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Capítulo 10: Bet

After the spar, it was time for lunch. Both Lyrica and Shiro went together as Shiro bought some sandwiches once again.

[Do you want to go Dungeon Exploring later? We'll try to get some money so we can make you that new weapon.] Shiro wrote down whilst eating a mana stone filled sandwich.

"Eh? What do you mean?" Lyrica asked.

[Don't you need the dual ended sword? We'll save up some money so we can go get one made for you. Then you'll be able to do Dungeons much easier.]

"Well… A higher level Dungeon needs at least 5 people. I've always been on my own so I don't really enter Dungeons most of the time. When I do, the loot goes to the other people since they have more contribution than me." Lyrica admitted with slight shame.

Shiro frowned hearing about this.

[It's fine. I had my Class Up so I should be a D rank adventurer. Right now I'm a E+ because I didn't Class Up last time.] Shiro explained showing Lyrica her Guild ID.

"Even then, we need 2 D ranks to enter the level 10+ Dungeon." Lyrica said as Shiro frowned.

'Troublesome.' She thought.

[Is there a way to get a permit to enter the Dungeon with just us 2?] Shiro asked but Lyrica shook her head.

Shiro tried to think of solutions but couldn't come up with one.

To level Lyrica up, the best way was for them to enter a Dungeon higher level than 10. She was able to enter alone into the public Dungeon last time was due to the monsters being level 5 or below. That and also she was a E+ rank adventurer.

A woman walked pass as she paused seeing what Shiro had just wrote down.

"You want to enter a Dungeon with just the two of you?!" She said as Shiro turned to her.

[Madison LVL 14 – Swordswoman]

She had brown hair tied in a ponytail, black eyes and a average face that had its own sense of beauty.

[Yes, is there anything wrong?] Shiro wrote.

"Maybe not for you, but this loser would drag you down." Madison said pointing her finger at Lyrica.

Lyrica shrunk back, not daring to meet her eyes.

Shiro frowned seeing her confidence shrinking once more.

[I'm a level 21 Ice mage. I can make up for what she lacks.] Shiro wrote down as her surroundings started to drop in temperature.

"Even as a level 21 Ice Mage, you'll run out of MP eventually. The loser here will just draw in more enemies and cause you to suffer losses." Madison said not relenting.

[And how would you know that?]

"I know because she was in my party once." Madison said as she glared at Lyrica causing her to shrink back further.

Shiro paused as she realised that this was a prime opportunity.

[In 1 Dungeon run. I can guarantee that she levels up to 12 at least. That should prove her worth.] Shiro wrote down as Madison laughed.

"Level 12? EXP is calculated in terms of contribution in the party. With a hindrance like her, it would take forever to level her up once." Madison said.

[I can guarantee her a high contribution percentage easily.] Shiro smiled.

"Big words for a little girl." Madison said seeing what Shiro wrote.

[How about this then. I want you and 2 of your friends to fill in the gap in our team. Me and Lyrica will proceed with the Dungeon. We'll have a single day inside the dungeon or an hour outside. If I don't get her level to at least level 12, I'll serve under you and help you level up to 20 instead.] Shiro wrote down as both Lyrica and Madison felt their jaws drop.

"S-S-Shiro?!" Lyrica said shocked at what Shiro was wagering.

'Having a level 21 assist me will make me level up much faster.' Madison thought.

"What do I have to do if I lose the bet." She asked.

Shiro smiled as she knew she had Madison hooked.

[For 5 days in a week, you'll help me and Lyrica fill the numbers needed to enter a dungeon.]

"5 Days… 3 at most." Madison said as Shiro nodded. Being able to enter the Dungeon 3 days in a week was worth it.

'Even if I lose, 3 days isn't too bad.' Madison thought.

[We'll sign an agreement later so neither of us can go back on our words.] Shiro wrote down as she remembered the school allowing bets but they must be under a contract.

"Alright. I just hope you don't back out." Madison replied.

[Don't worry I won't. We'll do the bet today since the Dungeon Exploration class will start soon.]

Shiro gestured for Lyrica to follow.

'Heh, just a kid in the end. I'm an Ice system focused mage. My magic can help lock down monsters making it easier for my teammates to kill them. This is basically a one-sided bet.' Shiro thought with a grin.

