Absolute Strengthening Technique

LV 6

Hentai_Senchou

I don't want your stories rating to drop so I won't rate lower but you write in a way that makes it impossible for anyone that hasn't read the original to understand what's going on. You introduce people and things like everyone reading already knows who/what they are, like "I went to her inn," who's inn? How did he know about it? We get no info and the MC just walks around like everyone knows whats going on

5yr 12

LV 5

Pripriri

Im getting angry always. i can't understand. He is fucking cultivating but why the **** he is not improving at all? What's the point of those idiotic skills .. Generic cultivation novels really sucks. Haixt. This novel really is not my forte really annoying to read. For **** sake all those cheats of him and lucky encounter of some treasures he is still fucking martial king. And there's no goal for mc for getting stronger but he is weak spot so. And there's no fucking action at all.. All author do is make mc have sex and make mc acts like beta male. Being scared on girls all the time.. Always under On girls acting a dick. I'm reading coz I want to enjoy reading not to get annoyed everytime haixt.. What a waste of time.. I advice those people that don't like a generic idiot novel better not read this. It will just make you mad reading this **** I'm done 🤒🤒

5yr 12

LV 4

The_Paragon_White

This was a good beginning of the story, I hope the fanfic does not have the thousands of mistakes MC made in the original story😶🤠😴☺️😫😴😃😎😴😇☺️😋😂😊😀😊😇😂🤠😃😎😂😏😴😃😀😂😯😎😊🤠

5yr 10

LV 13

Dragonrage7

More chapters please 👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍🤤👍👍🤤👍👍 thanks for the great start

5yr 5

LV 12

Silent_Moon

This Novel is Great! A Masterpiece! Read it if you like Massive Harem! Read it if you like Lemons! Read it if you like OP MC! You know, What? Just freaking read this novel and rate it 5 stars!

5yr 4

LV 15

cazem11

The story itself is that of a fanfic, but the original is far better in terms of character devlopement and story. this seems like a sloppy rework of an already good story. if you want to read anything related to this just read the original. the only reason this book has 4 stars is simply because of all the bots that are boosting it. honestly all in all dont bother with this book, its very underwelming could have been 1000× better if some thought was actually put into it.

5yr 3

LV 4

slowburns012

well so sad there's a alot of negative feedback on the readers i hope u will improve ur grammar and you need to improve the mc behaviour because we dont like his personality.

5yr 3

LV 5

Kepoimmortal

😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍

5yr 3

LV 4

Kurosis

very nice story and this is a good example of lemons done right S*E*X is introduced naturally doesn't feel forced at all but as i said its the story that captivates the reader not the magic ;) ty for taking the time to write this plz don't drop ill gladly read to the end

5yr 3

LV 4

MagikLord

Good story. Good girls. Good language. Three good qualities, what else is needed? Just read, you will enjoy it. Give us more chapters! Give us more chapters! Give us more chapters!

5yr 2

LV 5

Dragonray

Good start to the novel, there are times where the flow of the story is weird. There are alot of jumps in the story were it suddenly changes and we miss a bit of the story. Overall good read. Just need more consistent releases if it wants to break into the higher tiers of ranking.

5yr 2

LV 7

Aishiya007

Giving 5 star just make sure that my kids were all alive please, can I talk to them at least once please???????????????????????????????????????

5yr 2

LV 4

matja1

I think that this novel is probably going to be one of the best that I have read as long as you keep working on it and update more chapters ----------------------------------------------------------------------------

5yr 2

LV 14

BlankVicky

Hindi songs - gullyboy: movie कौन बोला मुझसे न हो पायेगा? कौन बोला? कौन बोला? अपना time आएगा उठ जा अपनी राख से तू उड़ जा अब तलाश में परवाज़ देख परवाने की अासमां भी सर उठाएगा आएगा, अपना time आएगा मेरे जैसा शाणा लाला तुझे न मिल पायेगा ये शब्दों का ज्वाला मेरी बेड़ियाँ पिघलायेगा जितना तूने बोया है तू उतना ही तो खायेगा ऐसा मेरा ख्वाब है जो डर को भी सताएगा जिंदा मेरा ख्वाब अब कैसे तू दफानायेगा अब हौसले से जीने दे अब खौफ नहीं है सीने में हर रास्ते को चीरेंगे हम कामयाबी छीनेंगे सब कुछ मिला पसीने से मतलब बना अब जीने में क्यूँ? क्यूंकि अपना time आएगा तू नंगा ही तो आया है क्या घंटा लेकर जाएगा अपना time आएगा अपना time आएगा अपना time आएगा तू नंगा ही तो आया है क्या घंटा लेकर जाएगा अपना time आएगा अपना time आएगा अपना time आएगा तू नंगा ही तो आया है क्या घंटा लेकर... किसी का हाथ नहीं था सर पर यहाँ पर आया खुदकी मेहनत से मैं जितनी ताकत किस्मत में नहीं उतनी रहमत में है फिर भी लड़का सहमत नहीं है क्यूंकि हैरत नहीं है जरुरत यहाँ मर्ज़ी की और जुर्रत की है ताकत की है, आफत की, हिमाकत की, इबादत की अदालत ये है चाहत की मोहब्बत की, अमानत की जीतने की अब आदत की ये शोहरत की अब लालच नहीं है तेरे भाई जैसा कोई hard'इच नहीं है (Hard, hard, hard, hard, hard) इस हरकत ने ही बरकत दी है क्यूँ? क्यूंकि अपना time आएगा तू नंगा ही तो आया है क्या घंटा लेकर जाएगा अपना time आएगा अपना time आएगा अपना time आएगा तू नंगा ही तो आया है क्या घंटा लेकर जाएगा अपना time आएगा अपना time आएगा अपना time आएगा तू नंगा ही तो आया है क्या घंटा लेकर जाएगा कल नंगा ही तो आया था क्या तू घंटा लेकर जाएगा अपना time आएगा अपना time आएगा अपना time आएगा ना? तू नंगा ही तो जाएगा ना? Translate to English Who will not be able to talk to me? Who said? Who said? Your time will come Get up from your ashes You fly now looking See license Will also lift the heads Will come, your time will come You will not be able to find Shani Lala like me These flames will melt my foes You will eat as much as you have sown It's my dream to persecute fear My dream alive now how will you bury Now live freshly Cheer no longer Will break every path We will snatch success Everything got sweat Make sense now live Why? Because your time will come You are naked What will take hours Your time will come Your time will come Your time will come You are naked What will take hours Your time will come Your time will come Your time will come You are naked What time does the ... No one's hand was on the head I came here with my own hard work The power is not destined Is so in love Still the boy does not agree As it is not surprising Needed and forced to do the same here It is of strength, of distress, of snow-water, of worship The court is wishing Of love Wanted to win now This fame is no longer greed There is no hard 'like it is your brother (Hard, hard, hard, hard, hard) This action has only begun Why? Because your time will come You are naked What will take hours Your time will come Your time will come Your time will come You are naked What will take hours Your time will come Your time will come Your time will come You are naked What will take hours Yesterday came only naked Will you take the hour Your time will come Your time will come Will your time come? You will be naked, will not you?

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5yr 2

LV 14

BlankVicky

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5yr 2

LV 4

Xavier_Kaito

This is a good fanfic Same at a time but different at another time. Very good the novel recommends to everyone to follow, you will not regret it.

5yr 2

LV 14

KxV09

More frequent updates otherwise 5 star ............... ............... ............... ............... ............... ............... ............... .............. ............... ............... ............... ..............

5yr 2