exerted, Shiro made her way to the opening of the hole.

Climbing out, her eyes widened to see where she was at.

It was something akin to the inside of a cathedral except that it had no seats. An interior designed with a combination of quartz and gold.

Pillars etched with the carvings of holy animals and angles supported the ceilings.

On the ceilings, a heavenly scenery was painted with fine details in every corner.

On the floor, a symmetrical pattern was tiled as it swirled towards a single chest that laid in the middle of the room.

'Why would something like this exist? Hardly anyone would be able to see this.' Shiro thought with a frown.

"[Location]"

[Tomb of the Holy Dragon Emperor]

"Tomb of the Holy Dragon Emperor?" She muttered as she looked around and observed the room.

Her eye twinkled as she understood the situation.

Walking over to the pillars, Shiro placed her hand onto one of the carvings.

The material was cool to the touch even for someone like Shiro who is a Snow Girl.

Crouching down, Shiro tapped the symmetrical tiles with her knuckles.

"Hmmm…." Shiro narrowed her eyes as she looked around.

This was definitely not a Tomb of a Holy Dragon Emperor. A Tomb of a Holy Dragon Emperor wouldn't include any cold materials. Especially not one that was so cold to the touch even for her.

A real tomb of the Holy Dragon Emperor would be lukewarm to red hot due to the materials used to craft its tomb. Even without hot materials, it would refuse to be cold materials as a substitute. The Holy Dragon would rather go without a tomb.

'Since this isn't the real Holy Dragon Emperor's Tomb, what is it.' Shiro thought to herself.

The only thing left around was the chest which was situated in the middle of the room.

Narrowing her eyes, Shiro crouched down and placed both palms to the ground.

'Freeze!'

Ice spread out from her hands as it shot towards the chest.

Sensing danger, the chest opened up with arms extending out from the inside. Pushing against the pedestal, the chest dodged the ice.

[Den of the Trickster]

'I knew it.' Shiro thought, seeing the updated location. The previous cathedral disappeared as the surroundings were illuminated but a blue glow. Crystals hung from the cave ceiling as the tip of the crystal was the source of the blue glow.

Scattered around the ground were several dried up husks of ants and human skeletons. The weirdest thing was why human skeletons remained here even after the Dungeon wipe.

'The adventurer's probably died to the trickster.' Shiro thought as this would most likely be why no one had recorded this on the net.

[The Trickster LVL 25 – (Elite)]

The Trickster was the next step up from a Mimic, but it still looked like a normal adorned chest.

However, when opened, two sickly thin arms would crawl out from inside. The inside of the chest resembled the mouth of a worm. With row upon rows of teeth, saliva could be seen dripping constantly. Four disgusting tongues could be seen as the tongues themselves seem like they were constructed with a multitude of tongues due to the grooves.

Thankfully she realised sooner that this was a trap. Or else, the moment the Trickster grabbed hold of her, she wouldn't be able to escape its grasp. Naturally, she could then just freeze it.

However, higher level Tricksters were known to cancel out your skills when in close proximity of their mouth so Shiro would rather not risk that unless she was backed into a corner.

Flicking her fingers upwards, several Ice pillars shot up from around the Trickster as scaffolds started to construct themselves.

The Trickster trembled slightly before it erupted into a mass of flesh.

With the chest as the source, a giant mutilated worm-like being could be seen extending out of it. 6 unnaturally long arms with 5 joints thrashed around as it destroyed the Ice. It's body had no skin as it was just muscle and teeth. It measured to around 4.5 meters in length and had a diameter of 2 meters.

'This one already knows the skill flesh puppet?' Shiro thought with a frown.

Flesh Puppet was a rare skill that a very select few of the Tricksters were known to have. At the cost of its HP, a fleshy puppet was summoned to help it battle. The longer the flesh puppet was activated, the more HP was drained.

"You're only just a huge target." Shiro said as her pupils glowed a menacing blue.

A blizzard started to form as Ice spread out with her being the centre. The snow fall increased as it eventually encompassed the entire room.

With the snow blocking the sight, the overall temperature hid Shiro from the Trickster's senses.

*IRRRREEEEE!!

The flesh puppet screamed out as one of its arms was pierced by a dagger.

Turning the head towards the dagger, the teeth on his body twitched as it sensed danger.

