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A little disappointing for a story based on one punch man. Reads like one of those fan tics made by a 12 year old. Tsarck, I really expected more from you. P.S. Justifying every part we hate about your character by saying “oh well that’s what a geek/nerd would do” is so f*cking annoying. The novel isn’t terrible but every time I read that it puts a bad taste in my mouth. STOP SAYING THAT, LITERALLY OWN UP TO THE FACT THAT THIS IS ONE OF THOSE SELF INSERTS! The character is pretty disappointing btw.
Well hello people, my name's Tsarck and i'm here to tell you why you should or shouldn't read this novel.ag If you're not a fan of One Punch Man, or are a fan but don't know all that much things on One Punch Man, it's not for you. Most of the time i don't really introduce people that have already been introduced in the manga, and i don't explain things that only someone who read the manga can understand. Then again you can still read and try to understand, but be warned that the start of this novel will follow the canon of the manga. For all those who want to read a fanfic about a different Saitama, it's for you. Saitama is funny, Saitama is OP, but he's also dumb. There are many moments in the manga that made me angry at Saitama because of how dumb he could be. I mean seriously the mere fact that he doesn't even recognize a villain when he sees one proves how dumb he is. But don't worry! This Saitama will be different. He will be calmer, smarter but also colder. It always made me giggle to imagine what the world of One Punch Man would become if Saitama was a bit more serious and manipulative.......Well here it is! Of course Saitama won't be some cold asshole right at the beginning of the story.........But things are gonna get interesting, trust me =)
DIO: Tsugi wa Jotaro, kisama da! Jotaro: Yarou… DIO! DIO: Ho… mukatta kuruno ka? Nigetsu ni kono DIO ni chikazuite kuruno ka? Sekkaku sofu no Josefu ga watashi no Za Warudo no shotai wo. Shiken shuryu chaimu chokuzen made mondai yo toitte iru jukensee ne you na? Kisshi koita kibun de wo shietekure ta to yuu no ni? Jotaro: Chikadzu kanaka teme wo buchi no me tenain de na. DIO: Hoho! Dewa juubun chikazukanai youi. Jotaro: Ora! DIO: Noroi, noroi! Za Warudo wa saikyou no Sutando da. Jikan wa tomezetomo, supiido to paowa to te omae no Suta Purachina yoryuu enna no towa! Jotaro: Ore no Suta Purachina to onaji taipu wo Sutando nara. Enkyori enai kenai da, paowa to semitsu na bokina dekiru.
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I just want to say😑 10chaps😌 I’m looking forward to the next chap😅 ...............……….....................................................................................-....-........-..........................................-.....-........-.......—————-........-..-//.-/..
The story is interesting, they should have more with that theme in this app / site. The author is not stuck in the original world but creates more history, regardless if it is not consistent in the original world, but this is not bad since it makes sense in the fanfiction
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Girls Like You Maroon 5 Spent 24 hours I need more hours with you You spent the weekend Getting even, ooh ooh We spent the late nights Making things right, between us But now it's all good baby Roll that Backwood baby And play me close 'Cause girls like you Run around with guys like me 'Til sundown, when I come through I need a girl like you, yeah yeah Girls like you Love fun, yeah me too What I want when I come through I need a girl like you, yeah yeah Yeah yeah yeah Yeah yeah yeah I need a girl like you, yeah yeah Yeah yeah yeah Yeah yeah yeah I need a girl like you, yeah yeah I spent last night On the last flight to you Took a whole day up Trying to get way up, ooh ooh We spent the daylight Trying to make things right between us And now it's all good baby Roll that Backwood baby And play me close 'Cause girls like you Run around with guys like me 'Til sundown, when I come through I need a girl like you, yeah yeah Girls like you Love fun, yeah me too What I want when I come through I need a girl like you, yeah yeah Yeah yeah yeah Yeah yeah yeah I need a girl like you, yeah yeah Yeah yeah yeah Yeah yeah yeah I need a girl like you, yeah yeah I need a girl like you, yeah yeah I need a girl like you Maybe it's 6:45 Maybe I'm barely alive Maybe you've taken my **** for the last time, yeah Maybe I know that I'm drunk Maybe I know you're the one Maybe I'm thinking it's better if you drive 'Cause girls like you Run around with guys like me 'Til sundown, when I come through I need a girl like you, yeah yeah 'Cause girls like you Run around with guys like me 'Til sundown, when I come through I need a girl like you, yeah yeah Girls like you Love fun, yeah me too What I want when I come through I need a girl like you, yeah yeah Yeah yeah yeah Yeah yeah yeah I need a girl like you, yeah yeah Yeah yeah yeah Yeah yeah yeah I need a girl like you
Yeah... I hope you don't to drop this novel. ...@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@ .. ..........................
