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NOTE: IF YOU'RE LOOKING FOR A PERFECT NOVEL WHICH HAS NO PLOTHOLES AND OTHER THINGS YOU WOULD EXPECT FROM A TRANSLATED NOVEL. THEN THIS IS NOT FOR YOU. YOU'VE BEEN WARNED SO DON'T YOU DARE TO COMPLAIN TO ME AT THE COMMENTS ABOUT THIS NOVEL BEING SHITTY AND ALL. CAUSE I'M NOT PERFECT AND WE WILL ALL MAKE MISTAKES.
I died full of regrets. I knew that I did a lot of mistakes in my life and how I wish I could’ve changed it all. All I could think of during my last breath was that.
--If I was given a second chance, I will live my life to the fullest without any regrets.
But I already died, or so I thought I had.
Because at the moment that I closed my eyes accepting my death, I woke up with five abilities in my head.
Although I was confused at first, I then understood what was happening and was able to accept it easily. To which I’m confused but I just attributed to myself changing as I already decided to accept whatever comes in my way with open arms.
And now that I was given a second chance in life I live a life that I always wanted. With these five abilities given to me by someone I don't know and I don't care, I will travel in the Multiverse enjoying my life.
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Note: This will be my Second Novel. My first novel was dropped because of the insults I received nyaa~ But I am back again and I will continue to write no matter what.
English is not my first language nyaa~ And I am not a good writer so there will be plotholes so if you find one nyaa~ Then please politely point it out at me so that I can fix it nyaa~
Please avoid insults nyaa~ My heart's very fragile.
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{World's Travelled}
[1] Sword Art Online: Aincrad
[?] Suggest
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I will be using this novel to improve my writing skills and hopefully make my own original novel nyaa~
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Author just gives MC random **** appease his fantasies, there is no character building, no world building, just a perverted author who keeps saying “Nyaa” as of he is a fucking cat. Don’t read this, you will regret wasting your time.
HAHAHA, what now you bunch of lolicon morons. You got scammed by a fat old guy on your Power Stones. Additional 5 chap. When if reach top100? But now it was DROPPED. HAHAHA, what now you bunch of lolicon morons. You got scammed by a fat old guy on your Power Stones. Additional 5 chap. When if reach top100? But now it was DROPPED. HAHAHA, what now you bunch of lolicon morons. You got scammed by a fat old guy on your Power Stones. Additional 5 chap. When if reach top100? But now it was DROPPED. HAHAHA, what now you bunch of lolicon morons. You got scammed by a fat old guy on your Power Stones. Additional 5 chap. When if reach top100? But now it was DROPPED.
Overpowered system? More like over-useless. Obviously, the author is just trying hard to fit force explanation to reduce plot holes. Unplanned writing, just a copy paste with few minor Weird changes. I already wasted my time on the first one which was dropped in a days time, I'm not gonna waste my time reading this crap. Ciao.
Too much filler bullish itsssss Stupid System. Too much filler bullish itsssss Stupid System. Too much filler bullish itsssss Stupid System. Too much filler bullish itsssss Stupid System. Too much filler bullish itsssss Stupid System.
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This author I cant tell if he is really a kid who acts a pervert or an adult who acts like a pervert. Either, he gives off a very perverted feeling. Why? Pretty obvious. What is up with the nya nya thing? Is he trying to act cute? This isnt cute, its utterly pervertic and I can imagine an adult behind the computer smiling pervertedly while typing this story with his catchphrase nya. Storywise, boring+generic. Nth special. Wonder why its ranked so highly. Readers these days are supporting worse n worse quality novels
Fk this author Wtf acting like some stupid kid Ch 11 author thoughts "There is a thunderstorm here and I am scared nya" Like who the fk cares. U think on this earth ur place is the only one with thunderstorms? No one needs to fking know whether u r scared of a thunderstorm. Who even writes such useless stuff in the authors thoughts. 1 word, a pedophile. Act ur age. I m pretty sure u r a grown man trying to act like a disgusting pedophile. Nya nya nya nya nya? Who the fk even keeps saying that. Pretty sure the ppl who vote and read this story are kids who enjoy the 'cute part' of the author, aka nya nya nya. Wtf is with the nya nya nya nya. Also the story is **** and full of plotholes. Wtf the MC is alr like fking op in the beginning whats the point. Every single chapter there is at least 10 nya nya nya. Even if you were a kid, a normal child would not even think of saying that disgusting phrase. Bs author Bs story
I’m going to imitate the authors. See the summary says don’t bully me and if the story is bad because I’m to lazy to actually think and right a good story with coherent plot you can leave and I will except no constructive criticism nya nya. This story is bad in way to many ways. First the main character of the original series is overpowered and does not need any more power. Another thing is the chapters are just copy and paste of the chapter before from a point of view that is almost exactly the same. The only difference is it glorifies the main character as a god who gets everything. Of course it’s not far off considering that the author made him a god. I’m mean infinity stats is kinda retarded even for web-novel. This story is bad in to many ways to be good at all and I know that the people who read this story are probably below the age of 10 and think that sao is the best thing ever or a pedo. Also nya nya gets really annoying really fast Nya nya Nya nya nya nya nya nya nya nya
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Mira_chan you're already doing a great job. Although I was a little sad that you stopped your first novel and made me waste my powerstones I am more yhan happy that you're back. Keep this up!👍👍
Actually, this novel is good enough to read. But why did you even write that "I can't take insults" in your synopsis, you know that there'll be someone out there who want to make you drop your novel right?