That and also the fact that there was a slight loophole in the agreement. She never stated how many times they'll be running the dungeon in a day. A day is 24 hours, she can spend 24 days in the dungeon if she wanted.

As they left the food court, Lyrica couldn't help but be anxious.

"Shiro, you shouldn't have done that. EXP is calculated in contributions. I doubt I'll be able to get enough contributions to level up twice. Not to mention, you'll basically become her servant!" Lyrica said sounding anxious.

[Don't worry about it. It's only till level 20.] Shiro grinned.

"How can I not worry!? The average for level 20 is 16 to 18 years old. You'll have to help her for at least 2 years or more!"

[I'll be making the dual ended sword for you using my Ice. My INT is pretty high so it should help you in terms of contribution. You'll be killing the monsters while I'll be restraining them. This way, you should be able to get enough contribution.] Shiro wrote down.

"But your freedom is at stake!?"

[Oh please. If I can level up to 21 even though I'm 13 years old, I'm bound to have a few tricks up my sleeve.] Shiro said shrugging her shoulders.

'Well, the truth is that I reached level 21 in just a few days.' Shiro thought.

"Even so. That's your freedom at stake for 3 fill-ins." Lyrica frowned.

[It's just till level 20. If anything, I'm counting on you.] Shiro grinned.

"Ha… You make reaching level 20 quickly sound so easy." Lyrica sighed.

[Don't worry about it too much, just focus on increasing contributions later when we do the Dungeon.]

###

"You didn't cower out." Madison said as she had her arms crossed.

[Neither did you.] Shiro wrote down as she walked towards her.

Lyrica walked behind Shiro as she tried to muster up the courage to face everyone with her head held high. However, her nerves got the better of her as she started to shrink herself a little again.

'Haaa…. This girl has a long way to go.' Shiro thought with a weary smile.

"So I'm the observer for this bet. Madison Wilcroft and her two friends will agree to fill up Shiro and Lyrica Valenstaine's party for 3 days every week.

In return, should Shiro and Lyrica Valenstaine fail their side of the bet, Shiro will help Madison Wilcroft until she's reached level 20. Is that correct?" The teacher said as Shiro nodded.

"Since I have received the confirmation, please sign the contract as you won't be able to go back onto your word until both parties have agreed." The teacher said as both Shiro and Madison signed the contract.

"The bet shall start the moment you enter the Dungeon." The teacher called out after authenticating the contract.

Shiro added the three people in front of her to the party.

[Shiro LVL 21 – Ice Mage] Party Leader

[Lyrica LVL 10 – Elven Swordswoman]

[Madison LVL 14 – Swordswoman]

[July LVL 13 – Mage]

[Karol LVL 13 – Swordswoman]

Seeing that everyone is in a party, Shiro nodded and entered the Dungeon.

[Serpent's Cavern 1F]

'Serpent's Cavern is a level 12 Dungeon meaning the Boss should be around level 15 give or take.' Shiro thought as she pulled out the sword handle the teacher gave her before.

*CRRR

Ice froze over both ends of the handle as Shiro threw the sword over to Lyrica.

"We'll stay here and wait. Hopefully, you don't waste too much of our time and come back." Madison sneered as Shiro only shrugged.

[Come on Lyrica.] Shiro wrote as Lyrica nodded.

Leaving Madison, July and Karol behind, Shiro and Lyrica dashed into the caverns.

The caverns were oddly lit up yet still dark as they couldn't see too far ahead of them.

Shiro and Lyrica dashed through the caverns without stopping as per agreed on. Shiro's speed was much higher than Lyrica's so she slowed down just to made sure they were together.

[As we agreed before, I'll lock down the serpents and you decapitate them ok? Quick and simple.] Shiro showed Lyrica the note as she nodded.

Shiro turned her focus in front of her as two serpents were being picked up on the Minimap.

Shiro quickly made two Ice spears as she threw them towards the Serpents.

Missing the serpent's bodies, the spears created an arc that locked them in place.

[Cave Serpent LVL 10]

[Cave Serpent LVL 8]

Without needing to be reminded, Lyrica already know what to do.

She slid on the ground slightly as she twirled the blade in a spinning motion. Jumping up, she did a flip whilst the blade itself decapitated the two serpents.

