The wife of the underworld Lord is a ceo

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Overlord_Venus

I have only read the first five chapters, but I could somehow guess the story level. Let me begin with the cons: 1) First of all, the grammar was bad, bad enough to break my immersion ( I am a grammar Nazi, so maybe the general readers of WN wouldn't be as much bothered as me) 2) Another thing that disoriented me was that I couldn't feel any emotions when I read the emotions exhibited by the FL since it was too abrupt and short lived. There was neither any previous context to infer from nor were the FL's past explained. So all I can know when I'm reading is that 'the FL is crying because she experienced something horrible 5 years ago'. 3) There were other aspects of the story that felt like the author hasn't done much research into the subject ( this is my own belief, take it with a pinch of salt and sugar ) Anyway, there were also some things I enjoyed in this story: 1) the Female lead: she's portrayed as a strong character and not as a flower.vase like in other romance novels 2) the plot is kept simple for the readers who just want a light read 3) readers don't need too much imagination power as the backgrounds described in each situations are really simple environments with simple short description about them. Conclusion: Readers expecting some light hearted romance without having to invest their complete minds can have a shot at this book

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MasterMonsoon

Not a very well written story. I had a really hard time reading the chapters because it was choppy. Also, the development of the story felt forced. There was no build-up or depth.

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Atria25

This seems interesting I really hope for a strong female lead. And I like the concept. Can't wait to enjoy this new novel 👍👍👍👍💪💪👍👍👍👍👍

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Dundet

First, it is hard to read as obviously the editing is super bad. No proove read it seemed. Sevond, too much inconsistency of the charcter. Third this is the meeting of the dumb and dumbet that both applied to the FL n ML.

LV 14

sweetpea1972

Just started this book and it's attention grabbing. Great work author so far. Will comment more when I get more into the book. 😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁

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Marena

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Nightdarkness

I love these novel very much in these novel not only romance but as well as mysterious that's why I really like these story very much also I'm desperately wait for next chapter in these novel both Male and female characters is awesome i love them 😍😍😍

LV 4

WWFire

Author seriously need an editor/proofreader. While the story pacing is great, there are many syntax and grammar errors: punctuation, singular/plural, tenses, use of vocabulary, and other proper writing skills are still lacking. One more thing, there are spacing errors, literally every sentence (you will notice it once you read). Please do fix that problem, it is a minor factor, but important for aesthetics. If you want to introduce a character (other than MC), it is advised to do so through other character interactions or through proper story flow. When you introduced the ML in chapter one, you made me feel that the MC already knew him from the start. It was not until chapter three did I realized that they were strangers (from the sentence: "So, he is Michael, the underworld lord.") How can you explain it on chapter one then, you asked? I would say that Sara bumped into a man instead, while taking the opportunity to describe his features. "the man" as subject to replace blatant "Michael, the king of underworld" would suffice for chapter one. Another thing to point out is when you switched POVs, run-through dialogues are unacceptable. A good example to this is in chapter three and seven, please do make a new line when characters are exchanging dialogues, don't put everything in the same paragraph.

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LisaAnaque

More update please author..........................❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤💚💚💚💚💚💚💚💚💚💚💚💚💚💚💚💚💚💚💚💚💚💚💚💚💚💚💚💚💚💚💚💚💚💚💚💚💚💚💚💚💚💚💚💚💚💚💚💚💚💚💚💚💚💚💚💚💚💚💚💚💚💚💚💚💚

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TheNanBread

Hello author if you could reply to me that would be great. I finished the book but i am still confuse. Why was Michael with other woman? Why was Michael mad at Sara? Who is miss Suzan? Please answer me💕💕

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VoidDreamer

Alright... Talking about the writing quality, the first chapter is quite likable, in fact I continued reading only for the first chapter but as I kept reading I felt more and more disappointed. Author, if you are reading this please find an editor asap, cuz the bad reviews will keep increasing. The story developmente can be considered good, but the book is poorly written: it's as if you are reading a shopping list. The author should describe more the emotions of the protagonists. The dialogues are really stiff and unnatural and 'ok' is repeated too often. The character design is horrible. For example when the ML is punishing he is cold and ruthless and a senior says that he is cold only when he is killing someone or something like that. The ML falls in love with the FL at first glance and it's not explained why. The FL doesn't have a backbone, first she says she hates the ML cuz he kissed her while she was drunk later, when he proposed to her she hesitates, I mean 'what the heck! You just refused him!!!'. The world background doesn't exist, I mean it's never explained the place where she is, the author only mentions the fact that she is in her study or in a restaurant and nothing more. Author, if you are reading this: please revise the entire book and read it yourself comparing it with other book. I respect the fact that you, unlike me, had the guts to write this book, hope I was of some help to you. I don't want to insult you in anyway cuz, as I said, I respect you.

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Apoorva_Singh_2943

Just love the way and ur book ❤️ characters and there story tyming everything awsome .......coz love is their but understanding problem I just love reading ur books specially this one 😍 .....pls bring such more books for us .

LV 6

Slntbomb

I like reading this novel and I cannot wait to read the next chapters. The characters are truly endearing. They might be strong but they have their own weaknesses as well. They complete each other.

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Slntbomb

I love reading this novel especially our male lead and female lead. They’re truly amazing. Although the updating is quite stable but if you can release more chapters at least once a week I will truly appreciate it.

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Monaliza_Laguisma

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EdwrdxD

This is a nice book have a lot I am just posting for xp so don't mind this review Hdhsishsidjeuehjeheueheieiejehe

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dinah_lyly

Nice.

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Atria25

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