Good story .. nice plot ... characters are sweet .. but you have to improve your grammar skills ... some places writing was a bit sketchy ..
Hope in next story you can do better ..
Please update more chapter and complete the story.
I like this story.
Love you sis a lot
Good story .. nice plot ... characters are sweet .. but you have to improve your grammar skills ... some places writing was a bit sketchy ..
Hope in next story you can do better ..
Please update more chapter and complete the story.
I like this story.
Love you sis a lot
Good story .. nice plot ... characters are sweet .. but you have to improve your grammar skills ... some places writing was a bit sketchy .. Hope in next story you can do better .. Please update more chapter and complete the story. I like this story. Love you sis a lot