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Really good story bro.....just make sure you keep the updates stable. Regular updates is the key for making a novel popular.....that and a good storyline, but I'm sure you know what your doing!! 😁😁😁😁 Good luck
It's interesting to see a character use his bad luck as a weapon, you update very quick which make us want more, there's potential in this as MC he isn't a scaredy cat but is ready to dirty his hands. Keep working hard on it! I cant to see more of it.
This is one of the best novels on this website. I have been waiting for this reboot for years. I am happy to read this for free before it goes premium. The plot is really good, both of the main characters are good. I can't wait for the next chapters. It is a great novel, you should definitely try it.
The story is good so far and the characters seem to be interesting. There also seems to be a few interesting concepts in this story, and I believe you can make the novel pretty great in the future. Also, try and re-read after each chapter you right just in case you have some grammar mistakes so that you can fix them instead of leaving them there. The story has potential, so keep it up. (Grimoire)
The story is actually pretty cool as soon as i started reading I was wandering where this was going to lead quite the interesting way as well when they dissapeared i was thinking that they would die some way or another and meet god or somethimg. Just pointing out that some words have a wrong letter in spelling but that was very minor anyway hope you keep writing this story is good just asking what is going on with the main characters luck is their bad and good luck turned neutral like evryone elses or is when thay are together thay have normal luck. Also hope you keep writing the other novel to liked that one to. The characters need more description on how they look readers will want to know more about what they look like.
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They all wanna know what's next, I don't even know myself Nah, I don't wanna hear your bull****, I don't really need your help I'm posted and smoking just like my uncles before me I politic with the stagnant, forget my day by the morning, it go
Too lazy to write a review........................good story and good writing..........................I'll fill in the rest with emojis 😄😁😄😁😄😁😄😁😄😁😄😁😄😁😄😁😄😄😁😄😁😄😁😄😄😁😄😶😶😁😶😄😁😄😶😄😁😄😶😄😁😄
Damn you webnovel and your 140 character rule.....just gonna waste words to finish. Your novel is good, just keep doing what your doing and you'll be fine 😄😄😄😄😄
Really good story bro.....just make sure you keep the updates stable. Regular updates is the key for making a novel popular.....that and a good storyline, but I'm sure you know what your doing!! 😁😁😁😁 Good luck
It's interesting to see a character use his bad luck as a weapon, you update very quick which make us want more, there's potential in this as MC he isn't a scaredy cat but is ready to dirty his hands. Keep working hard on it! I cant to see more of it.
This is one of the best novels on this website. I have been waiting for this reboot for years. I am happy to read this for free before it goes premium. The plot is really good, both of the main characters are good. I can't wait for the next chapters. It is a great novel, you should definitely try it.
The story is good so far and the characters seem to be interesting. There also seems to be a few interesting concepts in this story, and I believe you can make the novel pretty great in the future. Also, try and re-read after each chapter you right just in case you have some grammar mistakes so that you can fix them instead of leaving them there. The story has potential, so keep it up. (Grimoire)
The story is actually pretty cool as soon as i started reading I was wandering where this was going to lead quite the interesting way as well when they dissapeared i was thinking that they would die some way or another and meet god or somethimg. Just pointing out that some words have a wrong letter in spelling but that was very minor anyway hope you keep writing this story is good just asking what is going on with the main characters luck is their bad and good luck turned neutral like evryone elses or is when thay are together thay have normal luck. Also hope you keep writing the other novel to liked that one to. The characters need more description on how they look readers will want to know more about what they look like.
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