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Yo if you want a legit review this ain't it just a little rant. I haven't read it but I already know its a generic one piece fan-fic. Every fan-fic has to have the rumble rumble fruit and its super annoying. I wanna read something different like being a pirate Hunter instead of a marine or pirate and most of all I wanna see MYTHICAL ZOANS. They're so cool but people insist on using the rumble fruit. I've yet to see a fan-fic use such a fruit.
Please update this novel, it's very fuckingaaaa aaaaaaaaaaaa I'll die if you do not post more chapter Passa Discord to min power flood your chat for you to update this novel
How come everyone rate this 5 stars? It's well written in a good english and this the only good thing in the novel, the mc is a very bad made character (psycho, pussy, beta, pervert, japanese-like mc, weak, not talented in anything and idiot). I don't mean to be harsh, thanks for the chapters and good luck for the novel but I'm out I just can't stand the mc.
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Thanks for the update, i am very like this story.. !!! Did u know.. There are lucy !!! Lucy not luffy !! I like this storyy !!! Please update moreeee moree moreee.. And dont drop this novel please
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All the chapters up till now have promised much and delivered. Keep the same quality and I can see this story ranking high. My only wish is that you dont get burnout due to speedy realises and drop it. So take your time keep them coming.
First harem Second op all haki Third swordsman Fourth many devil fruits Fifth mastered all martial arts Sixth super hightech and invincible ship Seventh and last hot women crewmates
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if he become a pirate then nami and robin if marine then tashigi ,hina but i think if he got rumble rumble luffy is his weakness so he can't fight him so he need to be his crewmate
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Yo if you want a legit review this ain't it just a little rant. I haven't read it but I already know its a generic one piece fan-fic. Every fan-fic has to have the rumble rumble fruit and its super annoying. I wanna read something different like being a pirate Hunter instead of a marine or pirate and most of all I wanna see MYTHICAL ZOANS. They're so cool but people insist on using the rumble fruit. I've yet to see a fan-fic use such a fruit.
Please update this novel, it's very fuckingaaaa aaaaaaaaaaaa I'll die if you do not post more chapter Passa Discord to min power flood your chat for you to update this novel
How come everyone rate this 5 stars? It's well written in a good english and this the only good thing in the novel, the mc is a very bad made character (psycho, pussy, beta, pervert, japanese-like mc, weak, not talented in anything and idiot). I don't mean to be harsh, thanks for the chapters and good luck for the novel but I'm out I just can't stand the mc.
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Thanks for the update, i am very like this story.. !!! Did u know.. There are lucy !!! Lucy not luffy !! I like this storyy !!! Please update moreeee moree moreee.. And dont drop this novel please
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Revelar spoiler oopoppopopopoopoppopooikikikkiikikikikikikikikikikikikikiujujjujujujujujujujujujuujreerererreerererererrerererereererwwaawawwawaawawawawawawawawa
All the chapters up till now have promised much and delivered. Keep the same quality and I can see this story ranking high. My only wish is that you dont get burnout due to speedy realises and drop it. So take your time keep them coming.
First harem Second op all haki Third swordsman Fourth many devil fruits Fifth mastered all martial arts Sixth super hightech and invincible ship Seventh and last hot women crewmates
Harem harem harem harem harem harem harem harem harem harem harem harem harem harem harem harem harem harem harem harem harem harem harem harem harem harem harem harem harem harem harem
if he become a pirate then nami and robin if marine then tashigi ,hina but i think if he got rumble rumble luffy is his weakness so he can't fight him so he need to be his crewmate
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