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Escribe una reseñaI like the story very much. This version is becomming more like what I actually wanted saitama to do in the world. I mean he was always overpowered but less inteligent and dumb but this story does't have that flaw. What I wanted to see is Saitama going on against guys who could destroy universes in single blow i.e. gods and demon lords and angels stuff kind of a heavenly arc or demon arc or holy realm arc. Saitama must be established as a one true most powerful being who has power absolute superior to everyone even among those who created him.
Eu gostei da história mas com base no que li, muitos podem não gostar, por acharem diferente ou chato. Mas recomendo a todos a darem uma chance
I’ll change my review once I read through the entire thing but the MC is completely changing his attitude as Saitama I hope he doesn’t have a blood lust. If so I’m most likely going to drop it
IF THE AUTHOR IS STILL THERE THEN I HOPE THAT THE FAN FIC WILL BE CONTINUED NEW CHAPTERS PLEASEEEEEEEEEEEEE 🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥
******************************** Good work! ****************************************** ***************************** And i need more! ***************************************
The craze of today's writers is to pick up and add clichés to it, like MC being someone from Earth who reads and watches manga and anime, or adding useless harems to the story or this lemon **** they call, or does MC doggie. behind woman, it hurts the dignity of a man you know? And another I don't know who was the retard to say that every man's dream is harem ... my dream is to reincarnate in the immortal world in search of strength and not this garbage harem
It's pretty interesting. What would happen if Saitama is a little smart. ..................................................... try if for fun.
Honestly not too bad for webnovel, but the author always putting up waste chapters and not giving a **** about who's reading is annoying, so...
Truthfully it's quite odd to get a calm and intelligent Saitama but we do get an original story depicting a "what if" and as always we wait and expect more chapter like this or maybe better... We don't know what the future reserve for us... 😉
Not bad he should do this for a living he needs some work on expression and protagist development he is developing nicely. Some nice work so far
Its a good novel......i like it... ........................... ......... ............... . ............................................... Continue it Good luck
Except the first 3 chapter ilike it very much its a good novel overall.......... the first chapter sucks Good novel I like it Good luck to author san for this one
If you fan of opm-I suggest dont read it this. Author changing so much you are gonna get irritated. If you are gonna write fan-fiction- AT LEAST BE FAN, AUTHOR!
THIIS NOVEL IS SIMPLY AWESOME!!!! IT IS GOING SOMEWHERE ... HAREM!! PLZ DONT DROP 🙀🙀😱😱 WE LOVE THIS NOVEL!! DONT LISTEN TO THEM HATERS THEY ARE LITTLE BITCHES!!
Too many curse word. MC retard to me. Plot not really good. I don't really understand what author want delivery to reader. ....... ....
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Revelar spoilerWHY is iT DROPPED DAWIMT THIS SO SO GOOD PLZ MAKE MORE PLZ WE WANT MORE OPASS ONEPUNCHMAN! PLEASE I DONATE SO MUCH! plz I'll get on my knees and beg! I LOVE HOW ONE PUNCH MAN IS ACTUALLY DOING HIS JOB !!
Revelar spoilerWriting quality is as average as it gets Stability of updates idk about but i saw it was somewhat stable. Story and Character design are both complete trash. The author doesn't understand anything about the one punch man universe and decides to make sh*t up World background isn't creative at all since its just a poor copy and paste plus wrong information about the one punch man world
. . . . . . . . I have faith in Author-sama to convert this story into a masterpiece. 🔥 . . . .
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Revelar spoilerI really love this book along with the idea behind it I don’t really care it turns into a harem or not I just wanted the writer to know he has my support and if your on the edge about reading it just give it a try it’s really good.
