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Angel_Light_2368

I stopped reading this due to being confused and annoyed by the sudden deaths. Rachel's character is really well done but I cant get into the whole storyline. The story has little to no information on world backgrounds. So very confusing. Rachel's character is what got my interests but I'm begining to second guess this story. Too quick and full of grammatic errors and bad sentences. Got a headache trying to be patient in each arc. Nice try.

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manganerd1087

Question? Is the third part of the novel connected to the story or is it it's own sort of spin-off inspired/references to Rachel's story .overall I think this is one of the best stories I've read off of wattpad/ webnovel.

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wncrystal

I like the novel so far . The story are nice an interesting I like how the character of the protagonist start to develop from the 'unfinished school drama' arc . I hope the author can do proofreading to correct the grammatical error and jumbled sentences for better reading experience and convenience. Also please fix the problem about the jumbled chapters being updated , it's hard for us readers to search for the corresponding chapters to match according to the story or arc . And lastly you did a good job in writing such a wonderful and interesting novel and I support you so keep on writing and improving more . Thank you .

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joblank74

I’ll be honest, a little weird but in a good way! The main lead so far has peaked my interest so I’m going to keep reading. I’m hoping the my interest doesn’t peader out half way through the book. So many stories just ramble on and on with no direction.

5yr
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Angel_Light_2368

I stopped reading this due to being confused and annoyed by the sudden deaths. Rachel's character is really well done but I cant get into the whole storyline. The story has little to no information on world backgrounds. So very confusing. Rachel's character is what got my interests but I'm begining to second guess this story. Too quick and full of grammatic errors and bad sentences. Got a headache trying to be patient in each arc. Nice try.

3yr
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manganerd1087

Question? Is the third part of the novel connected to the story or is it it's own sort of spin-off inspired/references to Rachel's story .overall I think this is one of the best stories I've read off of wattpad/ webnovel.

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4yr
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wncrystal

I like the novel so far . The story are nice an interesting I like how the character of the protagonist start to develop from the 'unfinished school drama' arc . I hope the author can do proofreading to correct the grammatical error and jumbled sentences for better reading experience and convenience. Also please fix the problem about the jumbled chapters being updated , it's hard for us readers to search for the corresponding chapters to match according to the story or arc . And lastly you did a good job in writing such a wonderful and interesting novel and I support you so keep on writing and improving more . Thank you .

4yr
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joblank74

I’ll be honest, a little weird but in a good way! The main lead so far has peaked my interest so I’m going to keep reading. I’m hoping the my interest doesn’t peader out half way through the book. So many stories just ramble on and on with no direction.

5yr
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