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Story and character both have good development. The female mc has a unique personality and background. I’m very curious about the male lead though.
8 months and still updating. It stands against the test of time. Boi, when was the last time i read this huh... It's pick up a lot of chapters. Nice
Cada vez mais interessante, apesar de achar também meio macabro a maneira com o MC consegue matar as pessoas, é horripilante e fascinante ao mesmo tempo. Imagino que para os chineses deve ser fácil imaginar uma pessoa com olhos de flor de pêssego ou de fênix, mas acredito que não sou a única que não consegue visualizar essa imagem
Incrivelmente viciante, só para de ler se está muito cansado ou tem que esperar as atualizações, Personagens extraordinários , história intrigante e envolnente
I came from a review that the author posted about how the story could be improved. It was detailed and they seemed like they knew there stuff about writing. So I'm here to read it (not a review but it is a review?) Anyway the story will be a great read from what I have seen already 👍🏽👍🏽👍🏽👍🏽👍🏽👍🏽
Revelar spoiler
The author does a good job at trying to make everything so mysterious, but unfortunately it also makes the story hard to follow and feels jumbled, at least to me. The pace is also a bit too slow for my taste, but I would recommend this novel to those who don't mind waiting for answers and also likes detached and aloof MC.
What a tyrannical and pitiful villain, father. An author can masterfully convey feelings and emotions, whip up intrigue ... immediately the hand of a man of nature's knowledge is heard ... Oh, these old men ... sly East foxes ... they have their own plan for the life of their descendants ... an interesting plot! Interesting and this time the father is good? and mother villain? What is the essence of sending at another time? Grandfather, still that ... eccentric! Not quite clear ... uncle is father? Why is the main character calling his uncle, father? After the stones that stroked outcast, burnt pancakes, seem the most delicious food! Oh, the author knows the subtleties of clan life. When the next of kin is plotting evil ... in the shadows, and in the world everyone is smiling at each other sweetly))) the author describes it skillfully. Oh ... a palace servant, not in the presence of the emperor, to report the news to the ear of the minister ... he is clearly a suicide bomber ... in the evening a gift from the emperor can come to him - a cup with poison and a black silk cord ... The text, the story itself delays, instead of 10 chapters already 13 !!! Ahahahahaha !!! I seem to have found a magnificent pearl for my library !!! Since those novels that I read have become all premium ... and there are not so many stones !!!! Hooray! Hooray!!! (Gold, brilliant, sparkling magic spiritual stone, lay right in front of my feet ... but it was not visible! Surprisingly !!! Sorry for offtopic !!!! This novel is worthy of promotion, tomorrow I will give one stone! Why you are alone? The two others will go on promoting their own novel))) Offtop). And why did the parents allow their children to join any strange organizations ??? The stump is clear that they are being recruited there ... immature minds ... Super fascinating story, I wanted to read only 10 chapters ... but I can not tear myself away from chapter 21 ... how cool it is written !!! The author, while I do not have the slightest hint of any mistakes of the author. Luxury story! Thank you very much!!!
Revelar spoiler
So, originally I wasn't completely sold, the first couple chapters had some writing inconsistencies. After those chapters, the writing became a lot clearer. I love how the author uses such strong and vivid language so well to convey powerful emotion. There's a section the author wrote saying something like, "I wanted to rip open his chest to see if he even had a heart." Wow. You can feel so much of the character's anger, resentment, pain, and other emotions in that simple yet profound statement. I love the author's writing style and character design so much. It's hard to find any fault within the author. This author is are consistent, uses powerful imagery, and creates a wonderfully interesting plot.
Great book ....'''.................................................................'..............................______________________________________________________________________________________________..................................................................................................
only half way through the available chapters, but very happy to have found book, though I'm much more interested in the characters interactions and the funny court, than the cultivation aspect which is not making too much sense to me
Waaa this novel is actually well structured but you need to be patient to get the flow of the story. It's a tedious read for people who like swift actions.
god story but sooo slow 😤😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁🎉😁😁😁😁😁😁😁
Let me start by saying that the way the author describes the sceneries and background is so vivid and so exquisite, that I can literally visualize each and every scene. You can see how much care and effort is being put into this story. True, this story is slow paced. But that’s because there is more emphasis to detail and in a way, the story is written in a slice of life kind of pattern. The words flow and describe the events passing from one day to the next.
