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In Another World with a Battleship
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Just an ordinary day until i was told to go on a battleship one day
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There are more grammar mistakes then there are words in this book there is no character development, the spelling and grammar is garbage and the author seems to know little to nothing about battleships, the army, or how to operate a crew
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Terrible writing style, terrible characters, terrible background Each chapters are more like a bad summary of what should be a chapter The author doesn't seem to know much about battleships
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Chapter 8: Paralyzed 5 years ago 
Hamzah, it is me Afiq. I am telling you your story is HORRIBLE I SAY! HORRIBLE! WHAT KIND OF PLOT LINE IS THIS! YOU KNOW NOTHING ABOUT YOUR GRAMMAR AND BATTLE SHIPS. Well, to be nice, I would say this is fine.