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Is the best story i have read in my time of reading books. Is probably a story that i will read again in the future. it’s unique powers that you gave the luficers is the best i seen
I really love this book. And I would love to read it again because of how you took revenge against the Gremory and also how you put a lot of thoughts in this book. I can just see it to how hard you work on this. And I applaud you for this.
I read until the 5th chapter and could't go further I liked the way the author writes but I have a few problems with this ff The author showed some signs of favouritism in the way the MC treats certain characters Alex(MC) With Rias the author some how made her a bitch, yes in the original series she was annoying and complained a lot in the first volumes although she didn't try that hard but she was never a control freak that wanted to decide how her pawn lives I have no complains about Sona , Akeno , Koneko and Kiba tho koneko is attached to MC. My problem is the way Alex treats Issei and Raynare, Issei is getting a hit every time he speaks I know he is annoying but not to that point it's the same issue with Rias the author gives a good reason why he hates Issei saying that it's because of his perverted actions BUT RAYNARE is treated with respect and becomes his servant. Basically Raynare tries to kill the MC and he captures her and hands her to The Satans who contact Azazel who punishes her by becoming MC's slave fair enough right ? The problem is that Alex clearly hates arrogant manipulative people but for some reason he respects Raynare who is the embodiment of what he hates and what caused his horrible childhood she has been seen as overconfident and tends to look down anyone who is inferior to her She had also demonstrated herself to be a coward at the most desperate moments. HE EVEN DEFENDS HER FROM ISSEI WHO HATES HER BECAUSE SHE KILLED HIM THE GIVES A VAGUE REASON SAYIN SHE HAD A TOUGH CHILDHOOD BUT THAT DOSEN'T JUSTIFY HER ACTIONS. Other than that the author overestimates Grayfia's power and made Asia attached to Issei for no reason.
For me i have the right to comment this since I read long chapter This story about about a poor orphan since her mother died in hunting of phoenix family for being run slave and most of all this story quite dark and so many revenge and slight flirt and the heroine rias is most idiot and became so impatient and dont have much judgement. sorry for wrong grammar
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overall one of the best stories I've ever read on hear and my library has 1000 different novels it is just that good you think at beginning it predictable but no it is surprise after another it is just awrdom
Wow... Thats all I can really say. The story was well written, the character development was exemplary, and the writing quality was probably one of the best I have seen on this app! All I can really say is WOW!
I will Honestly say that was one of the best books I’ve read in a while I really hope you will post more like this👌
The name is not true. He is a slave for 50 chapters. And most importantly, his adoptive parents raped him as a child, so read now with this knowledge.
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I absolutely loved this book. I am so glad that the author decided to write this book. All that I can say is that this book deserves a 10/10.
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Readed it around chapter 20 First, the title based on the story is **** nothing to do with being a dragon emperor is only selling false dreams. Second, he is a slave and the truest end of bitches slaps... Third, mixing type moon universe out the blue is not so good idea. Fourth, the story dont make sense at all at the begining he is a naive knowing sh*t about the supernatural world later chapter just tell us about how much he know the supernatural world. 1star is a lot for this novel if I could I would just give 0.1star and only for the begining and somehow decent grammar...
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mc make me irritated, I want to puke each time this retard b*st*rd saying "yare yare daze", wtf?!! jojo chara or what??!?!!! aaaaaaaaaaaaahhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhh really irritating mc you have here!!!!
Individually the chapters have a story but when u read it as a whole you keep changing the facts of the story, the no of plot holes are more than enough to make story within themselves. Although its not a bad fanfic it would be better if you made up your mind and stopped just trying to fill the story randomly.
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thank you Hunter00125 for this wonderful work of yours I shall give this work of your a rating of 5/5, 25/25, or a perfect score - - some of you might think that this score is not believable or maybe just some exaggeration but let me tell you one thing to ensure this story earned its perfect score, so for those that don't believe me.... just try to read and you'll know what i mean
really loving this book not taking the normal route and a lot darker as a whole you deserve a standing ovation *clap* *clap* *clap* *clap* *clap*
I love this novel!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! Author pls release 2 chp pls!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
This novel is super dark, and also really confusing, like how naruto introduces the past but there are some things that don’t add up? For me this is 5* however my only negative is all the rape, mc got raped as a kid? His mum got raped before she gave birth, basically every girl is a target of rape, just a little annoying
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Don't listen to all the people that says the mc is nothing but rias's slave but that just mean they haven't even read it till the recents ones as there is something called character or story development which they are to blind or lazy to see,The story has a great flow to it and the mc is well developed for me that is. P.S Great work author this is the second greatest dxd novel i have read so far coming behind a dragon's wish in my opinion closing in on being the first so keep it up FULL SUPPORT from me i even convinced all my friends and cousins to read this and they loved it. 👍❤️❤️❤️👍
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go read the book real story on fanfic.net . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . .
Is the best story i have read in my time of reading books. Is probably a story that i will read again in the future. it’s unique powers that you gave the luficers is the best i seen
I really love this book. And I would love to read it again because of how you took revenge against the Gremory and also how you put a lot of thoughts in this book. I can just see it to how hard you work on this. And I applaud you for this.
