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It's a good novel so far. Keep up the release rate and try to increase it. Looking forward to more chapters. It's an interesting concept that you have. See if you can increase the length of chapters.
You really did great thought at first, the story literally gives a lot of question puzzling out to keep reading. Just don't forget to pause and use period. Too long sentences or paragraphs are really exhausting to read.
Is this your first time? It seems like you're very experienced writing novels. I don't see any grammatical errors. The only thing that seems wrong here is that, it have any MLBB content? You join this to the contest right? Maybe it will appeared in later chapters. Overall a very interesting story, keep it up.
Keep writing u mother****er y did u stop please start writing again I really liked this book so keep writing thank you and goodnight 😴😘🌙💤 💤
It's a good novel so far. Keep up the release rate and try to increase it. Looking forward to more chapters. It's an interesting concept that you have. See if you can increase the length of chapters.
You really did great thought at first, the story literally gives a lot of question puzzling out to keep reading. Just don't forget to pause and use period. Too long sentences or paragraphs are really exhausting to read.
Is this your first time? It seems like you're very experienced writing novels. I don't see any grammatical errors. The only thing that seems wrong here is that, it have any MLBB content? You join this to the contest right? Maybe it will appeared in later chapters. Overall a very interesting story, keep it up.
Keep writing u mother****er y did u stop please start writing again I really liked this book so keep writing thank you and goodnight 😴😘🌙💤 💤