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Sorry, i really try hard to like this story, but it is just too bland. Also, i find the author a Pervert acting like a 12 years old kid when he's obviously a new account of anime_novel the author of " I'm Kirito". Going all Nyaa~ nyaa~ like a weirdo which is effective on attracting and appeasing most random online losers. Good job. DROPPED.
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Looks pretty interesting. It's not perfect, but I'll keep reading, so keep writing author!!! Don't let others discourage you from sharing your story with others. Even if some say it's trash, others will still like it. They just have different tastes.
Author just gives MC random **** appease his fantasies, there is no character building, no world building, just a perverted author who keeps saying “Nyaa” as of he is a fucking cat. Don’t read this, you will regret wasting your time.
Too much filler bullish itsssss Stupid System. Too much filler bullish itsssss Stupid System. Too much filler bullish itsssss Stupid System. Too much filler bullish itsssss Stupid System. Too much filler bullish itsssss Stupid System.
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Please dont drop, i like this novel... ............................................................. ............................................................. .............................................................
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Overpowered system? More like over-useless. Obviously, the author is just trying hard to fit force explanation to reduce plot holes. Unplanned writing, just a copy paste with few minor Weird changes. I already wasted my time on the first one which was dropped in a days time, I'm not gonna waste my time reading this crap. Ciao.
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Nice story but if can maybe you can make 18+ to maybe because you enchant the face mc to be too nice so will harem and 18+ chapter to plissss and if can maybe make 2or 3 original girl for mc maybe you can make waifu with face of other anime for preference
Excited to see how this goes I hope you add in the floors that aren't in the anime that he just skips because that'd be interesting --- a zz a zz z z z z z z z z zz z z zz z z z z
Mira_chan you're already doing a great job. Although I was a little sad that you stopped your first novel and made me waste my powerstones I am more yhan happy that you're back. Keep this up!👍👍
Pls update soon!! Cant wait to read next chapter... .................................................................................................
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Actually, this novel is good enough to read. But why did you even write that "I can't take insults" in your synopsis, you know that there'll be someone out there who want to make you drop your novel right?
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Revelar spoiler Sorry, i really try hard to like this story, but it is just too bland. Also, i find the author a Pervert acting like a 12 years old kid when he's obviously a new account of anime_novel the author of " I'm Kirito". Going all Nyaa~ nyaa~ like a weirdo which is effective on attracting and appeasing most random online losers. Good job. DROPPED.
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Looks pretty interesting. It's not perfect, but I'll keep reading, so keep writing author!!! Don't let others discourage you from sharing your story with others. Even if some say it's trash, others will still like it. They just have different tastes.
Author just gives MC random **** appease his fantasies, there is no character building, no world building, just a perverted author who keeps saying “Nyaa” as of he is a fucking cat. Don’t read this, you will regret wasting your time.
Too much filler bullish itsssss Stupid System. Too much filler bullish itsssss Stupid System. Too much filler bullish itsssss Stupid System. Too much filler bullish itsssss Stupid System. Too much filler bullish itsssss Stupid System.
Read and Enjoy! Read and Enjoy! Read and Enjoy! Read and Enjoy! Read and Enjoy! Read and Enjoy! Read and Enjoy! Read and Enjoy! Read and Enjoy! Read and Enjoy! Read and Enjoy! Read and Enjoy! Read and Enjoy! Read and Enjoy! Read and Enjoy! Read and Enjoy! Read and Enjoy! Read and Enjoy! Read and Enjoy! Read and Enjoy!
Just let your imagination run wild and more chapters......................................::...../////....;&:&-&$1!:&:'nsakknsnnqkqknqjdjsjkqkqk
Please dont drop, i like this novel... ............................................................. ............................................................. .............................................................
Keep going👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍😀😀😀😀😀😀😀😀😀😀😀😀😀😀😀😀😀😀😀😀😀😀😀😀😀😀😀😀😀😀😀😀😀😀😀😀😀😀😀😀
Overpowered system? More like over-useless. Obviously, the author is just trying hard to fit force explanation to reduce plot holes. Unplanned writing, just a copy paste with few minor Weird changes. I already wasted my time on the first one which was dropped in a days time, I'm not gonna waste my time reading this crap. Ciao.
More more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more More more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more More more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more More more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more
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Nice story but if can maybe you can make 18+ to maybe because you enchant the face mc to be too nice so will harem and 18+ chapter to plissss and if can maybe make 2or 3 original girl for mc maybe you can make waifu with face of other anime for preference
Excited to see how this goes I hope you add in the floors that aren't in the anime that he just skips because that'd be interesting --- a zz a zz z z z z z z z z zz z z zz z z z z
Mira_chan you're already doing a great job. Although I was a little sad that you stopped your first novel and made me waste my powerstones I am more yhan happy that you're back. Keep this up!👍👍
Pls update soon!! Cant wait to read next chapter... .................................................................................................
i'm about to read this novel i was reading the other one kkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeppppppppppppppppppppppppppppppppppppp iiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiitttttttttttttttttttttttttttttttttttttttttttttt uuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuppppppppppppppppppp
Actually, this novel is good enough to read. But why did you even write that "I can't take insults" in your synopsis, you know that there'll be someone out there who want to make you drop your novel right?
Nya nya nya nya nya nya nya nya nya N y a N y a N y a N y a N y a N y a N y a Nya nya nya nya nya nya nya nya nya N y a N y a N y a N y a N y a N y a N y Since you like Nya so much Nya nya nya nya nya
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