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The story in interesting and although it needs some corection, the plot actually has a spark. Would love to read more. please keep it up. :)
The storry seems getting intersting as it continues with more chapters. I can already forsee fhe challenges coming for the two kids! Good luck, way to go!
Good luck on the progress of this story. The story looks to have a good plot and having a smooth flow so far. I wish it would get the attention of the readers.
Hi! This is kera, an editor of the international writing contest SWA II. I believe your book has great potential, so I invited you to join in a week ago. Please reply to me so I can discuss this with you in detail.
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The story in interesting and although it needs some corection, the plot actually has a spark. Would love to read more. please keep it up. :)
The storry seems getting intersting as it continues with more chapters. I can already forsee fhe challenges coming for the two kids! Good luck, way to go!
Good luck on the progress of this story. The story looks to have a good plot and having a smooth flow so far. I wish it would get the attention of the readers.
Hi! This is kera, an editor of the international writing contest SWA II. I believe your book has great potential, so I invited you to join in a week ago. Please reply to me so I can discuss this with you in detail.