Looks pretty interesting. It's not perfect, but I'll keep reading, so keep writing author!!! Don't let others discourage you from sharing your story with others. Even if some say it's trash, others will still like it. They just have different tastes.
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In my own opinion the story so far is fine and well. I don’t see anything that leaves any big or major plot holes and to those who say using ‘plot’ to direct the story with the system then what about all the other novels in website that does it. The grammar is actually quite good and so far had little mistake. The story itself is starting off original with Kirito trying to improve his relationship with Suguha and later in actually helping Klein and his friends. Not many fanfic does that and instead just skip all that over to the immediate 2 year timeskip to meet Asuna. While I do agree that the personality could use a bit of a work with the help of dialogue but the fact that there is personality at all is a good starting point. Many novels or fanfic I’ve read just put in character A in one situation then oh wow character A gets out of it and the rest of time is spent basically monologging the whole stuff without putting in any effort to show the characteristics of a character. People complain about the lack of world building and all but while it would be nice to get one. It is not necessary to actual story as this is a fanfic based on media in which you should already know or informed of. You would not be here if you haven’t watched the show or even the first episode of SAO and you wouldn’t need much world building to actually understand the mechanics of the this world. Point is if you’re here then that means you’ve already watched the show and don’t need to know how the world works and if you haven’t watched the show then what are you even doing here. Okay now that’s done here’s what I find stupid. The author bashing. Like wtf. People saying stupid **** about the author here and there and judging the author from the way he/she write the author notes and he/she behavior in dialogue. Look everyone has their own different opinion on stuff and if you don’t like the fanfic so far then stop reading this and go read something else instead of *****ing around here. People keep on insulting the author and all and how the author is perverted or secretly a fat guy and all but that’s just stupid. Why does that matter much and I can’t see how the author is supposedly prevented by reading the story so far. If you think this is perverted then buddy you don’t know how far the rabbit hole goes. Now for people who’s judging how the author act with the ‘nyaa’ and all that. Why does it matter much and if you’re that disturb by it then just go read something else. Who are you to judge someone on how they act or what kind of persona they put on the internet. Like you yourself haven’t that before either in the web or irl. Sorry for the rant and all but I’m sick of all the author bashing and people thinking their entitled and all to demand things like they own it. I personally think the story is fine so far and while it could be improved on. There isn’t much of anything bad about the novel so far and I hope that it continues updating or moved to website such as Wattpad as the community there isn’t as terrible as it is here. Really should btw.
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This is one of those novels where you have to enjoy it and ignore those plotholes😉, just why are some so serious when reading novels and if they don’t like they review crap about it, just come on if you don’t like it then avoid it.
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Volumen 1 : Sword Art Online: Aincrad
- 1 In Another World~ 5 years ago
- 2 Preparation~ 5 years ago
- 3 One Month~ 5 years ago
- 4 Kirigaya Suguha~ 5 years ago
- 5 Link Start~ 5 years ago
- 6 His World~ 5 years ago
- 7 Grinding Levels [1] ~ 5 years ago
- 8 Grinding Levels [2] ~ 5 years ago
- 9 At the Town~ 5 years ago
- 10 I'll do everything you want!!~ 5 years ago
- 11 Two Years~ 5 years ago
- 12 Author's Back~ 5 years ago
- 13 WritingForFun 5 years ago
- 14 The name!! 5 years ago
Sorry, i really try hard to like this story, but it is just too bland. Also, i find the author a Pervert acting like a 12 years old kid when he's obviously a new account of anime_novel the author of " I'm Kirito". Going all Nyaa~ nyaa~ like a weirdo which is effective on attracting and appeasing most random online losers. Good job. DROPPED.