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Narmi Amsi, a 15 years old teenage boy, got transferred into another world, becoming a world traveller in process. Fate did not abandon him as he got ahold of a power that could help him in his journey.

King System, a generous system that would help its host become a King of the World. With this power bestowed onto him and memory of future events, he embark on a journey of fulfilling what the system want him to be.

Follow him on his journey, meeting new members, finding love and fighting the world wherever he went. Watch him as he become the most fearless existence, and finally become the King of the World.

"They say the Family of D. is the sworn enemy of the Gods. They didn't say about another existence that could rival the Gods. Me!" - Narmi

Disclaimer: One Piece is not mine. I'm just writing a fanfiction only for fun purposes.

Author's notes: I change the synopsis, as I planned to send our MC to another world after he is done in One Piece World. This synopsis is temporary as it will change again when the story nearing its end.

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Bierbart

Review at chapter 14 currently :D First of to the writing quality. You could say the chapters are nice cause they are rather "long" if u compare it to many other fanfics. But the english is pretty bad grammarwise. English quality is around second year gymnasium(school) with a C i would say roughly. For the updates part there is currently nothing to complain about. Regular updates and more than 1 chapter a day usually. The Story developement is rather new thats why 4 stars for it. He doesnt follow the mainplotline and makes his own. The character design is rather bleak in my opinion. First thing is personal but i dont like the mcs name and the name of the crew. Name feels like an mtl from an hyroglyph which the mtl doesnt really now :D :/. Furthermore it confuses with the story slighty or better said u have to read twice sometimes cause name is in his crew too. Crewname etc really sounds slightly chuunibyou :/ same with some dialoges. For the last part of the World background there isnt much to say currently. Seems like the normal OP background but it is currently too early to say much about it. But i guess people who are unfamiliar with OP-verse would have to read some things up to understand some story parts. If the author reads this heads up :P Guess u just need a bit more practice for ur english if u are interested in developing urself. For the story part etc its mostly about the preferences from the readers but well my honest opinion is stated here and i even wrote a long reply for it on a broken keyboard :'D

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bleu_raijin

.....good fanfic don't stop updated.... ........good fanfic don't stop updated............good fanfic don't stop updated............good fanfic don't stop updated............good fanfic don't stop updated............good fanfic don't stop updated.......

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Xiaogin
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If you are serious, I will support, but what's the thrill if there is one piece in the world that only focuses on the harem? One Piece is an adventurous world!

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DanishTuragan

Hye. Wow I'm first to review. It's story is starting to develop so I don't know about coming chapter. I hope the author will make some good chapter. I'm looking forward to it. Although the character name sound weird, I think everything is okey from my viewpoint because I like OP character. Brcause they can kick some ass. Hope this character will always kick some ass

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UnfazedOne

Ok so this story looks good so far. The updates are consistent, the grammar actually doesn’t suck(sure there’s mistakes sometimes) especially if you consider the fact 2 chapters are up per day. Overall the mc has a brain and can think, so far it’s good. Keep up the good fanfic author!

5yr
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AWholeLottaMist

This is too early to make a proper review of the story, but it has potential, and I definitely look forward to more updates! I hope the story will include some romance, you don't see it that often in One Piece fan-fics.

5yr
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Roarrrrr

It's totally garbage... Its like author have no clue about one piece world......... Do yourself a favour get out fast as you can............

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zen_garden

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Reykun
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Everythings are good ...i like it a lot and its enjoyable to read.. so good job ... and thank you for the story..keep up the good work...PIECE...

5yr
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ChunChunMaru

Nice One Piece Fan-fic ................................................. ......................................................... ...................................................................

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Wock
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Bruh I was hyped to read this fanfiction but it is dropped that is not the problem it the fanfiction from over 70 chapters just to just one atleast let people enjoy reading the over 70 chapters than giving them false hope.

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repeater

not bad good fanfic maybe 10 chapters a week if its alright but its a good story as far I comprehend.

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Piotr_Uklejewski

******************************** Good work! ****************************************** ***************************** And i need more! ***************************************

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Arthur124

Nice novel .......more chapter.........😂😂😂😂😂😂😂😂😁😁😁😁...................,..........................................................