Before i give my reviews, let me say this..." Good job! 😃 " The story is very interesting that's the first thing that came in my mind while reading the novel. The FL, i like the way you portrays her character sort of timid and reserve but defiant, fight when provoked. At the first reading I somewhat got loss with all the flowery words you used..(i don't know to other readers) but sometimes my mind that draws out the image which i imagine while reading those words somewhat mess up..the words made the imagination to hard, sorry..i skip some flowery words though while reading, like i have to assured myself that I don't have to read and understand it but to jump through it and just go with the real flow of the story itself..other than that i think everything are great😄, the particular place or thing in the story are very detailed even the sounds, i like it. (As if i heard it myself)..it is a promising novel, so I will motivate you to continue writing this novel by giving u a daily vote🤩and please don't sell it too early..(i only have four novels in my library, one is consuming my SS too much😭..i always end up broke.. GOD BLESS YOU💓
😚😄😘😘😆🐹🐀🐭🐁🐰🐇🐾🐻🐦🦉🦃🦇🦆🐸🐢🕊🐳🐠🐡🐬😃🤣😂😀😄😆😉😊😗😘😍😋😗🤗🙂☺🍇🍈🍉🍋🍋🍐🥝🍍🍑🍆🥔🥕🌽🐴🐆🐅🐯🐂🐮🦌🐎🐏🐽🐑🐐🐪🐪🐑🐏🐫🐘🦏🐁🐿🐇🐰🐀🐾🐨🐻🐤🐣🐓🐔🐥🐦🐸🕊🦅🐢🐊🦉🦆🐉🐳🐡🐠🐟🐬🐋🐙🐚🦐🌹🏵💮🌸💐🐌🦋🐝🌷🌼🌳🥀🌲🌳🌴🌵🍁🍀☘️🌿🍃🍂
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Story and character both have good development. The female mc has a unique personality and background. I’m very curious about the male lead though.
8 months and still updating. It stands against the test of time. Boi, when was the last time i read this huh... It's pick up a lot of chapters. Nice
Cada vez mais interessante, apesar de achar também meio macabro a maneira com o MC consegue matar as pessoas, é horripilante e fascinante ao mesmo tempo. Imagino que para os chineses deve ser fácil imaginar uma pessoa com olhos de flor de pêssego ou de fênix, mas acredito que não sou a única que não consegue visualizar essa imagem
Incrivelmente viciante, só para de ler se está muito cansado ou tem que esperar as atualizações, Personagens extraordinários , história intrigante e envolnente
I came from a review that the author posted about how the story could be improved. It was detailed and they seemed like they knew there stuff about writing. So I'm here to read it (not a review but it is a review?) Anyway the story will be a great read from what I have seen already 👍🏽👍🏽👍🏽👍🏽👍🏽👍🏽
Revelar spoiler The author does a good job at trying to make everything so mysterious, but unfortunately it also makes the story hard to follow and feels jumbled, at least to me. The pace is also a bit too slow for my taste, but I would recommend this novel to those who don't mind waiting for answers and also likes detached and aloof MC.
What a tyrannical and pitiful villain, father. An author can masterfully convey feelings and emotions, whip up intrigue ... immediately the hand of a man of nature's knowledge is heard ... Oh, these old men ... sly East foxes ... they have their own plan for the life of their descendants ... an interesting plot! Interesting and this time the father is good? and mother villain? What is the essence of sending at another time? Grandfather, still that ... eccentric! Not quite clear ... uncle is father? Why is the main character calling his uncle, father? After the stones that stroked outcast, burnt pancakes, seem the most delicious food! Oh, the author knows the subtleties of clan life. When the next of kin is plotting evil ... in the shadows, and in the world everyone is smiling at each other sweetly))) the author describes it skillfully. Oh ... a palace servant, not in the presence of the emperor, to report the news to the ear of the minister ... he is clearly a suicide bomber ... in the evening a gift from the emperor can come to him - a cup with poison and a black silk cord ... The text, the story itself delays, instead of 10 chapters already 13 !!! Ahahahahaha !!! I seem to have found a magnificent pearl for my library !!! Since those novels that I read have become all premium ... and there are not so many stones !!!! Hooray! Hooray!!! (Gold, brilliant, sparkling magic spiritual stone, lay right in front of my feet ... but it was not visible! Surprisingly !!! Sorry for offtopic !!!! This novel is worthy of promotion, tomorrow I will give one stone! Why you are alone? The two others will go on promoting their own novel))) Offtop). And why did the parents allow their children to join any strange organizations ??? The stump is clear that they are being recruited there ... immature minds ... Super fascinating story, I wanted to read only 10 chapters ... but I can not tear myself away from chapter 21 ... how cool it is written !!! The author, while I do not have the slightest hint of any mistakes of the author. Luxury story! Thank you very much!!!