*BOOM!

The dagger exploded into a mass of ice causing the Trickster to stumble from the force and use its arms to stabilise itself.

Two floating blue lights tracked it down as another dagger hit the face and exploded.

*KSHHHH!!!

The Trickster was enraged as the flesh puppet shrank its body down before expanding out with teeth extending for several meters.

Shiro frowned seeing this as two of the teeth that extended outwards had almost hit her. If not for Faded Snow Movement that turned a portion of her body to snow and mist, it would have pierced her left shoulder and right thigh.

Moving towards the Trickster, Shiro narrowed her eyes as she dodged the teeth strikes.

Mana started to gather at her palms as the sheer amount of mana she was gathering became visible to the eye.

'Focus and explode.' Shiro thought as she was within touching distance of the flesh puppet.

*BOOOMMM!!!!!

A giant explosion of ice fanned out as it cut the flesh puppet in two before freezing the bisected part of the puppet.

The chest shivered seeing the puppet die as Shiro didn't give it the chance to escape.

Her two eyes glowed menacingly above the chest while she summoned a Ice spear and pierced the chest.

Twisting the spear, the tip enlarged like a blowfish as a multitude of ice spikes penetrated and destroyed the Trickster.


Capítulo 16: [Hundred Blade Frag Ant]

Landing softly, Shiro breath out a wave of cold mist as the snowfall lightened up before stopping completely.

[MP: 3400/9300]

Her MP usage wasn't too extreme as the main catalyst for the blizzard was her passive Cold Aura.

As a seasoned veteran in combat, she could control the amount of bloodlust she exhibited. By pushing the limit of her bloodthirst, she could actively freeze her surroundings without using MP and instead, make it more efficient to use her Ice magic.

Kicking the fragments of the chest away, Shiro was disappointed that there were no mana stone to harvest.

"[Collect]"

"Oh my, well isn't this something..." Shiro muttered seeing the loot.

It wasn't that the loot was bountiful. It was just a single key.

[Tier 2 Trial Key]

A key to access the Tier 2 trial – [Silvermoon Keep]

Recommended Level: 40

This was a concept Shiro was unfamiliar with. There had never been a mention or a rumour about Trial Key's back in her previous life. An unfamiliar concept means undiscovered adventurers.

And undiscovered adventures mean undiscovered opportunities.

Storing the key away in her inventory, Shiro had a smile plastered on her face as just thinking about the mystery of this key made her giddy.

"With that being said, I should probably enter when I'm level 45 or something." Shiro muttered since the recommended level could potentially mean the minimum level needed to survive. Barely.

Looking around as she now had the time to inspect her surroundings in much greater detail, Shiro saw that there was another room connected to the room she was in.

Walking through the crack in the walls to reach the room, she saw the location update once more.

[Trickster's Abode]

"Trickster's Abode? The thing had a house?!" Shiro muttered.

Walking through the cave walls, she eventually found the abode as she was surprised at what she saw.

A clear stream circled a small island in the centre of the cave. From the island, a simple wooden bridge was present to connect the tunnel and the island together.

A single lone cabin stood atop the island as it gave Shiro a feeling of loneliness.

Illuminated by glowing stalactites, the scenery almost looked mystic.

Walking over, Shiro came up to the door of the cabin.

'The cabin seems to have been here for a long time…' Shiro thought seeing all of the dust that had gathered over time.

Opening the door, Shiro coughed slightly from all the dust.

The interior was simple. A bookshelf and a rocking chair. Besides the rocking chair, was a small table.

A decorated book laid on top of the table as it seemed like a grimoire of sorts. A grimoire was a book that contains a skill and most often than none, a tale.

Picking up the book, Shiro opened it to give it a quick read.

[Grimoire of the Broken]

In life, I was a genius. A master of disguise.

There was no one who I couldn't fool.

Yet, because of this talent, I had lost sight of myself. Trapped in a myriad of personalities that had become too real for me to forget.

In my struggle of multiple personalities, someone gave me light. No matter the personality, she accepted them.

Only one thing became a common factor amongst my thoughts. My love for her.

But who knew she was the princess of the royal family?

Her family hated me, who was but a trickster, a clown suffering from his own talents.

Afraid that their daughter was tricked by me, they interrogated me.