I read until the 5th chapter and could't go further I liked the way the author writes but I have a few problems with this ff The author showed some signs of favouritism in the way the MC treats certain characters Alex(MC) With Rias the author some how made her a bitch, yes in the original series she was annoying and complained a lot in the first volumes although she didn't try that hard but she was never a control freak that wanted to decide how her pawn lives I have no complains about Sona , Akeno , Koneko and Kiba tho koneko is attached to MC. My problem is the way Alex treats Issei and Raynare, Issei is getting a hit every time he speaks I know he is annoying but not to that point it's the same issue with Rias the author gives a good reason why he hates Issei saying that it's because of his perverted actions BUT RAYNARE is treated with respect and becomes his servant. Basically Raynare tries to kill the MC and he captures her and hands her to The Satans who contact Azazel who punishes her by becoming MC's slave fair enough right ? The problem is that Alex clearly hates arrogant manipulative people but for some reason he respects Raynare who is the embodiment of what he hates and what caused his horrible childhood she has been seen as overconfident and tends to look down anyone who is inferior to her She had also demonstrated herself to be a coward at the most desperate moments. HE EVEN DEFENDS HER FROM ISSEI WHO HATES HER BECAUSE SHE KILLED HIM THE GIVES A VAGUE REASON SAYIN SHE HAD A TOUGH CHILDHOOD BUT THAT DOSEN'T JUSTIFY HER ACTIONS. Other than that the author overestimates Grayfia's power and made Asia attached to Issei for no reason.
For me i have the right to comment this since I read long chapter This story about about a poor orphan since her mother died in hunting of phoenix family for being run slave and most of all this story quite dark and so many revenge and slight flirt and the heroine rias is most idiot and became so impatient and dont have much judgement. sorry for wrong grammar
Revelar spoiler overall one of the best stories I've ever read on hear and my library has 1000 different novels it is just that good you think at beginning it predictable but no it is surprise after another it is just awrdom
Wow... Thats all I can really say. The story was well written, the character development was exemplary, and the writing quality was probably one of the best I have seen on this app! All I can really say is WOW!
I will Honestly say that was one of the best books I’ve read in a while I really hope you will post more like this👌
The name is not true. He is a slave for 50 chapters. And most importantly, his adoptive parents raped him as a child, so read now with this knowledge.
Muy bueno()()()()()()()())()()()()()()()()()()()()()()()()()()()()()()()()()()()()()()()()()()()()()()()()()()()()()()()()()()()()()()()()()()()()()()()()()()()()()()()()()()()
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I absolutely loved this book. I am so glad that the author decided to write this book. All that I can say is that this book deserves a 10/10.
This is stolen content. The original is hosted on fanfiction[dot]net. The real author has not authorised this shameless repost. This has been reported to webnovel several times but they don't care and happily host this criminal. Do not support this piece of trash, go read the it where the real author is posting.
Ahem, hey copycat, or more accuratly thief. This is the real author of this story, Ronin2106, the one you took and copied this entire story without any sort of permission. Hope you are happy with this, because I'm reporting on you.
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Readed it around chapter 20 First, the title based on the story is **** nothing to do with being a dragon emperor is only selling false dreams. Second, he is a slave and the truest end of bitches slaps... Third, mixing type moon universe out the blue is not so good idea. Fourth, the story dont make sense at all at the begining he is a naive knowing sh*t about the supernatural world later chapter just tell us about how much he know the supernatural world. 1star is a lot for this novel if I could I would just give 0.1star and only for the begining and somehow decent grammar...
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Revelar spoiler mc make me irritated, I want to puke each time this retard b*st*rd saying "yare yare daze", wtf?!! jojo chara or what??!?!!! aaaaaaaaaaaaahhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhh really irritating mc you have here!!!!
Individually the chapters have a story but when u read it as a whole you keep changing the facts of the story, the no of plot holes are more than enough to make story within themselves. Although its not a bad fanfic it would be better if you made up your mind and stopped just trying to fill the story randomly.
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Revelar spoiler thank you Hunter00125 for this wonderful work of yours I shall give this work of your a rating of 5/5, 25/25, or a perfect score - - some of you might think that this score is not believable or maybe just some exaggeration but let me tell you one thing to ensure this story earned its perfect score, so for those that don't believe me.... just try to read and you'll know what i mean
really loving this book not taking the normal route and a lot darker as a whole you deserve a standing ovation *clap* *clap* *clap* *clap* *clap*
I love this novel!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! Author pls release 2 chp pls!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
This novel is super dark, and also really confusing, like how naruto introduces the past but there are some things that don’t add up? For me this is 5* however my only negative is all the rape, mc got raped as a kid? His mum got raped before she gave birth, basically every girl is a target of rape, just a little annoying
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Don't listen to all the people that says the mc is nothing but rias's slave but that just mean they haven't even read it till the recents ones as there is something called character or story development which they are to blind or lazy to see,The story has a great flow to it and the mc is well developed for me that is. P.S Great work author this is the second greatest dxd novel i have read so far coming behind a dragon's wish in my opinion closing in on being the first so keep it up FULL SUPPORT from me i even convinced all my friends and cousins to read this and they loved it. 👍❤️❤️❤️👍
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