Revelar spoiler So, originally I wasn't completely sold, the first couple chapters had some writing inconsistencies. After those chapters, the writing became a lot clearer. I love how the author uses such strong and vivid language so well to convey powerful emotion. There's a section the author wrote saying something like, "I wanted to rip open his chest to see if he even had a heart." Wow. You can feel so much of the character's anger, resentment, pain, and other emotions in that simple yet profound statement. I love the author's writing style and character design so much. It's hard to find any fault within the author. This author is are consistent, uses powerful imagery, and creates a wonderfully interesting plot.
Great book ....'''.................................................................'..............................______________________________________________________________________________________________..................................................................................................
only half way through the available chapters, but very happy to have found book, though I'm much more interested in the characters interactions and the funny court, than the cultivation aspect which is not making too much sense to me
Waaa this novel is actually well structured but you need to be patient to get the flow of the story. It's a tedious read for people who like swift actions.
god story but sooo slow 😤😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁🎉😁😁😁😁😁😁😁
Let me start by saying that the way the author describes the sceneries and background is so vivid and so exquisite, that I can literally visualize each and every scene. You can see how much care and effort is being put into this story. True, this story is slow paced. But that’s because there is more emphasis to detail and in a way, the story is written in a slice of life kind of pattern. The words flow and describe the events passing from one day to the next.
Before i give my reviews, let me say this..." Good job! 😃 " The story is very interesting that's the first thing that came in my mind while reading the novel. The FL, i like the way you portrays her character sort of timid and reserve but defiant, fight when provoked. At the first reading I somewhat got loss with all the flowery words you used..(i don't know to other readers) but sometimes my mind that draws out the image which i imagine while reading those words somewhat mess up..the words made the imagination to hard, sorry..i skip some flowery words though while reading, like i have to assured myself that I don't have to read and understand it but to jump through it and just go with the real flow of the story itself..other than that i think everything are great😄, the particular place or thing in the story are very detailed even the sounds, i like it. (As if i heard it myself)..it is a promising novel, so I will motivate you to continue writing this novel by giving u a daily vote🤩and please don't sell it too early..(i only have four novels in my library, one is consuming my SS too much😭..i always end up broke.. GOD BLESS YOU💓
😚😄😘😘😆🐹🐀🐭🐁🐰🐇🐾🐻🐦🦉🦃🦇🦆🐸🐢🕊🐳🐠🐡🐬😃🤣😂😀😄😆😉😊😗😘😍😋😗🤗🙂☺🍇🍈🍉🍋🍋🍐🥝🍍🍑🍆🥔🥕🌽🐴🐆🐅🐯🐂🐮🦌🐎🐏🐽🐑🐐🐪🐪🐑🐏🐫🐘🦏🐁🐿🐇🐰🐀🐾🐨🐻🐤🐣🐓🐔🐥🐦🐸🕊🦅🐢🐊🦉🦆🐉🐳🐡🐠🐟🐬🐋🐙🐚🦐🌹🏵💮🌸💐🐌🦋🐝🌷🌼🌳🥀🌲🌳🌴🌵🍁🍀☘️🌿🍃🍂
Hey there! Good day for writing! If you wanted to see whether you can get paid by distributing the current work or getting financial support by writing new work, you might want to contact geekyteddyyo@gmail.com. A brief introduction, some sample chapters or links will be appreciated when reaching out.