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I really like the plot of the novel so far and the unique cultivation system seems innovative and I like it, I really like Silver's cultivation specifically as well, void cultivation is a great concept.
it is a fun story / novel, but novels with stories like that have often been published with different histories, if possible try to make something even more interesting (no need for new novels) could be the next update improved again, and continue try, don't take or revise other novels too often to make the novel more interesting because there will still be people who read a lot and will know it, so try to have your own original novel (not the revised results for yourself / change it to match our own story) try to see the original life then develop with imagination to fit blah blah blah blah, that's like 😅😅✌️ good luck 👍
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Um dos melhores novel que já lê sinceramente recomendo muito espero que possa ter bastante capítulos seria ainda se aumentar a atualização de capítulos
It was alright until you added romance! Like come on, not every novel needs a harem or love at all! All the people who add romance are just thirsty losers!
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Story is good, but there is a lot of confusing stuff that happens. Motivations are not told for actions that he takes as well sometimes. Also, various number of typos scattered throughout the chapters which make it more confusing.
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This mc is the worst even after living 3 lifes he couldn't figure out that cultivation is not everything plus i hate the fact that he is always hiding his cultivation like at first it was good bc he was weak but now cmon, then he goes all crazy bc of shi but couldn't even respond to her feelings and as matter of fact he acts like it NEVER happened 😢😢😑
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Love it +!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!°!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!@!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!@!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
This is an amazing novel. At the Beginning you can see Silver adjusting to his new life in his new body. And I quite like how Silver slowly exposes his knowledge and skills, not too slow no too fast. In all honesty the novel is awesome and deserves praise! Just keep up the good work and pump those chapters harder than Saitama's punches!
"Coupled with his million years of experience" - this sentence usually makes me drop a lot of novels if I find mc doing stupid things/making choices that don't make sense...
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A unique cultivation novel and better than most generic ones. Easy to read, not that many grammar errors, and an interesting protagonist to follow is the equation for a good novel. Keep it up, Author LOABA! >3</
It has an engaging story. Don't let the reviews talking about writing quality discourage you to read this or you will miss out on a good novel. Yeah, it's not the best in terms of grammar but compared to average novel on wn? It's like Shakespeare.
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Revelar spoiler Writing quality wise it's still rough on the edges. But definitely a hidden gem on the eyes of the public. As for updating chapters, well not on fast side but you can definitely expect better quality of writing unlike some *ehem!* who just outright post them without even checking it. I know they're on their own but edit them properly. Well for character design and world background, expect a cliches of wuxia and martial arts kinda novel. That is if the author decides to spice things up, not ruin the overall quality of the story. Hopefully, unlike some authors who decides to rewrite the thing. I hope this helps although I know it's not much but hey I aleast gave a proper review unlike trolls who just wants the world burn.
While I was quite invested initially. Over time the book become convoluted and too confusing. There were time-skips/changes which at the time weren't explained well and led to me just skimming the pages, hoping to get back to the story. So while the grammar was good and the story seemed fun, I was just unable to get back into the story and my interests had faded.
LOABA spends far too much time in the inkstone discord. Imagine how many chapters per day he could write if he didn't waste all his time there. You should read this web serial and let LOABA know with a comment on every chapter to spend less time derping and more time writing. Thank you. Skully out.
Novel idea is rather good, an enjoyable read. I'm pretty much a fan and I hope you're able to update more each day. Like the others, some grammatical here and there but it seems like your first work. Good job! I hope your writing skills improve throughout the story!
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It's easy to read, I don't really know about grammar or such things so I can't really tell if it was bad or good.. sorry for that :D But what I can tell is, that you put a lot of work in writing in it.. so please continue your good work :)
The story line seems okay, it's really hard to read due to the numerous grammar mistakes but those can be solved easily. I was confused at the flashback as I did not really know what was happening. Also, it would be nice to have a clear example of the currency, what are moon coins in pounds or yen? Apart from that, it seems to be thought out and there is clearly effort put in here, good job!
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Hey there! Good day for writing! If you wanted to see whether you can get paid by distributing the current work or getting financial support by writing new work, you might want to contact geekyteddyyo@gmail.com. A brief introduction, some sample chapters or links will be appreciated when reaching out.