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Revelar spoilerIf This Timeline Before blast and Hero Association Exist , That Gonna Be True Saitama From Those Timeline Travel Through Future And Lost Memory About His Past
I like the story very much. This version is becomming more like what I actually wanted saitama to do in the world. I mean he was always overpowered but less inteligent and dumb but this story does't have that flaw. What I wanted to see is Saitama going on against guys who could destroy universes in single blow i.e. gods and demon lords and angels stuff kind of a heavenly arc or demon arc or holy realm arc. Saitama must be established as a one true most powerful being who has power absolute superior to everyone even among those who created him.
Eu gostei da história mas com base no que li, muitos podem não gostar, por acharem diferente ou chato. Mas recomendo a todos a darem uma chance
I’ll change my review once I read through the entire thing but the MC is completely changing his attitude as Saitama I hope he doesn’t have a blood lust. If so I’m most likely going to drop it
IF THE AUTHOR IS STILL THERE THEN I HOPE THAT THE FAN FIC WILL BE CONTINUED NEW CHAPTERS PLEASEEEEEEEEEEEEE 🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥
******************************** Good work! ****************************************** ***************************** And i need more! ***************************************
The craze of today's writers is to pick up and add clichés to it, like MC being someone from Earth who reads and watches manga and anime, or adding useless harems to the story or this lemon **** they call, or does MC doggie. behind woman, it hurts the dignity of a man you know? And another I don't know who was the retard to say that every man's dream is harem ... my dream is to reincarnate in the immortal world in search of strength and not this garbage harem
It's pretty interesting. What would happen if Saitama is a little smart. ..................................................... try if for fun.
Honestly not too bad for webnovel, but the author always putting up waste chapters and not giving a **** about who's reading is annoying, so...
Truthfully it's quite odd to get a calm and intelligent Saitama but we do get an original story depicting a "what if" and as always we wait and expect more chapter like this or maybe better... We don't know what the future reserve for us... 😉
Not bad he should do this for a living he needs some work on expression and protagist development he is developing nicely. Some nice work so far
Its a good novel......i like it... ........................... ......... ............... . ............................................... Continue it Good luck
Except the first 3 chapter ilike it very much its a good novel overall.......... the first chapter sucks Good novel I like it Good luck to author san for this one
If you fan of opm-I suggest dont read it this. Author changing so much you are gonna get irritated. If you are gonna write fan-fiction- AT LEAST BE FAN, AUTHOR!
THIIS NOVEL IS SIMPLY AWESOME!!!! IT IS GOING SOMEWHERE ... HAREM!! PLZ DONT DROP 🙀🙀😱😱 WE LOVE THIS NOVEL!! DONT LISTEN TO THEM HATERS THEY ARE LITTLE BITCHES!!
Too many curse word. MC retard to me. Plot not really good. I don't really understand what author want delivery to reader. ....... ....
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Revelar spoilerWHY is iT DROPPED DAWIMT THIS SO SO GOOD PLZ MAKE MORE PLZ WE WANT MORE OPASS ONEPUNCHMAN! PLEASE I DONATE SO MUCH! plz I'll get on my knees and beg! I LOVE HOW ONE PUNCH MAN IS ACTUALLY DOING HIS JOB !!
Revelar spoilerWriting quality is as average as it gets Stability of updates idk about but i saw it was somewhat stable. Story and Character design are both complete trash. The author doesn't understand anything about the one punch man universe and decides to make sh*t up World background isn't creative at all since its just a poor copy and paste plus wrong information about the one punch man world
. . . . . . . . I have faith in Author-sama to convert this story into a masterpiece. 🔥 . . . .
next chapter.next chapter.next chapter.next chapter.next chapter.next chapter.next chapter.next chapter.next chapter.next chapter.next chapter.next chapter.next chapter.next chapter.next chapter.next chapter.
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Revelar spoilerI really love this book along with the idea behind it I don’t really care it turns into a harem or not I just wanted the writer to know he has my support and if your on the edge about reading it just give it a try it’s really good.
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Revelar spoiler
If This Timeline Before blast and Hero Association Exist , That Gonna Be True Saitama From Those Timeline Travel Through Future And Lost Memory About His Past