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The hero is too strong thus leaving no space for future developments which is very detrimental for a novel to keep up on the long run. Therefore this novel is kinda broken bit hey thanks for the effort author. Keep up, and in the next novel try a weak beginning rather than destroy the world the moment you awaken your powers😛😛😛😛😛
Stupid character development who does not deserve to be mc. I have read insane story with insane MC but I have never seen such a stupid writer who creates a stupid MC.
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Best novel i have read in a long time😍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍💗💗😍👍👍😍👍👍👍👍😍👍😍👍😍👍😍👍👍🤩🤩🤩🤩🤩🤩🤩🤩🤩🤩🤩🤩🤩🤩🤩🤩🤩🤩🤩🤩🤩🤩🤩🤩🤩😋😋😋😋😋😋😋😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😂😂😂😂👍👍👍👍😍😘😘😘😘😍😍😍😍😀😀😀😀😀
I really enjoy the story, also i like the attitude of the mc. I do wish that you posted more than one chapter a day, but I know how hard it is to wright. Hope you don't drop the novel.
It's good but I think that the main character is a bit too murder happy and would recommend to tone that down a bit but not a lot. Also I think that you'er doing good job and encourage you to continue this novel.
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Ahhh you're men of culture as well. If you are a men of culture you're at correct place ................................................................................................................140140140140140
One One is a little more than the u and I hope you are doing well and that your work is going well for the new year and the holidays have been crazy busy for me here at home and I hope you are doing well and I hope to hear back soon from you soon as well and I hope you are having an
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I like how he is really overpowered and with a system that can destroy other system. I like it a lot on how he can be ruthless and trying to get revenge
Just started but it’s all over the top revenge fun so far. From what I’ve read in the authors comment there’s only netori, no netorare. If you don’t know what that means, it’s the good kind of NTR not bad. MC doesn’t get girls stolen.
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I genuinely like this fanfic soo keep it up and make mc op ............................................................ ..... .llll
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People read this for OP MC and harem. Cause this is awesome. I enjoy it...........................................................................................................
This junk still has NTR, I recommend that no one read this crap, will regret it so warning, this author have the **** of a fetish for NTR. 🤕🤢🤢🤢🤢🤢🤢🤢🤢🤢🤢
WoW this story is awesome..... Exp exp exp exp exp exp exp exp exp exp exp exp exp exp exp exp exp exp exp exp exp exp exp exp exp exp exp exp exp exp exp exp exp exp exp exp exp exp exp exp exp exp exp exp exp exp exp exp exp exp exp exp exp exp exp exp exp exp exp exp exp exp exp exp exp exp exp exp exp exp exp exp exp exp exp exp exp exp exp exp exp exp exp exp exp exp exp exp exp exp exp exp exp exp exp exp exp exp exp exp exp exp exp exp exp exp exp exp exp exp exp exp exp exp exp exp
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The hero is too strong thus leaving no space for future developments which is very detrimental for a novel to keep up on the long run. Therefore this novel is kinda broken bit hey thanks for the effort author. Keep up, and in the next novel try a weak beginning rather than destroy the world the moment you awaken your powers😛😛😛😛😛
The hero is too strong thus leaving no space for future developments which is very detrimental for a novel to keep up on the long run. Therefore this novel is kinda broken bit hey thanks for the effort author. Keep up, and in the next novel try a weak beginning rather than destroy the world the moment you awaken your powers😛😛😛😛😛
Stupid character development who does not deserve to be mc. I have read insane story with insane MC but I have never seen such a stupid writer who creates a stupid MC.
Good read guys.............................. .........................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................
Best novel i have read in a long time😍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍💗💗😍👍👍😍👍👍👍👍😍👍😍👍😍👍😍👍👍🤩🤩🤩🤩🤩🤩🤩🤩🤩🤩🤩🤩🤩🤩🤩🤩🤩🤩🤩🤩🤩🤩🤩🤩🤩😋😋😋😋😋😋😋😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😂😂😂😂👍👍👍👍😍😘😘😘😘😍😍😍😍😀😀😀😀😀
I really enjoy the story, also i like the attitude of the mc. I do wish that you posted more than one chapter a day, but I know how hard it is to wright. Hope you don't drop the novel.
It's good but I think that the main character is a bit too murder happy and would recommend to tone that down a bit but not a lot. Also I think that you'er doing good job and encourage you to continue this novel.
anti troll force no more no longer counter review ro the fakes ignore the bullsh*t commander z keep writing you amazing stories 👍👍👍👍👍
anti troll force no more no longer counter reviews to the fakes ignore the bullsh*t commander z keep writing your amazing stories 👍👍👍👍
Ahhh you're men of culture as well. If you are a men of culture you're at correct place ................................................................................................................140140140140140
One One is a little more than the u and I hope you are doing well and that your work is going well for the new year and the holidays have been crazy busy for me here at home and I hope you are doing well and I hope to hear back soon from you soon as well and I hope you are having an
Revelar spoiler I like how he is really overpowered and with a system that can destroy other system. I like it a lot on how he can be ruthless and trying to get revenge
Just started but it’s all over the top revenge fun so far. From what I’ve read in the authors comment there’s only netori, no netorare. If you don’t know what that means, it’s the good kind of NTR not bad. MC doesn’t get girls stolen.
Please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please continue continue continue continue continue continue continue
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I genuinely like this fanfic soo keep it up and make mc op ............................................................ ..... .llll
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The spam reviews are NTR lovers themselves who have never been with a girl. Please do not read such retarded reviews. These trolls are braindead and are a waste of life. They have no life and will never amount to anything.
The spam reviews are NTR lovers themselves who have never been with a girl. Please do not read such retarded reviews. These trolls are braindead and are a waste of life. They have no life and will never amount to anything.
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People read this for OP MC and harem. Cause this is awesome. I enjoy it...........................................................................................................
This junk still has NTR, I recommend that no one read this crap, will regret it so warning, this author have the **** of a fetish for NTR. 🤕🤢🤢🤢🤢🤢🤢🤢🤢🤢🤢
WoW this story is awesome..... Exp exp exp exp exp exp exp exp exp exp exp exp exp exp exp exp exp exp exp exp exp exp exp exp exp exp exp exp exp exp exp exp exp exp exp exp exp exp exp exp exp exp exp exp exp exp exp exp exp exp exp exp exp exp exp exp exp exp exp exp exp exp exp exp exp exp exp exp exp exp exp exp exp exp exp exp exp exp exp exp exp exp exp exp exp exp exp exp exp exp exp exp exp exp exp exp exp exp exp exp exp exp exp exp exp exp exp exp exp exp exp exp exp exp exp exp
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The hero is too strong thus leaving no space for future developments which is very detrimental for a novel to keep up on the long run. Therefore this novel is kinda broken bit hey thanks for the effort author. Keep up, and in the next novel try a weak beginning rather than destroy the world the moment you awaken your powers😛😛😛😛😛