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so much logic, so much magic, interesting family dynamic; neither good or bad and definitely not consistent ergo fairly realistic.
this story is has an amazing take on time travel. i love the world building, i love how the author expands our vision and our awareness of the mc's world, gradually. And i love how hardworking and determined the mc actually is. He keeps progressing, and advancing in power and knowledge. he is never static. The whole story is just very engaging to my senses. And there are no distractions detracting form its richness in the form of pointless love connections. I like that family is important to the mc as well. I really love this book.
I loved how the characters really seemed like people, you could see zorian maturing throughout the story in a believable way. The world and magic system is very complex but easy to understand. Overall one of the best novels I've ever read
Best Story for myself 9/10 . Have Read most of it. The end disappointed me, but I Won't tell why. It has made My mind clear, thanks for wonderfull time while reading.
It's the second best book I've read. The first being The Lord of Mysteries. I don't really have much to say about this book other than it's amazing. read it.
Best book I've ever read except some old classics. Zorian is a really great character and you will love him at the end, the book last ≈105 chapters but this is really long chapters.
A highly recommended novel. It kinda reminds me of The Lord of The Mysteries so I really love it. I love the mc so much. I thought I will never find a novel as good as TLOTM!
Love this so much .I'm sad the whole chapters are not posted in this app. But well I can always search for it. Thank you 💕💕💕💕💕💕💕💗💗💗💗💗💗💗
Five stars. Everything is five stars. Now, the book doesn’t get updated anymore, but that’s because of 2 things: the rest is on Royal Road and also because the book is finished. I haven’t even finished it but it’s in my top 3 so far! I particularly love the magic system; it’s very fleshed out.
It says a lot about this site that my vampire system is no. 1 on this site and this isn't even recognized (no offense to MVS). This is the best we novel I've ever seen apart from the kissing booth which doesn't count because web novels don't go on to become international bestsellers and get made into award winning blockbuster movies. The full novel is on royal road. Basically any book in royal road's top ten reads like a published work so go check it out. Except if you love power fantasies with harem. Characters are top notch, story is perfect and the word is well developed with good writing style. I'm not usually a fan of time loop stories but this is a gem.
The story is finished and can be found elsewhere, there is also the audibook of Arc 1 out ( up to chapter Soulkill ). I'd say it's one of the better Time-loop stories out there.
Bro let me tell you this zorian dude personality is so unbearable he always grumbling about everything literally everything i didn't even pass the first chapter but i think he will get a tremendous development looking at the reviews and the stars
Its the best book i ever read and its getting better and better with the chapters. I cant stop reading 😊. Everyone who likes fantasy and time loops will love this book.
Novel has 108 chapters on Royal Road. 28 chapters is a scam of webnovel. I hate that first thing that pops up when I search it is webnovel. Also. 10/10 novel. Wanna see more.
This novel is the Best time-loop story I know of. Character depth and different dialogues feel natural. Even goals for all Characters are structured logical, which is normally not really perceived.
Chapter release was slow for me but it is what you expect from a quality work :) I highly recommend people to read this novel, it is one if not the best web novels out there. Also, as some said it's already completed. So, now is the best time to read it, just google it and you will see where you can read it for free, the author posted it in different site originally.
Gold literally this is one of the best stories i have ever read, it has already reached the end(even though it could have gone for a while more) this is just the first arc but believe me this story is worth the ride
Repeat untill you learn, with this assumption we travel to this worderfull world of magic fireball, magic missile, teleport, desintegration, and all kind of magic. Got my attention all the familiar problems of the MC, its actually very reallistic.
i never wrote a review before, but I sincerely hope that this book is going to do continue. it is a story about an always repeating month and how our protagonist is getting stronger and smarter, and also how he is improving as a human oveall.
Hey there! Good day for writing! If you wanted to see whether you can get paid by distributing the current work or getting financial support by writing new work, you might want to contact geekyteddyyo@gmail.com. A brief introduction, some sample chapters or links will be appreciated when reaching out.
Top tier example of rational fiction. So far, this is the best novel I've read up to date. The world building is the best part of the novel. Highly recommended!
Finally done. 😁 A hundred and seven chapters of interesting read. I hope the rest of the chapters could be posted here too. 🤷 Anyway, the irritable Zorian kinda grew on me but my favorite characters are Xvim, Alanic and yeah Quatach-Ichl (did I write that correctly?) 🤣 Yes, I like that lich the most out of all of them. As for Zach, I dunno. Maybe because how the story was written but I think he's just there and he didn't leave a deeper impression on me. Or deeper than Daimen or Silverlake deeper. But overall, I've really enjoyed the time spent poring over this novel. 👍
Revelar spoiler
It's an amazing story that's had stable releases for the past 8 years and is nearing its finish soon, the entire story is free to read by the author, only the first Arc is posted here so if you like the story you can read the rest elsewhere.
Its so sad that they don’t have the whole story here. This isn’t even close to half of it and it develops as crazy. I at least love it and think it’s some of the very best I’ve read. Go read it on royal road
The author does a great job with developing the characters as well as the overall plot of the story. He makes the story discriptive while not putting an excessive amount of time into every detail. While the world building is a little lacking and has a few holes, the overall writing and story are superb.