Oh, how laughable. My talent who broke me internally was fixed by her. Yet, it was her family who broke me once more.

Same question different answers.

That was the interrogation in its simplest form. No personality agreed with the other as the answers I gave was nothing but a jumbled mess.

Disgusted with me, they banished me to this Dungeon without her knowledge. She must think I abandoned her…

Trapped in a dungeon that she doesn't even know existed; I wait for my time to come.

To whoever reads this, I hope that you may find it in you fulfil a dead man's wish and pass on my message to my love.

There is only one thing in my life that will never change. My love for you.

The Trickster, The Broken

Saul Rundall

"…" Shiro was speechless.

'First of all, who the hell do you want me to pass this message too?! I don't know her name, I don't know her rough location nor do I know about why the hell this still exists?!' Shiro thought to herself.

When a Dungeon resets, a total wipe should occur. Monster's, items, everything. So for this place to exist was strange in and of itself.

And to top it all off, this Saul Rundall gave her a wild goose chase, he never once mentioned the name of that princess.

"Everyone has a love story or two, but I'm afraid you won't get your wish." Shiro apologised as she flipped to the end of the book.

[Learn Talent: Trickster?]

"A talent?" Shiro muttered. She was somewhat expecting a skill but not a talent. The difference between a talent and a skill was the talent being more natural, more powerful and more efficient.

It requires less MP and it gives you a title. Naturally, there are double sided talents like what Saul Rundall had suggested in his tale.

Shiro could guess that the Trickster talent would develop a split personality should one abuse it too much.

[Talent: Trickster]

All disguise, misdirection and stealth related skills are 70% more effective.

Title: Trickster

Passive – Perfect Actor

Act in the manner of anyone, fictional or real, without flaws.

Curse: Broken

Over time, Perfect Actor would develop a split personality inside you.

"Not worth it." Shiro concluded. Recycling the book, Shiro scanned the books on the bookshelf.

However, she sighed in disappointment when she realised they had nothing important.

Walking out of the cabin, she made her way back to the obelisk.

'I guess in the end, it was an ok trip.' Shiro thought as her best harvest was probably the key to the [Silvermoon Keep].

Tapping the second floor on the obelisk, her body was teleported away.

*CLANG CLANG!

The moment she was teleported, Shiro felt killing intent and summoned her two daggers.

Looking above her, she could see two ants with blades for arms.

"Wow, so hasty to kill me so soon." Shiro grinned at the challenge.

Quickly ducking, Shiro avoided another blade as the three blades above her head clashed with one another.

Her mind worked quickly as she put strength into her arms and pushed the ants up ever so slightly so she could roll out of danger.

Rolling on the ground slightly, she did a flip as she flung her daggers towards the three ants.

*BOOM!

The dagger froze all three ants but Shiro kept a serious face on.

Kicking her body off the ground slightly, she twisted mid-air so that she was parallel to the ground.

*PHEW PHEW!

Two blades cut above and below her. If she stayed still, the blades would have hit her head and legs.

Reaching out to touch the flat sides of the blades, Shiro froze the Ants just before she landed once more.

In that short exchange, Shiro had managed to freeze 5 Ants.

"Damn, you guys are relentless." Shiro commented as she shattered the ice and killed all 5 ants.

"And then I'm left with the rest of you." Shiro said, turning around to an army of floating eyes crawling towards her.

[Bladed Frag Ant Drone LVL 24]

[Bladed Frag Ant Drone LVL 23]

[Bladed Frag Ant Drone LVL 25]

Cracking her neck slightly, Shiro made an Ice spear as she crouched down.

"Fuuu…." Breathing out slightly, the temperature around her began to drop.

Digging her feet into the ground, Shiro sprinted towards the army of ants.

*KRRRRR!

The ants cried on in return as started to skitter towards her.

Stepping down as hard as she could, Shiro build up for force and momentum as she threw the spear as hard as she could.

Flicking her fingers, the spear broke apart mid-air.

"Break!" Shiro shouted as each of the pieces exploded into pillars that crushed several ants.

The ants became enraged as Shiro only grinned.

Sliding across the ground, she erected two ice blocks and sent them forward.

*BOOM BOOM

Ants could be seen flying through the air from the force of the collision.