[Contribution –

Lyrica 65%

Shiro 35%

Madison 0%

July 0%

Karol 0%]

"[Collect]" Shiro said. However, to Lyrica, Shiro just opened her mouth and said nothing.

The serpent's bodies faded as Shiro quickly brought out her notepad.

[Next.]

Lyrica nodded as they charged towards the next lot of serpents.

###

"Wah?! They've already killed some monsters!? And that loser got 65% contribution as well!" July called out as Madison turned her attention towards her friend.

"Madison, if they actually do this I hope you remember what you promised us." Karol said as Madison nodded.

"I know. I'll pay you guys for every hour we have to fill for their team. No biggy." Madison said but her heart was pounding due to nervousness.

'How is she getting so much contribution?!' Madison thought with a frown.

###

It took a while but Lyrica levelled up to LVL 11.

"S-S-Shiro! I levelled up!!!!" Lyrica cried out in happiness and hugged Shiro whilst ignoring the cold.

Shiro smiled wearily seeing Lyrica's enthusiasm.

[I know. Come on, let's get as many levels as we can for you. My MP can still hold up for a while.] Shiro replied holding up the notepad.

"Alright!" Lyrica replied as Shiro refroze the sword to make sure it kept its sharpness.

After clearing out a majority of the beasts that were in front of them, Lyrica didn't manage to level up again. Most of the mobs were below LVL 10 making the EXP gain lower.

[We'll just kill the obelisk guardian then. That should level you up to 12.] Shiro wrote down as Lyrica was panting heavily due to how much she had been moving.

"Can we handle it?" She said taking a short break.

[We should be able to. Though I'll have to let my MP regenerate to full. You should take this chance to recover some of your stamina as well.]

"Hey Shiro. Isn't this bad for me? Like, I'm levelling up quickly but my experience would be limited." Lyrica said after a while.

[It's good that you know. However, this is just to get your level up to par with everyone else so they don't look down on you. Afterwards, we'll be able to challenge Dungeons 3 days a week with the trio filling up the missing spots.] Shiro replied.

"But 3 runs per week is still a little short. I wish I can get more experience." Lyrica replied with a sigh.

[When did I ever say we're going to do a single run a day? I said 3 days a week and never specified how many times they had to accompany us. For all we know, they could accompany us for 24 days inside the Dungeon or 24hrs outside. A single day.] Shiro showed Lyrica her note with a grin.

"Hahaha, Shiro that's mean." Lyrica chuckled seeing the trap Shiro laid out for the trio.

"But wouldn't they retaliate?" Lyrica asked.

[Nope. It's part of the contract after all. They can only blame themselves for not reading carefully. Not to mention, this missy here is a level 21 while they haven't even Classed Up yet.]

"Sometimes I wonder if you're really a 13-year-old Shiro. You seem so much more mature than I am." Lyrica said as Shiro shrugged.

[The physical body doesn't represent the mentality. One can be old yet have the heart of a child. Or be young and have the mindset of an adult.] Shiro wrote down as Lyrica nodded in agreement.

"Shiro is a smart, scheming and is a powerful person. In a good way of course." Lyrica grinned.

'And you are a hopeless person who needs guidance.' Shiro thought with a smile but didn't say out loud. She had a feeling that Lyrica will become someone great as long as she got the help she needed.

This whim of her's may prove to be more beneficial than she had expected.


Capítulo 11: Winning The Bet

[Giant Rock Serpent LVL 15 – Elite]

"…"

[…]

"You didn't need to write the three dots." Lyrica whispered over to Shiro.

[I didn't. But I still did in the end.] Shiro grinned.

"Are you sure we can take that on? My attacks will hardly work on rock." Lyrica asked as they were currently hiding behind a large boulder.

[I'll use a hammer I have in my storage. What I need you to do is to rack up contributions so you can get some EXP as well.] Shiro wrote down.

[When the fight starts, I want you to see if you can hit it at any weak joint. If you can't, try to use the sword to lock it down.]

"Alright. But how would I do that?"

[How else? Stab it through the mouth.] Shiro replied rolling her eyes.

"Stab it through the mouth?! That's really dangerous!" Lyrica whispered over.

[You can also stab it in the anus. I've tried it with a bear and it worked wonders.] Shiro suggested.

'Is this girl serious?' Lyrica thought hearing the suggestion.