Nice story its one of the good fafic I read so far I just hope the chapter update can be done 2 times a day I'm gonna fully support you by voting all my power stone
MC loves swearing way too much - is this a sign of writer being repressed irl? He is also pu$$y AF Scared of facing monsters he can one shot since he now has Saitama's body and powers Tldr MC is a good for nothing lil trash How unimpressive
Not much to say apart from perfect. Really simple and enjoyable.👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍
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Totally worth it. Give it shot I’m sure you will be hooked. The story has much promise and I’m excited to see where it goes . I can’t really review daily since there are not that many chapters out but I looks like it could be something to pass the time with
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This is extremly good(this is brilliant already because its a one punch man story) but dont you dare drop it👍👍👍👌👌👌👌👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍
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A little disappointing for a story based on one punch man. Reads like one of those fan tics made by a 12 year old. Tsarck, I really expected more from you. P.S. Justifying every part we hate about your character by saying “oh well that’s what a geek/nerd would do” is so f*cking annoying. The novel isn’t terrible but every time I read that it puts a bad taste in my mouth. STOP SAYING THAT, LITERALLY OWN UP TO THE FACT THAT THIS IS ONE OF THOSE SELF INSERTS! The character is pretty disappointing btw.
Well hello people, my name's Tsarck and i'm here to tell you why you should or shouldn't read this novel.ag If you're not a fan of One Punch Man, or are a fan but don't know all that much things on One Punch Man, it's not for you. Most of the time i don't really introduce people that have already been introduced in the manga, and i don't explain things that only someone who read the manga can understand. Then again you can still read and try to understand, but be warned that the start of this novel will follow the canon of the manga. For all those who want to read a fanfic about a different Saitama, it's for you. Saitama is funny, Saitama is OP, but he's also dumb. There are many moments in the manga that made me angry at Saitama because of how dumb he could be. I mean seriously the mere fact that he doesn't even recognize a villain when he sees one proves how dumb he is. But don't worry! This Saitama will be different. He will be calmer, smarter but also colder. It always made me giggle to imagine what the world of One Punch Man would become if Saitama was a bit more serious and manipulative.......Well here it is! Of course Saitama won't be some cold asshole right at the beginning of the story.........But things are gonna get interesting, trust me =)
DIO: Tsugi wa Jotaro, kisama da! Jotaro: Yarou… DIO! DIO: Ho… mukatta kuruno ka? Nigetsu ni kono DIO ni chikazuite kuruno ka? Sekkaku sofu no Josefu ga watashi no Za Warudo no shotai wo. Shiken shuryu chaimu chokuzen made mondai yo toitte iru jukensee ne you na? Kisshi koita kibun de wo shietekure ta to yuu no ni? Jotaro: Chikadzu kanaka teme wo buchi no me tenain de na. DIO: Hoho! Dewa juubun chikazukanai youi. Jotaro: Ora! DIO: Noroi, noroi! Za Warudo wa saikyou no Sutando da. Jikan wa tomezetomo, supiido to paowa to te omae no Suta Purachina yoryuu enna no towa! Jotaro: Ore no Suta Purachina to onaji taipu wo Sutando nara. Enkyori enai kenai da, paowa to semitsu na bokina dekiru.