I really like the plot of the novel so far and the unique cultivation system seems innovative and I like it, I really like Silver's cultivation specifically as well, void cultivation is a great concept.
it is a fun story / novel, but novels with stories like that have often been published with different histories, if possible try to make something even more interesting (no need for new novels) could be the next update improved again, and continue try, don't take or revise other novels too often to make the novel more interesting because there will still be people who read a lot and will know it, so try to have your own original novel (not the revised results for yourself / change it to match our own story) try to see the original life then develop with imagination to fit blah blah blah blah, that's like 😅😅✌️ good luck 👍
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Um dos melhores novel que já lê sinceramente recomendo muito espero que possa ter bastante capítulos seria ainda se aumentar a atualização de capítulos
It was alright until you added romance! Like come on, not every novel needs a harem or love at all! All the people who add romance are just thirsty losers!
go to RoYaLRoAd.com if you want to read more it has more chaps and was last updated like 2 weeks ago 0000000000000000000000000000000000000000000000000000000000000000000000000000000000000000000000000000000000000000000000
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Story is good, but there is a lot of confusing stuff that happens. Motivations are not told for actions that he takes as well sometimes. Also, various number of typos scattered throughout the chapters which make it more confusing.
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Revelar spoiler This mc is the worst even after living 3 lifes he couldn't figure out that cultivation is not everything plus i hate the fact that he is always hiding his cultivation like at first it was good bc he was weak but now cmon, then he goes all crazy bc of shi but couldn't even respond to her feelings and as matter of fact he acts like it NEVER happened 😢😢😑
Revelar spoiler Love it +!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!°!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!@!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!@!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
This is an amazing novel. At the Beginning you can see Silver adjusting to his new life in his new body. And I quite like how Silver slowly exposes his knowledge and skills, not too slow no too fast. In all honesty the novel is awesome and deserves praise! Just keep up the good work and pump those chapters harder than Saitama's punches!
"Coupled with his million years of experience" - this sentence usually makes me drop a lot of novels if I find mc doing stupid things/making choices that don't make sense...
Revelar spoiler A unique cultivation novel and better than most generic ones. Easy to read, not that many grammar errors, and an interesting protagonist to follow is the equation for a good novel. Keep it up, Author LOABA! >3</
It has an engaging story. Don't let the reviews talking about writing quality discourage you to read this or you will miss out on a good novel. Yeah, it's not the best in terms of grammar but compared to average novel on wn? It's like Shakespeare.
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Revelar spoiler Writing quality wise it's still rough on the edges. But definitely a hidden gem on the eyes of the public. As for updating chapters, well not on fast side but you can definitely expect better quality of writing unlike some *ehem!* who just outright post them without even checking it. I know they're on their own but edit them properly. Well for character design and world background, expect a cliches of wuxia and martial arts kinda novel. That is if the author decides to spice things up, not ruin the overall quality of the story. Hopefully, unlike some authors who decides to rewrite the thing. I hope this helps although I know it's not much but hey I aleast gave a proper review unlike trolls who just wants the world burn.
While I was quite invested initially. Over time the book become convoluted and too confusing. There were time-skips/changes which at the time weren't explained well and led to me just skimming the pages, hoping to get back to the story. So while the grammar was good and the story seemed fun, I was just unable to get back into the story and my interests had faded.
LOABA spends far too much time in the inkstone discord. Imagine how many chapters per day he could write if he didn't waste all his time there. You should read this web serial and let LOABA know with a comment on every chapter to spend less time derping and more time writing. Thank you. Skully out.
Novel idea is rather good, an enjoyable read. I'm pretty much a fan and I hope you're able to update more each day. Like the others, some grammatical here and there but it seems like your first work. Good job! I hope your writing skills improve throughout the story!
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It's easy to read, I don't really know about grammar or such things so I can't really tell if it was bad or good.. sorry for that :D But what I can tell is, that you put a lot of work in writing in it.. so please continue your good work :)
The story line seems okay, it's really hard to read due to the numerous grammar mistakes but those can be solved easily. I was confused at the flashback as I did not really know what was happening. Also, it would be nice to have a clear example of the currency, what are moon coins in pounds or yen? Apart from that, it seems to be thought out and there is clearly effort put in here, good job!
Revelar spoiler
Hey there! Good day for writing! If you wanted to see whether you can get paid by distributing the current work or getting financial support by writing new work, you might want to contact geekyteddyyo@gmail.com. A brief introduction, some sample chapters or links will be appreciated when reaching out.