"Erm, Shiro. Stabbing a monster through the anus isn't the most lady-like thing you can do you know?" Lyrica said.

[And? We're here to kill that monster. Not take it out on a dinner date.] Shiro wrote down.

"…True." Lyrica replied after a short pause.

[Alright, when I draw its aggro, you attack. Got it?]

Lyrica nodded as Shiro took out the hammer she received from the boss back in the first Dungeon.

The hammer needed 60 STR but Shiro had just enough. 35 STR from base stats and the extra 25 from equipment. This brought her up STR to exactly 60.

[Fire Spirit Empowered Hammer (Blue) LVL20

Requirements: 60 STR

+30 Blunt Damage

+15 Momentum Boost

+15 Fire Element

-10 Attack Speed

Passive Skill – Reduced Weight

Reduced Weight – Reduces the Weight of the weapon by 30%.]

Lyrica didn't know what kind of hammer it was but she knew it was a good weapon. However, her most important question was;

'How the hell is she carrying that hammer?! Isn't she a mage?!'

Hammers, Axes, Greatswords and other heavy weapons had a requirement on STR.

As a mage, Shiro's STR had to be low, yet she's carrying this weapon without problems.

Looking at the 4-meter-long serpent with grey scales, Shiro readjusted her grip on the hammer.

She stepped hard as she dragged the hammer behind her.

Sprinting towards the serpent at full speed, Shiro started to freeze the ground beneath her as her momentum increase further.

Hitting the peak of her speed, Shiro elevated the Ice and made a ramp.

"It's hammer time!" Shiro shouted with a grin even though Lyrica couldn't hear her.

To make sure she dealt the most amount of damage, she activated the skill that came with her [Fire Spirit Infused Power Gauntlet (Blue) LVL20]. The skill was [Power Boost] which gave her an 100% increase to damage and +15 STR for 20 seconds at the cost of receiving 30% more damage during the 20 seconds it was activated.

Jumping off the ramp, Shiro twisted her body as she used her entire strength to smash the hammer against the serpent's head.

*BOOM!!!!

The collision caused a miniature shockwave to explode out as the serpent recoiled backwards.

*SSSSS!!!!

It hissed at her with a glare.

Wrapping its body up into a coil, the serpent's head shot towards Shiro as if the head itself was spring locked.

Shiro flicked her finger upwards creating a ramp. The ramp had a gentle curve which redirected the serpent's attack.

The ramp redirected the serpent's attack in a clockwise direction so Shiro twisted her body anticlockwise. The hammer and the head met up as the two forces clashed once more.

'Am I even needed here?' Lyrica thought to herself as she knew Shiro could probably kill the boss on her own.

Even though she was thinking that, her body bolted into action the moment she recognised the fact that Shiro had the serpent's aggro.

She kept her body low as she twirled her dual ended blades.

Stabbing the blade into the ground, she vaulted herself upwards as she slashed at the back of the serpent.

The slashes only made a few shallow scratches as Lyrica landed and retreated.

However, she had accidentally retreated into the path of the tail as she shut her eyes and brought up her hands to protect herself.

*CRRRR!!!!

Lyrica heard a freezing sound as she reopened her eyes.

The tail was frozen a few meters away from hitting her. She turned towards Shiro and saw that she was crouched as a trail of Ice extended from her palms towards the tail.

"T-Thanks." Lyrica replied stuttering slightly as her nerves were a little tense right now.

Shiro nodded as she kicked back and hit the serpent on the side of the jaw. Following her momentum, the hammer stuck the serpent on the underside of the jaw.

'Wow!' Lyrica was amazed at how Shiro was fighting. All of her movements seem natural as it didn't matter if she was using a foreign weapon or not. It was as if she knew the best ways to utilise each of their strengths.

Shiro looked at Lyrica before holding up a finger and did a pushing up motion.

"….Fine." Lyrica said as she made a slightly bitter face.

Making sure she had a firm hold on the dual ended blade, Lyrica ran behind the serpent as she looked for the anus.

She started to become flustered after not being able to find it.

"I can't find it!" She shouted out as Shiro looked over at her.

Blocking another strike of the serpent, Shiro became slightly annoyed at the serpent.

*BANG!

She hit the jaw of the serpent as she sent it stumbling backwards.