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Chapter 1: Announcement 2 3 years ago

Volumen 0 : Auxiliary Volume

  1. Chapter 1: Another World 5 years ago
  2. Chapter 2: Pirates Information Gathering 5 years ago
  3. Information Chapter 5 years ago
  4. Chapter 3: Pirate Hunt 5 years ago
  5. Chapter 4: Preparing for Travel 1 5 years ago
  6. Chapter 5: Preparation for Travel 2 5 years ago
  7. Chapter 6: The Journey Start 1 5 years ago
  8. Chapter 7: The Journey Start 2 5 years ago
  9. Chapter 8: Getting a Navigator 1 5 years ago
  10. Chapter 9: Getting A Navigator 2 5 years ago
  11. Chapter 10: Finding a Cook 1 5 years ago
  12. Chapter 11: Finding a Cook 2 5 years ago
  13. Chapter 12: Lucky Find, Nico Robin 1 5 years ago
  14. Chapter 13: Lucky Find, Nico Robin 2 5 years ago
  15. Chapter 14: Fighting Smoker 1 5 years ago
  16. Chapter 15: Fighting Smoker 2 5 years ago
  17. Chapter 16: First Bounty 5 years ago
  18. Chapter 17: Strengthening the Crew 1 5 years ago
  19. Chapter 18: Strengthening the Crew 2 5 years ago
  20. Chapter 19: Recruiting Trafalgar Law 1 5 years ago
  21. Chapter 20: Recruting Trafalgar Law 2 5 years ago
  22. Chapter 21: Date with Nico Robin 1 5 years ago
  23. Chapter 22: Date with Nico Robin 2 5 years ago
  24. Chapter 23: Narmi's Wrath 5 years ago
  25. Chapter 24: Bounty Raised! Nickname: Devil King 5 years ago
  26. Chapter 25: Devil's Fruit Fusion 5 years ago
  27. Chapter 26: New Devil Fruit: Shizen Shizen No Mi/ Nature Nature Fruit 5 years ago
  28. Chapter 27: Arrived, Little Garden 1 5 years ago
  29. Chapter 28: Arrived, Little Garden 2 5 years ago
  30. Chapter 29: 2 Years Of Training 1 5 years ago
  31. Chapter 30: 2 Years of Training 2 5 years ago
  32. Chapter 31: To Alabasta, We Sail 1 5 years ago
  33. Chapter 32: To Alabasta, We Sail 2 5 years ago
  34. Chapter 33: Two King's Negotiation 1 5 years ago
  35. Chapter 34: Two Kings Negotiation 2 5 years ago
  36. Chapter 35: Heading to Rainbase 1 5 years ago
  37. Chapter 36: Heading to Rainbase 2 5 years ago
  38. Chapter 37: Playing With Crocodile 1 5 years ago
  39. Chapter 38: Playing With Crocodile 2 5 years ago
  40. Chapter 39: The Alabasta Poneglyph 1 5 years ago
  41. Chapter 40: The Alabasta Poneglyph 2 5 years ago
  42. Chapter 41: Training Nefertari Vivi 1 5 years ago
  43. Chapter 42: Training Nefertari Vivi 2 5 years ago
  44. Chapter 43: Training Nefertari Vivi 3 5 years ago
  45. Chapter 44: Training Nefertari Vivi 4 5 years ago
  46. Chapter 45: Continuing The Journey 1 5 years ago
  47. Chapter 46: Fighting the Marines 1 5 years ago
  48. Chapter 47: Fighting the Marines 2 5 years ago
  49. Chapter 48: Conquering Marines Base 1 5 years ago
  50. Chapter 49: Fighting Akainu 5 years ago
  51. Chapter 50: Fifth Emperor of the Sea 5 years ago
  52. Chapter 51: Marines' Plan 5 years ago
  53. Chapter 52: Negotiating with Marines 5 years ago
  54. Chapter 53: Sabaody Archipelago 5 years ago
  55. Chapter 54: Celestial Bastards Mistakes 5 years ago
  56. Chapter 55: Celestial Bastards Slaved 5 years ago
  57. Chapter 56: Torturing Celestial Bastards 5 years ago
  58. Chapter 57: Fun with Rayleigh, New Members Recruited 5 years ago
  59. Chapter 58: CP-9 Arrived 5 years ago
  60. Chapter 59: Robin vs CP-9 5 years ago
  61. Chapter 60: The Crew's Discussion 5 years ago
  62. Chapter 61: The Four People Got Framed 5 years ago
  63. Chapter 62: Ex-CP9 Recruited 5 years ago
  64. Chapter 63: Meeting the Pirate Empress 5 years ago
  65. Chapter 64: Before Continuing the Journey 5 years ago
  66. Chapter 65: Resuming their Journey 5 years ago
  67. Chapter 66: Arrived Fishman Island, Going to Mermaid Cafe 5 years ago
  68. Chapter 67: Spending Time in Mermaid Cafe 5 years ago
  69. Chapter 68: You Should Never Disturb A King's Relaxation Time 5 years ago
  70. Chapter 69: Complete Defeat 4 years ago
  71. Chapter 70: Meeting with Fishman King 4 years ago
  72. Announcements 4 years ago

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