'Not enough, faster, more efficient, more ruthless.' Shiro thought in her mind as she still wasn't fighting to her full capacity.

The shorter arm reach, the weaker muscles, the height and the stamina. Everything was a factor that she needed to get used to or else she can kiss full body control goodbye.

Bending her body backwards, she evaded two blades as both her hands touched the floor.

When her hands came into contact with the floor, two ice spikes shot up piercing the ants.

Putting strength into her arms, Shiro flipped backwards and slid across the ground.

There was a trail of ice wherever she touched as she could be seen gathering mana in her palms.

*BOOM!!!

Spontaneous explosions rang out with ice spikes shooting out from every direction and skewered the ants.

"An army is fine. But you're not going to overwhelm me that easily." Shiro grinned seeing the destruction that laid before her.

Clutching her fists, all of the ice shattered killing a majority of the ants. There were quite a few left over but it was just a matter of time before they all become her loot.

[Name: Shiro

Race: Snow Girl (Evolution Criteria yet to be met)

Level: 24

Class: Snow Girl★, Nanomancer

HP: 5650/7300

MP: 2800/11,300

STR: 45 -> 55(+35)

VIT: 50 -> 60 (+60)

INT: 130 (+100)

AGI: 100 (+45)

DEX: 60 (+30)

DEF: 10 (+65)

Unassigned Points: 0

Balance: 231,900 USD

Equipment (Tap to Display)

Skills –

Snow Girl ★:

Tier 2 Ice magic, Passive Regeneration, Blessed by Ice, Snow Magic, Faded Snow Movement, Cold Aura.

Nanomancer:

Dagger Creation, Nano Tech Engineering Tier 1, Sword Creation.

Other:

Mini-map, Inspection, Disguise, Harden (Equipment), Lesser Fear (Equipment), Sensory (Equipment).]

Panting slightly, Shiro sat down. She had finally killed the entire horde after much difficulty due to the strain they placed on her stamina.

However, her troubles were rewarded with a level up and her MP passing the 10,000 threshold.

Just seeing the 5-digit MP count made her smile with glee as she was a step closer to regaining her former strength. When she does, she can explore this unknown world without much trouble.

As a result of the 5-digit MP count, Shiro had managed to unlock her Sword Creation for the Nanomancer class. The damage value of the sword would be much higher than the daggers, but she would no longer have the option in throwing the weapon as a catalyst.

However, it was ok because it made up for her less than desired close quarts combat power.

Switching between dagger and sword will help cover both long and short range.

The final benefit she got from the horde was equipment. Replacing some of her old equipment, Shiro gained a new skill from the new replacements.

[Sensory – Passive]

Natural senses are heightened slightly.

It wasn't a massive boost, but it was welcomed since it helped her perceive her surroundings better.

Shiro waited for her HP and MP to completely recover before she started to make her way towards the obelisk.

A few Bladed Frag Ant Drones wanted to ambush her but failed. They were, in essence, cannon fodder. Without a giant army to swarm the person, they were easy to kill.

Naturally, this was what Shiro thinks. Most parties needed at least a healer to help them kill a [Bladed Frag Ant Drone]. This was attributed to the fact that their instincts and body control paled in comparison to Shiro.

Ignoring the fact that her strength was limited, her control and instincts were the finest even amongst veterans of combat.

Funnily enough, the closer she went towards the obelisk, the fewer times she got ambushed.

It was weird since the Dungeon ecosystem was mostly correct 9 times out of 10. For an anomaly like this to happen must mean the obelisk guardian is that of a foreign species or that it cannibalises which inflicts fear towards the drone.

From what she read about this Dungeon; The obelisk guardian was a boss called [Hundred Blade Frag Ant]. Since it's the same species it the most likely situation was cannibalism.

*Crrrrrrrrr….

The scraping of the blades against the ground could be heard faintly as Shiro knew she was getting close.

Stepping forward slowly, she observed the [Hundred Blade Frag Ant]

[Hundred Blade Frag Ant LVL 25 – Elite]

HP:80,000/80,000

MP: 20,000/20,000

As its name suggested, it looked as if it had a hundred blades acting as legs. Measuring 8 meters long and only 1 meter tall. It was armoured with void black chitin with two short antennas and a visible jaw.

"…"

'Ant my ass! It's a god damn giant millipede!!!'


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