Reviews of Overgeared System by GhostyGodZ - Webnovel

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BLAZERFENTON_okbob

Why turn it into a pay wall after getting so far into it at that point the whole thing should be pawwalled I mean it's ridiculous and then continue to post pay wall advertising after ward's

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Jordzfml_7

110% sure that the author is a complete idiot based off the contradicting and idiotic choices he chose for the Mc. I'll change my review if I'm wrong later on.

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DreuxX

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Lema404

while the story is ok. The author thinks that their story is worth holding hostage on patreon, and that's on them, even if I think its a scummy thing to do. Hopefully, they learn better before the story gets tanked and loose their reader base. If they even have one to begin with.

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Maximillian

The story seems like an edgy teenager got a pc and thought he was good and writing a novel. The author lacks story and world building skills, this author's work is the same regurgitated story across the board. They should maybe explore some new ideas. Plus there are also all the bots here giving a mediocre novel 5 stars for no reason

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EroSpatula

I’ll say this first, this type of multiverse is the type I enjoy most (multiple worlds in 1 scenario, not constant world hopping) but the whole revenge thing (while pretty well in the MCs right) the way he did it isn’t really my thing, if it’s yours it’s all good. Don’t get me wrong, I like it. It takes from places that even I wouldn’t expect, I mean Rising of The Shield Hero opening isn’t something you would think of when you think of the first chapter (props on you for that one author, loved it.) I just think that the overall wiriting quality, spacing and speed of how you delivered each chasing point needs to be slightly altered, but it’s still good. I was just expecting OVERGEARED you know? Like a Highschool DxD world with an MC with Pagma’s Sucessor class (Or Grid’s Blacksmithing skill) with a system. So unfortunately I’m gonna stop on this note, it’s just not my cup of tea and it feels like I was bamboozled as the sugar cubes I placed it my tea was actually salt. P.S. Do you know God Grid?

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VenerableLeb

Aye an author who fights back against trolls? I like that hahaahahahahaaha

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Juiceisagoat

Good it’s great don’t listen to the hater and keep up the good work

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G_bug

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Yeifah_R1htaf

I mean the novel are not really good but enjoyable for me that is........................................................................... .

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Yukisen

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007_samboss

Good novel but can you plese post anotyer chapter than 1 chapter per 2 week 😭😭 i need more chapter but i can't pay for patron :(. I vert like this novel because the MC are op and his developpement is good

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Grenhaer

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Evach_sch

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AleccrimD

Autor-san, só tirando uma dúvida que eu acho que muitas leitores de primeira viagem como eu tem, pois as revisões estão muito confusas e dizem que há muito spams, então eu quero perguntar diretamente a você. Fiquei sabendo que você reescreveu o romance por quê rolou netorare que quase ninguém gosta, pois a maioria de nós, leitores, somos hipócritas e gosta de netori e abomina netorare(eu, por exemplo), mas ainda ouvir que ainda tem netorare rolando(pode ser spam), então queria perguntar diretamente a você para acabar logo com minha dúvida e de muitos irmãos, para que possamos ler seu romance sem medo e preocupação: Tem NETORARE nesse romance? ________________________________________ Author-san, just taking a question that I think many first-time readers like me have, because the reviews are very confusing and say there are a lot of spams, so I want to ask you directly. I understand that you rewrote the novel why rolled netorare that almost nobody likes, because most of us readers are hypocrites and like netori and abhor netorare (me, for example) but still hear that there is still netorare rolling (may be spam), so I would like to ask you directly to get rid of my doubt and many brothers so we can read your novel without fear and worry: Is there NETORARE in this novel?

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ShuraTheDestroyer

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unlove123

I dont give a perfect score but this is the highest i can give. Its new and exciting although lots of *** and harem but promising. I strongly suggest to the author to build the story and expand it so that people will not be bored with just *** alone. I like this novel and hope for more updates! Aja!!!

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Sheauwei_soo

With continuous writing practices, you can improve further. Much effort needed for grammar, story telling skill and descriptions of a scene. Kudos for creativity tho. Much room for improvement. Don’t give up and continue to strive!

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OneLastGod

The starting is okay but kinda depressing to read after he got the system. If you gonna create a new work of the same genre, better focus on a few characters and develop them first instead of throwing them all in one because it's kinda confusing. Not everyone remember each of them and sometimes it's kinda pain to switch to your browser to search for a certain character. As for character development, plan ahead. Avoid pointless monologues unless you wanna make look your character like that. Great example of this is your MC rants a lot but ends up not doing it. Of course he have his reasons but it's better to do it in one or two statements that includes the "goal" and "reasons" if ever you gonna delay that goal instead of just building a lot of emotions for your character that will not gonna be used. In this way, readers who are immerse will not waste time setting up their mood for nothing.

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b150343cs

Its good for a time pass.ashjsjsgshsbjsjshsjsbsbshshjsjshsjsjsjsjksngsmhhbsbsmkskskhsvnmajsjsbdbbbdjjsjbbksjsja should absolutely haha HHS Jha JJ's she's just the Anja Anja Suja Anja Akshay Anja Suja Suja Suja ajakeijjw where I heard keep eke the he eke the he was j.

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_Alita_

It's a very good story with a properly OP character who has actual emotions, not some easygoing one. The Harem system and the God System idea is

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Ookamisama

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