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I read it a long time ago and now that I recalled it i srsly wasted about a month just to find it back. Author u fker update it. It was such an excellent story with potential.
bro author, you should update this story it is one of a kind and I like this story and the development I hope that you do update frequently
does anyone know if there are more chapters out there or if the author just dropped it. I got so into it I read all the chapters in two days, I searched the wed but couldn't find anything.
Be able to write a novel like this, great work author! I’d love to see more. Do you have a discord for readers to join or any other social media I can follow?
why author don't write anymore ? it was a great story .....still waiting pls continue writing this masterpiece . don't stop 🛑🛑🛑🛑. hope u come back 🔙
Thanks for the hard Work 😍 Thanks for the hard Work 😍 Thanks for the hard Work 😍 Thanks for the hard Work 😍 Thanks for the hard Work 😍!
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the story appears to lack a lot of things like character development and world building. The only reason it is enjoyable is because of pure wish fullfilment.
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Awesome simply awesome 👏🏻 thanks so much to the writer [img=recommend][img=recommend][img=update][img=recommend][img=update][img=recommend][img=update]
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This novel is one of the most entertaining out of most system novels on the app and i hope that the author can continue this novel!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! Pls Update!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
Is this novel gonna get an update or has it been dropped?!?!?!?!??!!?!?? !😫😖😣😖😫😩😫😫😣😣😫😩😖😫😩😖😫😩😖 PlsUpdate!!!!PlsUpdate!!!!!!!
Not for me, I don't understand the hype with 18+ novels, where the protagonist is pre****. Other than that: Pro - The story is written in nice English. Con- there wasn't an update in about a year
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Hey there! Good day for writing! If you wanted to see whether you can get paid by distributing the current work or getting financial support by writing new work, you might want to contact geekyteddyyo@gmail.com. A brief introduction, some sample chapters or links will be appreciated when reaching out.
True be told the story is wow. U sure know this stuff well enough to write them by name. Like tit and the other. U are good in writing but you just don't get to put the commas at the right place, at the right time.
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personally I adored Noeme if the characters are not very hello to develop but it is an easy to read lemon work without the fuss I hope the author will resume writing
I want actually time pass by reading the novel first and I found myself became interested in it.so I want to read more about the rest of the chapters.
Thank you for writing this but please update it fast. I can't wait anymore! The story is really nice I wonder when he will be able to conquer the demoness.
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Overall it's a great novel for its type I'm just sad it was dropped and I hope it gets picked back up sometime in the nearish future but the I understand sometimes writing isnt that fun anymore
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Very good but the author hasn’t posted in a while. I’m not sure if he dropped it but I hope not it was so good. I hope your doing well author and continue to make chapters!!!!
please just update this book ....it really is a great piece............................................................................................
I read it a long time ago and now that I recalled it i srsly wasted about a month just to find it back. Author u fker update it. It was such an excellent story with potential.
bro author, you should update this story it is one of a kind and I like this story and the development I hope that you do update frequently
does anyone know if there are more chapters out there or if the author just dropped it. I got so into it I read all the chapters in two days, I searched the wed but couldn't find anything.
Be able to write a novel like this, great work author! I’d love to see more. Do you have a discord for readers to join or any other social media I can follow?
why author don't write anymore ? it was a great story .....still waiting pls continue writing this masterpiece . don't stop 🛑🛑🛑🛑. hope u come back 🔙
Thanks for the hard Work 😍 Thanks for the hard Work 😍 Thanks for the hard Work 😍 Thanks for the hard Work 😍 Thanks for the hard Work 😍!
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the story appears to lack a lot of things like character development and world building. The only reason it is enjoyable is because of pure wish fullfilment.
Keep up the good work 👍🏼👍🏼👍🏼👍🏼👍🏼👍🏼👍🏼👍🏼👍🏼👍🏼👍🏼👍🏼👍🏼👍🏼👍🏼👍🏼👍🏼👍🏼👍🏼👍🏼👍🏼👍🏼👍🏼👍🏼👍🏼👍🏼👍🏼👍🏼👍🏼👍🏼
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This novel is one of the most entertaining out of most system novels on the app and i hope that the author can continue this novel!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! Pls Update!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
Is this novel gonna get an update or has it been dropped?!?!?!?!??!!?!?? !😫😖😣😖😫😩😫😫😣😣😫😩😖😫😩😖😫😩😖 PlsUpdate!!!!PlsUpdate!!!!!!!
Not for me, I don't understand the hype with 18+ novels, where the protagonist is pre****. Other than that: Pro - The story is written in nice English. Con- there wasn't an update in about a year
Let’s make it (222) Let’s make it (222) Let’s make it (222) Let’s make it (222) Let’s make it (222) Let’s make it (222) Let’s make it (222) Let’s make it (222)
Need more thanks for the chapters [img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=exp][img=exp][img=exp][img=exp][img=exp][img=update][img=update][img=update]
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Hey there! Good day for writing! If you wanted to see whether you can get paid by distributing the current work or getting financial support by writing new work, you might want to contact geekyteddyyo@gmail.com. A brief introduction, some sample chapters or links will be appreciated when reaching out.
True be told the story is wow. U sure know this stuff well enough to write them by name. Like tit and the other. U are good in writing but you just don't get to put the commas at the right place, at the right time.
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Revelar spoiler personally I adored Noeme if the characters are not very hello to develop but it is an easy to read lemon work without the fuss I hope the author will resume writing
I want actually time pass by reading the novel first and I found myself became interested in it.so I want to read more about the rest of the chapters.
Thank you for writing this but please update it fast. I can't wait anymore! The story is really nice I wonder when he will be able to conquer the demoness.
Revelar spoiler Overall it's a great novel for its type I'm just sad it was dropped and I hope it gets picked back up sometime in the nearish future but the I understand sometimes writing isnt that fun anymore
Come back to us Come back to us Come back to us Come back to us Come back to us Come back to us Come back to us Come back to us Come back to us Come back to us
Very good but the author hasn’t posted in a while. I’m not sure if he dropped it but I hope not it was so good. I hope your doing well author and continue to make chapters!!!!
please just update this book ....it really is a great piece............................................................................................