Holding the hammer with one hand, Shiro started scribbled something down before kicking the notepad towards Lyrica.

In the time she was writing, Shiro dodge every one of the serpent's attacks without much problems.

Lyrica picked up the note as she read what Shiro wrote down.

[The cloaca or anus of a serpent is 3/4ths down the body. You'll have to lift up a scale and the hole should be present. There is only one hole so you can't miss.]

'How does she know where the anus is so well?!' Lyrica thought in her mind. However, she trusted Shiro's knowledge so she took the chance to search for the serpent's cloaca. It was made easier due to Shiro freezing the tail as it didn't move too much.

It didn't take long for her to find the scale that lifted up and expose the anus.

Lyrica held her breath as she tightened the grip on her blade.

'I'm sorry.' She apologised as she plunged the blade in with as much strength as she could.

*SSSSAAAAHHHHHHHH!!!!!!!!!

The serpent screamed as Lyrica backed off. The serpent's body rampaged as it broke the Ice locking down the tail easily. The serpent locked onto Lyrica instantly as it forgot about Shiro.

Seeing the back exposed, Shiro dashed towards the blade.

"Open those cheeks for this miss!!" Shiro shouted as she uppercutted the hammer into the blade.

The force caused the blade to shoot through the body of the serpent and come out the torso after piercing the heart.

The serpent writhed around in pain for a short while before collapsing.

Shiro supported the hammer on her shoulders as she had a happy smile on her face. Being able to let loose and kill a monster or two felt therapeutic.

[Contributions –

Shiro 80%

Lyrica 20%

Madison 0%

July 0%

Karol 0%]

Unfortunately, even with the 20% contribution of the boss, Lyrica didn't manage to level up.

Shiro didn't want to waste this corpse so she searched for the mana stone before storing it away.

"[Collect]"

The serpent's body faded away as Shiro checked the total loot drop for the 1st floor run.

9 Green Armour Pieces, 1 Blue Accessory, 5 Green Weapons and a bunch of miscellaneous items.

[Are you a blacksmith or Alchemist?] Shiro wrote down.

"Eh? No I'm not." Lyrica shook her head.

[Then I can sell the miscellaneous items?]

"Go ahead. I don't need them." Lyrica replied as she sat down and rested.

Getting confirmation, Shiro checked through all the gear that would be helpful for neither her or Lyrica and recycled them all. What she was left with was 2 green pieces beneficial for Lyrica.

On the other hand, Shiro's harvest was a green piece and the Blue Accessory.

The pieces for Lyrica was as follows.

[Serpent's Arm Guard (Green) LVL 10

+10 STR

+5 AGI]

[Serpent's Scaled Boots (Green) LVL 10

+15 AGI]

Both of these items focused on the STR and AGI stats which was good for adventurers that use a sword.

As for the equipment Shiro chose for herself, they were as follows.

[Serpent's Head Crown (Green) LVL 15

+15 INT

+5 STR]

This was better than her previous headgear which was:

[Fire Spirit Crown (Green) LVL 10

+10 INT]

Switching out the gear, Shiro experienced an upgrade of +5 in INT and a +5 in STR.

In addition to this, the Blue drop from the boss was a head accessory.

[Crown Serpent's Glare (Blue) LVL 15 – Head Accessory

+15 INT

+10 Mental Resistance

Skill – Lesser Fear

Lesser Fear – Focus your gaze on a person or monster lower level than you and inflict a Lesser Fear Status. If the target's level exceeds 20, the skill will have no effect.

Cost: 200MP

Duration: 1 Second – 5 Seconds

Cool Down: 30 Seconds]

Not only did it give her +15 INT, but it also gave her the Skill Lesser Fear. The skill Lesser Fear causes the monster's body to freeze up making it very useful. This would make it much easier for her to help Lyrica rack up the contributions.

[Name: Shiro

Race: Snow Girl (Evolution Criteria yet to be met)

Level: 21

Class: Snow Girl★, Nanomancer

HP: 3300/3800

MP: 1500/6300

STR: 35 (+30)

VIT: 30 (+40)

INT: 70 (+70)

AGI: 65 (+5)

DEX: 26

DEF: 10 (+32)

Unassigned Points: 0

Balance: 18,400 USD

Equipment (Tap to Display)

Skills –

Snow Girl ★:

Tier 2 Ice magic, Passive Regeneration, Blessed by Ice, Snow Magic, Faded Snow Movement, Cold Aura.

