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The sentence structuring, grammar and capitalization is horrible. Get an editor, grammarly or write in your own language. The characters personalities are so unrealistic it's painful to read.
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A pretty good story but has not been updated in awhile......................................................................................
I want to read this new part. Hope you still translate this work. + +++++................. ........................................................................................................................ ++ +++ + + + + + + + +
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The sentence structuring, grammar and capitalization is horrible. Get an editor, grammarly or write in your own language. The characters personalities are so unrealistic it's painful to read.
Author, why until now there is no cover or picture of the novel, its very important as it attract the attention of a reader who are checking of dxd fanfic Dont drop this More More More More More More More
Combining the power of boost and dividing, the author awesomeness in imaginations reach the peak More!!! More!!! More!!! More!!! More!!! More!!! More!!! More!!! More!!! More!!! More!!! More!!! More!!! More!!! More!!! More!!!
Another cool addition to my dxd fanfic read list. 140 140 140 140 140 140 140 140 140 140 140 140 140 140 140 140 140 140 140 140 140 140 140 140 140 140 140 140 140 140 140 140 140 140 140 140 140 140 140 140 140 140 140 140 140 140 140 140
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A pretty good story but has not been updated in awhile......................................................................................