The Hourglass

LV 5

MF_THE_BOTH

obviously as the author i will give this a 5 star, the story i made is based on my daily life with a very major deviation and previously i made a novel too because i want to vent my sexual desire, if you want to check it's on royal road "Pokemon integration project" and i am aware that my grammar is bad and i'm not a native English speaker also you probably will know the reason i stopped writing and having motivation to do so on the other one if you read this one . all i can say is please comment and vote for me, it fells lonely when i see comment (0) or there is no review

LV 10

Dreamheart_Dragon

So, this story is so stupid I’m at a complete loss for words. In chapter 7? Maybe 9? He finds a unconscious girl and thinks she’s a sex doll and rapes her. I mean, seriously?!? You have to be the stupidest human on the face of the planet to carry, touch and manhandle and living unconscious person and think they are a doll. They’re are so many indicators that can’t be mistaken for anything else that you have never touched another living being or even yourself in their entire live or be even stupider than someone who is genuinely mentally retarded. It’s probably the stupidest plot idea I’ve ever come across in my entire life. That’s saying something since I’ve tried a lot of horrible Webnovels over the years. I wish I could give zero stars.

LV 11

Squadleaderjoey

The writing contains lots of run on sentences as well as plenty of grammatical errors. The story follows a nonsensical plot that genuinely makes zero sense. MC awakens a power and his first thought is to go beat the piss out of some school bullies who even he admits never bothered him. He then finds a 'sex doll' in an alley. Which he takes home and fucks before realizing it was an unconscious women who he just raped. Following along and understanding? No? Good cause I sure as hell didnt understand either. Would not recommend this to anyone.

LV 10

Andrea_Salvetti

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LV 5

asmosam

An interesting novel and attractive things Great laws linking the couple The character of the hero is not fully understood but it is as good as if the world belongs to him Is Elf in the story?

LV 4

Lilytail

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LV 4

KieraRz

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LV 4

Mastruru

If posible don't ever made the mothly hiastus and it all will be good. 😀😀😀😀😀😀😀😀😀😀😀😀😀😀😀😎😎😀😎😀😎😀😎😎😀😎😀😎😀😎😀😎😀😎😀😎😀😎😀☺️😎😀😀😎😎😀😀😎😄😀😄😀😄😀😄😀😍😀😍😀😄😀😍😀😄😀😄😀😄😀😀😄😀😄😀😄

LV 5

MFL

This is my other account so to up the reveiw i will just copy the priviuous one. obviously as the author i will give this a 5 star, the story i made is based on my daily life with a very major deviation and previously i made a novel too because i want to vent my sexual desire, if you want to check it's on royal road "Pokemon integration project" and i am aware that my grammar is bad and i'm not a native English speaker also you probably will know the reason i stopped writing and having motivation to do so on the other one if you read this one .

LV 4

Maestro01

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LV 4

Thompsoma

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LV 4

Masturn

It seems the author is clearly makinv his dream come true trough this novel with him as the MC and the girls probaly as the repreantative of his crush. Wnzheisnci3 x 389€=(@,'uehcyt9iwixjr9e

LV 4

Mastrubator

This story is like an combination of wuxia novel plus BNHA but with downhraded version. Rjene92ncfhwnehjdj 3rkc*iwfvogeoveiveivoetib3igiui^¥#¥,×¥/¥;@$¥^×=£;£×/¥,×/

LV 4

Marceliy

It's pretty good, at least the new synopsis sounds more mysterious and the new reorganization looks better. ...................^:*$:(2$(:÷$(:2(#:(2÷"(2$:(3=(:2=("

LV 5

MFL

If possible make more benifiting description. Also make a real ending and a little time skip 😆😆😆😆😆😆😆😆😆😆😆😆😆😆😆😆😆😆😆😆😆😆😆😆