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yo author can u please update this piece of marvel its such a waste to let it rot away
Me encanta hasta ahora. Creo que puede hacer grandes cambios en la historia. Ojalá uno de esos sea salvar a Elia como a sus hijos. 👍🏼👍🏼👍🏼👍🏼
Awesome read. This would easily get to the top 50, maybe top 10 if the updates keep coming. The writing quality is nigh-perfect, haven't checked since the last update, but I'm guessing it's good. The story development and character design are amazing. And the world background seems to have been well-researched.
I really enjoy it so far. you could do alot with it i hope you add more chapters soon[img=recommend][img=update][img=recommend][img=update][img=recommend]
Ddgghcdghjhdgjvccghcfhnbcgnfhghgfcfjj chbccbbvchbvyyuuuuuyyyr rhythm is going well and I’m glad to have you and the boys in this world to get a good chance of getting a good one for a little tiooo
للببباتلببعتابفتابغتللعافاللغاابلنفذتفذزت لا لا انا ولا لا انا ما عندي رصيد ولا لا لا هلا ولا شي ولا لا انا ولا انا ما عندي اي ايتنددترر لا لا انا ولا انا ما قلت انت انت بداوم ولا لا لا انا ولا انا ما انا انا ما احب احد انا ما احب ما ابي منك شي انا ولا احب اي شي
Keep doing a great job. Your follower is from Saudi Arabia ......... ب.... .. . ٠.٠٠.٠.٠.٠ ٠.٠٠ ٠............. 1 1 1 1 1.1 1.1 1.1 1.1 1 1.1 1 1.1 1 1 1 1 1 1.1 1 1 1 1 1 1 1 1.1 1 1 1 1 1.1 1 1 1 1 1.1 1 1
Pretty good story, great hrammar but has been sadly dropped so ill have to give it oblh 4 stars. Hope the author is doing well and is not dead.
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this book is simply amazing so far and I can not wait for more chapters. I am constantly trying to see which way the author takes the wonderful plot.
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appeal to the author: spend your time on this fan fiction, or at least write the reason that you abandoned it. ...........................................................................................................................................................
Truthfully one of the best novel I've read so far. ............... .............. 👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍
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Great story , very very well made and though thru it's bit short but it lets you enjoy every minute spent reading so it's a must to have look on this gam.. most chapters please.
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I honestly feel it’s like a small tragedy that this story hasn’t been updated. I almost didn’t want to read it due to it not being updated in like 2 months but I’m ultimately glad I did, a really good premise written expertly, it really sucks that it’s been discontinued.
While a great read and the world being built is amazing I am still waiting for more than a few times for more chapters it is the only downside but I do highly recommend this book
I want more I want more I want more I want more I want more I want more I want more I want more I want more I want more I want more I want more I want more I want more I want more I want more I want more I want more
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Great I can't imagine how he writes so amazing nocel i love what wrong with people who hated thi masterpiece i love i don't think they have know how to read
Revelar spoiler Welcome back, good to see active again! Great to see that you are carrying on with this story! Will the MC get a true love interest or will you fallow Mr Martin's dark tale!
This is a fun read. Keep up the good work. I hope that you will be adding more to this story. All in all this is worth the time to read it. Thank you !!!!
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yo author can u please update this piece of marvel its such a waste to let it rot away
Me encanta hasta ahora. Creo que puede hacer grandes cambios en la historia. Ojalá uno de esos sea salvar a Elia como a sus hijos. 👍🏼👍🏼👍🏼👍🏼
Awesome read. This would easily get to the top 50, maybe top 10 if the updates keep coming. The writing quality is nigh-perfect, haven't checked since the last update, but I'm guessing it's good. The story development and character design are amazing. And the world background seems to have been well-researched.
I really enjoy it so far. you could do alot with it i hope you add more chapters soon[img=recommend][img=update][img=recommend][img=update][img=recommend]
Ddgghcdghjhdgjvccghcfhnbcgnfhghgfcfjj chbccbbvchbvyyuuuuuyyyr rhythm is going well and I’m glad to have you and the boys in this world to get a good chance of getting a good one for a little tiooo
للببباتلببعتابفتابغتللعافاللغاابلنفذتفذزت لا لا انا ولا لا انا ما عندي رصيد ولا لا لا هلا ولا شي ولا لا انا ولا انا ما عندي اي ايتنددترر لا لا انا ولا انا ما قلت انت انت بداوم ولا لا لا انا ولا انا ما انا انا ما احب احد انا ما احب ما ابي منك شي انا ولا احب اي شي
Keep doing a great job. Your follower is from Saudi Arabia ......... ب.... .. . ٠.٠٠.٠.٠.٠ ٠.٠٠ ٠............. 1 1 1 1 1.1 1.1 1.1 1.1 1 1.1 1 1.1 1 1 1 1 1 1.1 1 1 1 1 1 1 1 1.1 1 1 1 1 1.1 1 1 1 1 1.1 1 1
Pretty good story, great hrammar but has been sadly dropped so ill have to give it oblh 4 stars. Hope the author is doing well and is not dead.
I want more chapters mmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmm
this book is simply amazing so far and I can not wait for more chapters. I am constantly trying to see which way the author takes the wonderful plot.
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appeal to the author: spend your time on this fan fiction, or at least write the reason that you abandoned it. ...........................................................................................................................................................
Truthfully one of the best novel I've read so far. ............... .............. 👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍
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Great story , very very well made and though thru it's bit short but it lets you enjoy every minute spent reading so it's a must to have look on this gam.. most chapters please.
Make more chapters!!!!!!!Make more chapters!!!!!!!Make more chapters!!!!!!!Make more chapters!!!!!!!Make more chapters!!!!!!!Make more chapters!!!!!!!Make more chapters!!!!!!!Make more chapters!!!!!!!Make more chapters!!!!!!!Make more chapters!!!!!!!Make more chapters!!!!!!!Make more chapters!!!!!!!
More Chapters please!!!!!!!!!!More Chapters please!!!!!!!!!!More Chapters please!!!!!!!!!!More Chapters please!!!!!!!!!!More Chapters please!!!!!!!!!!More Chapters please!!!!!!!!!!More Chapters please!!!!!!!!!!More Chapters please!!!!!!!!!!More Chapters please!!!!!!!!!!
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Revelar spoiler I honestly feel it’s like a small tragedy that this story hasn’t been updated. I almost didn’t want to read it due to it not being updated in like 2 months but I’m ultimately glad I did, a really good premise written expertly, it really sucks that it’s been discontinued.
While a great read and the world being built is amazing I am still waiting for more than a few times for more chapters it is the only downside but I do highly recommend this book
I want more I want more I want more I want more I want more I want more I want more I want more I want more I want more I want more I want more I want more I want more I want more I want more I want more I want more
more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more
Great I can't imagine how he writes so amazing nocel i love what wrong with people who hated thi masterpiece i love i don't think they have know how to read
Revelar spoiler Welcome back, good to see active again! Great to see that you are carrying on with this story! Will the MC get a true love interest or will you fallow Mr Martin's dark tale!
This is a fun read. Keep up the good work. I hope that you will be adding more to this story. All in all this is worth the time to read it. Thank you !!!!
mmmmmmmmmmmmmooooooooooooooooooorrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrreeeeeeeeeeeee!!!!!!!!!!!!!!