Revelar spoiler I just want to say😑 10chaps😌 I’m looking forward to the next chap😅 ...............……….....................................................................................-....-........-..........................................-.....-........-.......—————-........-..-//.-/..
The story is interesting, they should have more with that theme in this app / site. The author is not stuck in the original world but creates more history, regardless if it is not consistent in the original world, but this is not bad since it makes sense in the fanfiction
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Girls Like You Maroon 5 Spent 24 hours I need more hours with you You spent the weekend Getting even, ooh ooh We spent the late nights Making things right, between us But now it's all good baby Roll that Backwood baby And play me close 'Cause girls like you Run around with guys like me 'Til sundown, when I come through I need a girl like you, yeah yeah Girls like you Love fun, yeah me too What I want when I come through I need a girl like you, yeah yeah Yeah yeah yeah Yeah yeah yeah I need a girl like you, yeah yeah Yeah yeah yeah Yeah yeah yeah I need a girl like you, yeah yeah I spent last night On the last flight to you Took a whole day up Trying to get way up, ooh ooh We spent the daylight Trying to make things right between us And now it's all good baby Roll that Backwood baby And play me close 'Cause girls like you Run around with guys like me 'Til sundown, when I come through I need a girl like you, yeah yeah Girls like you Love fun, yeah me too What I want when I come through I need a girl like you, yeah yeah Yeah yeah yeah Yeah yeah yeah I need a girl like you, yeah yeah Yeah yeah yeah Yeah yeah yeah I need a girl like you, yeah yeah I need a girl like you, yeah yeah I need a girl like you Maybe it's 6:45 Maybe I'm barely alive Maybe you've taken my **** for the last time, yeah Maybe I know that I'm drunk Maybe I know you're the one Maybe I'm thinking it's better if you drive 'Cause girls like you Run around with guys like me 'Til sundown, when I come through I need a girl like you, yeah yeah 'Cause girls like you Run around with guys like me 'Til sundown, when I come through I need a girl like you, yeah yeah Girls like you Love fun, yeah me too What I want when I come through I need a girl like you, yeah yeah Yeah yeah yeah Yeah yeah yeah I need a girl like you, yeah yeah Yeah yeah yeah Yeah yeah yeah I need a girl like you
Yeah... I hope you don't to drop this novel. ...@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@ .. ..........................
Nice story its one of the good fafic I read so far I just hope the chapter update can be done 2 times a day I'm gonna fully support you by voting all my power stone
MC loves swearing way too much - is this a sign of writer being repressed irl? He is also pu$$y AF Scared of facing monsters he can one shot since he now has Saitama's body and powers Tldr MC is a good for nothing lil trash How unimpressive
Not much to say apart from perfect. Really simple and enjoyable.👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍
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Totally worth it. Give it shot I’m sure you will be hooked. The story has much promise and I’m excited to see where it goes . I can’t really review daily since there are not that many chapters out but I looks like it could be something to pass the time with
hope you don't drop this, coz it's good!🙂🙂🙂🙂🙂🙂🙂🙂🙂🙂🙂🙂🙂🙂🙂🙂🙂🙂🙂🙂🙂🙂🙂🙂🙂🙂🙂🙂🙂🙂🙂🙂🙂🙂🙂🙂🙂🙂🙂🙂🙂🙂🙂🙂🙂🙂🙂🙂🙂🙂🙂🙂🙂🙂🙂🙂🙂🙂🙂🙂🙂🙂🙂🙂🙂🙂🙂🙂🙂🙂🙂🙂🙂🙂😝
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This is extremly good(this is brilliant already because its a one punch man story) but dont you dare drop it👍👍👍👌👌👌👌👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍
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