Nanomancer:

Dagger Creation.

Other:

Mini-map, Inspection, Disguise, Power Boost (Equipment), Fire Spirit Blessing (Equipment). Lesser Fear (Equipment).]

Shiro walked over to Lyrica as she passed her two pieces of equipment.

[Your bounty for the 1st floor. These two were the best for you since the stat bonus they give are beneficial for using the sword.]

"Thank you." Lyrica smiled as received the two pieces of equipment.

[Shall we challenge the floor 2 boss?] Shiro wrote down with a smile.

"Floor 2? I don't know. I feel like it's more beneficial if I try to fight it fairly. I can gain more experience that way." Lyrica replied as Shiro nodded.

[Then after we clear out the second floor, I'll freeze the boss and we'll use the obelisk to return back to floor 1 ok?]

"No problems." Lyrica smiled.

###

Clearing out the second floor was an easy task. Most of the monsters that were present on this floor were level 10 to 13 Rock Serpents.

To fight these Rock Serpents, Shiro would use Lesser Fear on the monsters whilst Lyrica would stab them through the head. This proved beneficial as Lyrica's contribution was always above 75% giving her most of the EXP.

When they cleared the floor out by roughly 60%, Lyrica levelled up fulfilling their side of the bet in only a few hours.

Unfortunately, none of the drops could be used so Shiro recycled everything.

As previously agreed on, Shiro froze the obelisk guardian while they used the obelisk to return back to the first floor.

Walking calmly back to the three girls, Shiro and Lyrica saw Madison's bitter face as Lyrica couldn't help but feel slightly giddy inside. The foreign feeling of proving people wrong was amazing.

[So I take it as our win?] Shiro smiled showing Madison the note.

"…" Madison frowned in annoyance as she glared at Lyrica.

'It's all her fault! Who told her to level up, she should have just stayed as a low level loser.' She thought.

Shiro frowned as she could feel Madison's hostility.

The temperature started to drop as Shiro looked at her coldly.

[Make a move, go on. I dare you.] Shiro wrote as she smiled with a menacing aura. Madison shivered seeing that smile and quickly ran out the Dungeon with her two friends.

Shiro shrugged as the temperature returned back to normal.

As they exited the Dungeon, the teacher walked up to Shiro.

"As you have won your side of the bet, Madison Wilcroft will fill up your party numbers for 3 days a week." The teacher said as he passed her contract to her.

Shiro nodded taking the contract.

[Thank you.] She wrote down as she left with Lyrica.

After walking for a while, Shiro couldn't help but notice Lyrica's conflicting gaze.

[What's wrong?]

"Well… It's just that you basically put a few years of your life on the line just so that we can run Dungeons. Why are you doing this? Even if you said it was payment for helping you with reading and writing, I can't help but wonder." Lyrica said as Shiro paused.

[It was a whim of mine. Life is full of twists and turns. If you don't actively seek them out, then life wouldn't be as interesting. Meeting new people, making new friends. All of it starts with a whim. The whim may become something more, or it may just be another day of my life. Don't dwell on it too much.] Shiro smiled showing her the writing.

"So it's just a whim? Yet for me, it has become something more." Lyrica muttered.

[Don't sound so depressing. We just got our chance to run Dungeons for 3 days a week.] Shiro smiled patting Lyrica's shoulders.

"You're right." Lyrica replied as they walked home.

Shiro gave Lyrica a wave before entering her room. Undressing herself, Shiro wore just a plain shirt and underwear as she grabbed the tablet and laid on the bed.

'Since I'm thinking of making a commission for Lyrica's weapon, I need to find the prices.' She thought as she searched up the web.

After scouring around for a while, Shiro found the Blacksmith's website.

'Hm… It's not too expensive.' Shiro thought seeing the prices.

[Average Commission for Green Grade Custom Weapons]

Must provide materials yourself.

Basic deposit: 5,000 USD

LVL 5 – 5,000 -> 10,000 USD

LVL 10 – 11,000 -> 50,000 USD

LVL 15 – 50,000 -> 75,000 USD

LVL 20 – 100,000 -> 200,000 USD

Over LVL 20 – 200,000 USD +


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