It was a fun and interesting story overall, I liked some of the elements more than others but I thought the magic system in particular was pretty well done. Some general thoughts on education mixed in there are also interesting; for this reason, I would recommend this to people who like "Magic School" settings. The only thing that left me wanting a bit more was that I wish I got a bit more from some of the characters including the MC, which I felt was a bit too cold at times. Overall, it was a good read.
so much logic, so much magic, interesting family dynamic; neither good or bad and definitely not consistent ergo fairly realistic.
this story is has an amazing take on time travel. i love the world building, i love how the author expands our vision and our awareness of the mc's world, gradually. And i love how hardworking and determined the mc actually is. He keeps progressing, and advancing in power and knowledge. he is never static. The whole story is just very engaging to my senses. And there are no distractions detracting form its richness in the form of pointless love connections. I like that family is important to the mc as well. I really love this book.
I loved how the characters really seemed like people, you could see zorian maturing throughout the story in a believable way. The world and magic system is very complex but easy to understand. Overall one of the best novels I've ever read
Best Story for myself 9/10 . Have Read most of it. The end disappointed me, but I Won't tell why. It has made My mind clear, thanks for wonderfull time while reading.
It's the second best book I've read. The first being The Lord of Mysteries. I don't really have much to say about this book other than it's amazing. read it.
Best book I've ever read except some old classics. Zorian is a really great character and you will love him at the end, the book last ≈105 chapters but this is really long chapters.
A highly recommended novel. It kinda reminds me of The Lord of The Mysteries so I really love it. I love the mc so much. I thought I will never find a novel as good as TLOTM!
Love this so much .I'm sad the whole chapters are not posted in this app. But well I can always search for it. Thank you 💕💕💕💕💕💕💕💗💗💗💗💗💗💗
Five stars. Everything is five stars. Now, the book doesn’t get updated anymore, but that’s because of 2 things: the rest is on Royal Road and also because the book is finished. I haven’t even finished it but it’s in my top 3 so far! I particularly love the magic system; it’s very fleshed out.
It says a lot about this site that my vampire system is no. 1 on this site and this isn't even recognized (no offense to MVS). This is the best we novel I've ever seen apart from the kissing booth which doesn't count because web novels don't go on to become international bestsellers and get made into award winning blockbuster movies. The full novel is on royal road. Basically any book in royal road's top ten reads like a published work so go check it out. Except if you love power fantasies with harem. Characters are top notch, story is perfect and the word is well developed with good writing style. I'm not usually a fan of time loop stories but this is a gem.
The story is finished and can be found elsewhere, there is also the audibook of Arc 1 out ( up to chapter Soulkill ). I'd say it's one of the better Time-loop stories out there.
Bro let me tell you this zorian dude personality is so unbearable he always grumbling about everything literally everything i didn't even pass the first chapter but i think he will get a tremendous development looking at the reviews and the stars
Its the best book i ever read and its getting better and better with the chapters. I cant stop reading 😊. Everyone who likes fantasy and time loops will love this book.
Novel has 108 chapters on Royal Road. 28 chapters is a scam of webnovel. I hate that first thing that pops up when I search it is webnovel. Also. 10/10 novel. Wanna see more.
This novel is the Best time-loop story I know of. Character depth and different dialogues feel natural. Even goals for all Characters are structured logical, which is normally not really perceived.
Chapter release was slow for me but it is what you expect from a quality work :) I highly recommend people to read this novel, it is one if not the best web novels out there. Also, as some said it's already completed. So, now is the best time to read it, just google it and you will see where you can read it for free, the author posted it in different site originally.
Gold literally this is one of the best stories i have ever read, it has already reached the end(even though it could have gone for a while more) this is just the first arc but believe me this story is worth the ride
Repeat untill you learn, with this assumption we travel to this worderfull world of magic fireball, magic missile, teleport, desintegration, and all kind of magic. Got my attention all the familiar problems of the MC, its actually very reallistic.
i never wrote a review before, but I sincerely hope that this book is going to do continue. it is a story about an always repeating month and how our protagonist is getting stronger and smarter, and also how he is improving as a human oveall.
Hey there! Good day for writing! If you wanted to see whether you can get paid by distributing the current work or getting financial support by writing new work, you might want to contact geekyteddyyo@gmail.com. A brief introduction, some sample chapters or links will be appreciated when reaching out.
Top tier example of rational fiction. So far, this is the best novel I've read up to date. The world building is the best part of the novel. Highly recommended!
Finally done. 😁 A hundred and seven chapters of interesting read. I hope the rest of the chapters could be posted here too. 🤷 Anyway, the irritable Zorian kinda grew on me but my favorite characters are Xvim, Alanic and yeah Quatach-Ichl (did I write that correctly?) 🤣 Yes, I like that lich the most out of all of them. As for Zach, I dunno. Maybe because how the story was written but I think he's just there and he didn't leave a deeper impression on me. Or deeper than Daimen or Silverlake deeper. But overall, I've really enjoyed the time spent poring over this novel. 👍
Revelar spoiler It's an amazing story that's had stable releases for the past 8 years and is nearing its finish soon, the entire story is free to read by the author, only the first Arc is posted here so if you like the story you can read the rest elsewhere.
Its so sad that they don’t have the whole story here. This isn’t even close to half of it and it develops as crazy. I at least love it and think it’s some of the very best I’ve read. Go read it on royal road
The author does a great job with developing the characters as well as the overall plot of the story. He makes the story discriptive while not putting an excessive amount of time into every detail. While the world building is a little lacking and has a few holes, the overall writing and story are superb.
It was a fun and interesting story overall, I liked some of the elements more than others but I thought the magic system in particular was pretty well done. Some general thoughts on education mixed in there are also interesting; for this reason, I would recommend this to people who like "Magic School" settings. The only thing that left me wanting a bit more was that I wish I got a bit more from some of the characters including the MC, which I felt was a bit too cold at times. Overall, it was a good read.